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After the Kiss: Chapters 33 to 35 Playing with Fire
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Lesbian nightclub, night: Alice’s eyes are glued to Cindy’s every movement. Tina rolls her eyes and scans the crowd. She spots a beautiful brunette nearby and touches Alice’s arm, discretely pointing to the girl.
Tina – What about that one? She is hot too!
Alice – Uh?
She turns to look.
Alice – Oh … the brunette standing next to the column?
She shakes her head in disapproval.
Alice – Bette fucked her a couple of years ago and she is still not over your girlfriend!
Tina turns to her with wide eyes.
Tina – Is there anyone here that Bette hasn’t fucked?
Alice smirks.
Alice – Not if she is hot … and that includes the two of us!
The producer sighs frustrated and checks the beautiful brunette next to the column with curiosity.
Alice – Except for Cindy …
Alice turns to watch Cindy again with puppy eyes.
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Lesbian nightclub, night: Tina is alone at her table. She is staring at the dance floor where Alice and Cindy are dancing. She shakes her head and glances around. A blonde femme walks over to her table.
Woman – Hi, would you like to have a drink?
The producer smiles and shakes her head, pointing to the beer on the table.
Tina – No, thanks! I’m good.
The woman smiles back.
Woman – Well … let me know if you need one.
She winks and walks away.
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Lesbian nightclub, night: Tina is still alone at the table when another woman approaches her, the blonde butch who flirted with her the first time she and Bette went to the club. She stands next to Tina’s chair.
Butch – I wondered when I would see you again.
The producer looks up and recognizes her.
Tina – Oh … hi!
Butch – Hi!
She smiles seductively.
Butch – Have you dumped your girlfriend yet?
Tina chuckles.
Tina – No, I’m still with her.
The butch looks around.
Butch – And she is still leaving you alone.
Tina – I can take care of myself.
Butch – I’m sure you can … (pause) But you must be bored. Would you care to dance?
The producer smiles apologetically.
Tina – That, I can’t.
The butch nods with a flirtatious smile.
Butch – Just trying … Take care, beauty!
Tina – You too!
The butch leaves and Tina chuckles to herself.
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Lesbian nightclub, night: Tina is still alone at the table when Shane walks by with a girl by her side.
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Happy Holidays dbff!!!
I am happy you already did the rewrite, it would be very sad if you let your inspiration freeze by Gen Q.
I truly enjoy this rewrite!
Shane! Great way to introduce her :-) Meg is right, Tina is full of love and adopts Shane right away as her little sister. I love how you put the gang together one by one. Btw I can’t remember if the show ever explained how Shane became Bette’s friend. Did they ever?
Tina is spending quite some time at Bette’s house. Nice how T + B seem to get closer naturally. “..and this is our bedroom.” Too cute!
Happy Holidays to you too and thanks for posting. Do you really only have 7 ch left? Oh I’d wish you had more. Or another story in the making. I really like your story ideas!
Merry Christmas! and Thank you for the update!
I agree about Gec Q – i’m not watching but sometimes after their “news” i have a hard time even read Tibette’s story. And i may only guess how hard and uninspirid it can be for writers, who tried to write Tibette’s stories.
Sad.
I like that Tina is making friends with Shane. I am beginning to see Tina as a good judge of people. She sees the positive attributes in people and possibly the potential in individuals. I just hope that Bette will learn some of this as well.
Peter Pan – that was a hilarious reference. Its very hard to write humor. But this was good…
Thanks for this chapter…. Happy Christmas.
This is the times that we NEED these stories the most. Keep hope alive & so much praise and gratitude to the writers who continue with their efforts.
dbff,
listen to YOUR 4evah fans bc we KNOW a classy Author when we read her words!!
Frickin’ Bette is too damn funny when it comes to Tina…especially in a bar!! She soon as burn a whole in anybody with a “lazor look” and not give 2 flips who has to parish!!! HeHeHe!!!!!
She ain’t likely to apologize about her alpha-ness when Tina is being pursued. Tho I think she may convince her to cut Shane some slack.
Tina knows all she has to do is tell Bette to “c’mere” with a soft southern drawl and she’ll settle down immediately.
Hi,
So happy to see rewrite complete before the cold water of the new Show!
Loving this and hope you will continue writing to rectify the new show as it unwinds.
Thanks for the post, have I mentioned how much I love this Story?:-)
SG
dbff
Keep reading! I think you can make the story longer than seven chapters, but if you start a new one that is good too. Enjoy all your stories…
Meant to say “Keep writing” not keep reading…. :)
“The producer pouts looking at Bette.
Tina – You didn’t save anything for me …?
Bette – I saved love for you.”
Now that’s one of the loveliest answer I ever read in a fanfiction ! Simply lovely…
I always felt that our dearest Bette was deeply a romantic nature but her numerous emotional scars never let her feel safe enough to take the risk to love someone – until her soulmate appear in her life, Tina.
Bette is so the opposite of Shane, who is the only true womanizer and player of the gang.
She just didn’t believe in love because of her family, that’s all.
Great chapter again, I love your story so much !!
Faithfully yours – A.