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After the Kiss: Chapters 33 to 35 Playing with Fire
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Tina – Nice to meet you too, Shane.
Shane leaves not before a couple of girls stop her at the door and talk to her for a moment.
The producer watches her with amusement.
Tina – Wow! How old is she?
Alice – She is twenty.
Tina – She looks sixteen … and already a heartthrob!
She chuckles.
Alice – Girls love her! And apparently, she likes you.
Tina shakes her head dismissively.
Tina – She is just a kid!
Alice – And you are what? Forty-five? With this baby face, you could pass for twenty-two easily.
Tina – Well, I’m not! I’m twenty-six.
Alice – You beat me by a year. And Bette is our mama.
Tina – I would never have guessed that she was four years older than me. I thought she was my age.
Alice – I was fresh out of college when I first met her. She was dressed in this fancy white suit and looked at me like I was fifteen. I felt like I was twelve and having my first crush.
The producer chuckles.
Tina – I didn’t feel much different than you when I first met her …
She bites her lip in thought.
Tina – … but she definitely didn’t look at me like I was fifteen.
Alice – Nope … she was in luuuust …
Tina grins.
Tina – So, what is her story with Shane?
Alice – Oh … that was a year ago when we first met Shane …
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Flashback, lesbian nightclub, night: Bette and Alice are talking while a beautiful girl sitting next to Bette looks bored and upset. She glances at the crowd and spots Shane at the bar. She stands up and walks over to Shane, smiling sensually and inviting her to dance. Shane follows her to the dance floor.
Alice’s voice over – “This wanna-be actress that Bette was dating … Melissa … tried to make her jealous by dancing with Shane.”
Tina’s voice – “And?”
Alice’s voice – “Bette and I were talking about an art show and Bette could care less about what Melissa was doing.”
Shane and Melissa are dancing together. The actress is hugging the hairdresser tightly around the neck. Alice looks in their direction and calls Bette’s attention. The gallery owner turns to look and rolls her eyes … and continues talking to Alice.
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Happy Holidays dbff!!!
I am happy you already did the rewrite, it would be very sad if you let your inspiration freeze by Gen Q.
I truly enjoy this rewrite!
Shane! Great way to introduce her :-) Meg is right, Tina is full of love and adopts Shane right away as her little sister. I love how you put the gang together one by one. Btw I can’t remember if the show ever explained how Shane became Bette’s friend. Did they ever?
Tina is spending quite some time at Bette’s house. Nice how T + B seem to get closer naturally. “..and this is our bedroom.” Too cute!
Happy Holidays to you too and thanks for posting. Do you really only have 7 ch left? Oh I’d wish you had more. Or another story in the making. I really like your story ideas!
Merry Christmas! and Thank you for the update!
I agree about Gec Q – i’m not watching but sometimes after their “news” i have a hard time even read Tibette’s story. And i may only guess how hard and uninspirid it can be for writers, who tried to write Tibette’s stories.
Sad.
I like that Tina is making friends with Shane. I am beginning to see Tina as a good judge of people. She sees the positive attributes in people and possibly the potential in individuals. I just hope that Bette will learn some of this as well.
Peter Pan – that was a hilarious reference. Its very hard to write humor. But this was good…
Thanks for this chapter…. Happy Christmas.
This is the times that we NEED these stories the most. Keep hope alive & so much praise and gratitude to the writers who continue with their efforts.
dbff,
listen to YOUR 4evah fans bc we KNOW a classy Author when we read her words!!
Frickin’ Bette is too damn funny when it comes to Tina…especially in a bar!! She soon as burn a whole in anybody with a “lazor look” and not give 2 flips who has to parish!!! HeHeHe!!!!!
She ain’t likely to apologize about her alpha-ness when Tina is being pursued. Tho I think she may convince her to cut Shane some slack.
Tina knows all she has to do is tell Bette to “c’mere” with a soft southern drawl and she’ll settle down immediately.
Hi,
So happy to see rewrite complete before the cold water of the new Show!
Loving this and hope you will continue writing to rectify the new show as it unwinds.
Thanks for the post, have I mentioned how much I love this Story?:-)
SG
dbff
Keep reading! I think you can make the story longer than seven chapters, but if you start a new one that is good too. Enjoy all your stories…
Meant to say “Keep writing” not keep reading…. :)
“The producer pouts looking at Bette.
Tina – You didn’t save anything for me …?
Bette – I saved love for you.”
Now that’s one of the loveliest answer I ever read in a fanfiction ! Simply lovely…
I always felt that our dearest Bette was deeply a romantic nature but her numerous emotional scars never let her feel safe enough to take the risk to love someone – until her soulmate appear in her life, Tina.
Bette is so the opposite of Shane, who is the only true womanizer and player of the gang.
She just didn’t believe in love because of her family, that’s all.
Great chapter again, I love your story so much !!
Faithfully yours – A.