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After the Kiss: Chapters 33 to 35 Playing with Fire
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Tina – It is a form of art.
Shane – And my boss told me that if I get my GED, he will promote me to full-time.
Tina – That’s great, Shane!
Another girl stops by and interrupts them.
Girl 2 – Hey, let’s dance, Shane!
Shane – Uh … not right now, thanks!
The girl speaks seductively and strokes Shane’s hair.
Girl 2 – I’ll be waiting …
She leaves. Tina smiles amused.
Tina – They don’t leave you alone, do they?
Shane sighs a little embarrassed.
Shane – Only when I’m dancing.
Tina – Let’s dance then!
Shane looks apprehensive.
Shane – Uh … are you sure?
Tina – Yeah … I’m kind of tired of sitting here all night.
She stands up and chuckles.
Tina – And we can continue talking without interruptions from your fans.
Shane – Are you sure Bette won’t mind?
Tina – No, don’t worry.
She grabs Shane’s hand and pulls her to the dance floor.
Tina – Let’s go!
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“Chocolate cake” by Paloma starts playing.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BL4Hwy-kuLQ
Lesbian nightclub, night: Alice and Cindy are seated at the table watching as Tina and Shane dance.
Alice shakes her head.
Alice – Bette would so not like it!
Bette enters the nightclub and glances at the crowd. She spots Alice and Cindy together and looks puzzled. She walks over to their table.
Bette – Hi guys!
Alice – Bette!
Cindy – Hi!
Alice – I thought you wouldn’t come!
Bette – Tina is here, right?
Alice looks concerned.
Alice – Yes.
The gallery owner glances at the crowd.
Bette – Where is she? Did she go to the restroom?
Alice raises her eyebrows and points to the dance floor with her eyes. Bette looks in that direction and spots Tina and Shane dancing. She raises her eyebrows in surprise and turns back to Alice with an inquisitive look.
Alice – Don’t look at me! I have nothing to do with it.
The brunette looks annoyed.
Alice – C’mon, Tina sees her as a kid!
Bette – She is a kid! And she is starting to get on my nerves with her audacity!
Alice – She is not afraid of anyone … but she is afraid of you.
Bette purses her lips irritated.
Bette – She better be … because she is playing with fire.
She heads to the dancefloor.
Alice – Don’t do anything that I wouldn’t do!
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“Chocolate cake” by Paloma continues to play.
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Happy Holidays dbff!!!
I am happy you already did the rewrite, it would be very sad if you let your inspiration freeze by Gen Q.
I truly enjoy this rewrite!
Shane! Great way to introduce her :-) Meg is right, Tina is full of love and adopts Shane right away as her little sister. I love how you put the gang together one by one. Btw I can’t remember if the show ever explained how Shane became Bette’s friend. Did they ever?
Tina is spending quite some time at Bette’s house. Nice how T + B seem to get closer naturally. “..and this is our bedroom.” Too cute!
Happy Holidays to you too and thanks for posting. Do you really only have 7 ch left? Oh I’d wish you had more. Or another story in the making. I really like your story ideas!
Merry Christmas! and Thank you for the update!
I agree about Gec Q – i’m not watching but sometimes after their “news” i have a hard time even read Tibette’s story. And i may only guess how hard and uninspirid it can be for writers, who tried to write Tibette’s stories.
Sad.
I like that Tina is making friends with Shane. I am beginning to see Tina as a good judge of people. She sees the positive attributes in people and possibly the potential in individuals. I just hope that Bette will learn some of this as well.
Peter Pan – that was a hilarious reference. Its very hard to write humor. But this was good…
Thanks for this chapter…. Happy Christmas.
This is the times that we NEED these stories the most. Keep hope alive & so much praise and gratitude to the writers who continue with their efforts.
dbff,
listen to YOUR 4evah fans bc we KNOW a classy Author when we read her words!!
Frickin’ Bette is too damn funny when it comes to Tina…especially in a bar!! She soon as burn a whole in anybody with a “lazor look” and not give 2 flips who has to parish!!! HeHeHe!!!!!
She ain’t likely to apologize about her alpha-ness when Tina is being pursued. Tho I think she may convince her to cut Shane some slack.
Tina knows all she has to do is tell Bette to “c’mere” with a soft southern drawl and she’ll settle down immediately.
Hi,
So happy to see rewrite complete before the cold water of the new Show!
Loving this and hope you will continue writing to rectify the new show as it unwinds.
Thanks for the post, have I mentioned how much I love this Story?:-)
SG
dbff
Keep reading! I think you can make the story longer than seven chapters, but if you start a new one that is good too. Enjoy all your stories…
Meant to say “Keep writing” not keep reading…. :)
“The producer pouts looking at Bette.
Tina – You didn’t save anything for me …?
Bette – I saved love for you.”
Now that’s one of the loveliest answer I ever read in a fanfiction ! Simply lovely…
I always felt that our dearest Bette was deeply a romantic nature but her numerous emotional scars never let her feel safe enough to take the risk to love someone – until her soulmate appear in her life, Tina.
Bette is so the opposite of Shane, who is the only true womanizer and player of the gang.
She just didn’t believe in love because of her family, that’s all.
Great chapter again, I love your story so much !!
Faithfully yours – A.