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A TiBette Love Story: Second Serving (15)
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Tina smiled at Bette’s sincere reaction. “I know. It’s okay.”
Bette looked relieved and Tina smiled at the brunette’s expression. ‘I have to tell her’ Tina instructed herself.
“Bette?”
“Yes, Tina?”
“There’s something I have to tell you…”
“Okay…”
“Well, first of all, thank you for this amazing date. I am having the best time.”
“As am I.”
“But…”
‘Oh no…here comes the but…’ Bette thought.
“I’m…I’m not exactly who you think I am.”
Bette had a sly smile on her face. “You’re not Tina Kennard?”
“No, I am but…” Tina could not get her brain to function properly and get the words out of her mouth. She shyly looked away from Bette and nervously ran her fingers through her blonde hair.
Bette noticed Tina’s apprehension and gazed at her with a concerned but warm expression. “Help me out here because I’m not exactly following you, Tina.”
The nerves were building exponentially as Tina faced Bette and stammered, “Well you…you’re…you are…”
“Bette?”
“And I’m…you know, I am…”
“Tina?”
Tina does not know how to find the right words. “I’ve never…this is all new to me.”
Bette was perplexed. “Being on a luxury yacht?”
“No…I mean yes…” Tina was becoming visibly flustered. “This is my first time on a yacht but that’s not what I was talking about.”
“Okay…” Bette waited patiently for Tina to continue.
“When I’m with you, I can’t focus on anything else. I just can’t…I can’t think straight.”
“I know exactly how you feel.” Bette said with a sigh of relief. It was nice to hear Tina verbalize what she had been feeling all along.
“No Bette…I mean…I’m…I am…” Tina released a frustrated sigh at her inability to speak her thought and lowered her head to examine the deck floor.
“Tina.” Bette gently placed her hand on the blonde’s shoulder, causing Tina to look up. Bette gazed into those hazel eyes and spoke with such gentleness. “Whatever it is, you can tell me. You’re what? An extra-terrestrial? I’m fine with that…E.T. is one of my classic favorites.”
Tina tried to smile knowing Bette was trying to lighten the moment and make things easier for her. “What I feel when I’m with you…it overwhelms me.”
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Yeah! Seven pages and lots of kissing! All I wanted! Thank you very much! =D
How can you top dessert now… wow… beautiful kiss… i think dessert should be hot and cold… like baked alaska… hot…pps
You doing a great job with the progression of this story. Can’t wait for your next post.
Hey LuvTi, writing you back on my last night in the middle of the desert. You are sick? Uh oh…that can’t be good. Must have been the dessert, harhar. Maybe Nurse Kennard can help, but she’s busy with a VIP patient named Bette Porter. Dessert looks…hmmm, promising! Get well soon because I really need another chappy!PPVS.
Well we got a kiss before dessert. Even better! Now on with dessert please. This is a great date! Thanks for posting!
how fun to have found an update from you…loved it…and i agree with mbe, you are really progressing this story nicely…sexy, believable, exciting…
Gah – as much as I’m glad Tina was straight (so to speak) with Bette, all this anticipation is killing me. The kiss left them (and me) wanting more…phew. Talk about hot! Loved this as always – thanks for making my day!
ok now I am just going out to by brownies….
Holy mackerel!!! Okay, ignore PM, cause this is WAY WAY WAY better!!!!! Somewhat came together? How about totally, completely, and perfectly came together! Can’t wait for the next step…thank you!!!
Looking forward to more! PPS
Oh my goodness. You have got a real talent for writing! I was really blown away with the intensity of emotions you developed. Thanks so much for an amazing chapter. It’s so nice to read something like that, maybe it will cure me? lol. I wish it worked that way. As soon as I am up to it, I will post again. Wow, really though. Excellent writing! Thanks for posting!
so would that be dessert or ‘dessert’. wink wink.
I love it!!! Thank you PPS
Thank you! :o) This was an excellent,adorable and humorous chapter! *wink*
God this is too much fun!Terrific job – as you were.
Great story. Looking forward to more.
A wonderful pre-dessert… ;-)
Thanks Luv – found the key – have made myself comfortable and read the update. Wonderful as always and so tender and sweet as well. So love how you wrote of them telling each other what they were feeling. I have told you that I love this story right :) So where’s that homemade pie and i hope you’ve gotten out of that writer’s block you had cause I’m here to stay at least till the end of June :)Thank you again for this story!
oh hoh! U r a great tease…dessert is still to come??? Bring it on! That by the way, was great, riveting in fact!!
now could we really have the dessert??? :)i love the flirtatious banter between the two. i cant blame tina…who could resist the charms of a bette porter? go gay for bette! :)
Oh yeah, after that kiss, I definitely wanna be dessert.
Hi there! I’ve been a silent reader for a while but just wanted to say that I’m totally LOVING this story! I love the banter and the flirting between them. Thanks so much for sharing this and PPS!!! :)
OK Luv, your answer to this question, “what do YOU suggest for dessert??”, my suggestion for dessert would be: 1. ice cubes2. strawberries & creamAnd just in case, a defibrillator. AWESOME post, Luv. I love it. I am SOOOOOO jealous of them. My heart is racing like crazy. WOW. Please don’t keep me waiting too long for the next post.
The ol’ nurse trick huh, that old chestnut :P Awesome chapter, you know how much I love a bit of tension and suspense ;) And I’m not too low down on the list! Crazy… Glad you finally got rid of that writer’s block :) I guess having a cold does wonders for ya. Keep em’ comin! (I am of course expecting 81 chapters from you too) xox
That was wonderful and sweet!