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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 28
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“Let’s get out of here.” Bette says and takes Tina’s hand and guides her up to their room.
They take a seat on the sofa. Tina leans into Bette who put her arm around Tina.
“I think you need to do this Tina.” Bette says.
“Do what?” Tina asks.
“Talk to your sister. Tomorrow, you take the car and meet with your sister.” Bette says.
“What about you, I want to be with you on the course.” Tina says.
“I’ll be okay. This is more important. Family is more important than me playing golf.” Bette says and strokes Tina’s hair softly.
“A part of me thought that I would never see them again. I’ve actually missed Sarah most. And off course my older brother. We were so close. I don’t think he’ll come around any time soon.” Tina says.
“Give them time Tee.” Bette replies.
There is a knock on the door. Bette raises up and walks over and opens.
“Hi Lara.” Bette says. “Come in.” She continues.
“Hey. So I walked the course again and if you play like you did today, you will qualify. I’m sure of it. It’s like you knew how these notes would be like.” Lara smiles.
“Yeah, well you know” Bette laughs. Lara looks over at Tina and sees that she walked into something.
“Did I walk in on something?” Lara asks looking at Bette.
“No, it’s okay.” Bette replies.
Tina stands up and walks over to them.
“Do you have Sarah’s cell phone number?” Tina asks softly.
“Yeah, sure.” Lara says. “Do you have a pen?” Lara asks.
Tina turns around and gets a pen and a piece of paper from the table.
“Here.” Tina says and gives it to her.
Lara writes down the number and her number at her on campus apartment.
“Thank you.” Tina says and walks into the bathroom.
Lara looks at Bette.
“She’ll be okay. I told her to contact her tomorrow while we’re out on the course.” Bette says.
“I thought you needed her there?” Lara asks.
“I do, but this is more important. Family is more important than a game of golf. And Tina is more important to me, she comes first.” Bette says and looks at Lara, who smiles.
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Hey Lauren, glad you’re back. I’ve missed this story the last few days. Another wonderful chapter, I hope that Tina and her sister find some common ground.
It hurts to be rejected by your family. some times one person can make a differents. Sarah might be the one.. Thanks
don’t stop here. i’m anxious to read about the reunion. great story Lauren, please continue soon.
THanks so much for getting Tina back with her sister. This is so loving and then maybe golf??? THansk
WONDERFUL CHAPTER…HOPE ALL GOES WELL.PLEASE POST SOON..THANKS
Bette is right family is important and i´m glad she put Tina in the first base in her life i hope Tina and her sis could be able to make it trought so as with her parents..i love that Bette have i said that before???..lol..thanks Lauren i hope see another chappy later :o)
Freaking Fantastic
“I hope you enjoy”, you said ? Well, that’s a pretty euphemism !
For me, I never stopped to LOVE your story, Lauren, and I only hope you’ll keep it for a looooong time ! ^_^
Your Bette and Tina are so engaging through your gifted pen, and the deep tenderness and loyalty of their relationship is something that touched me a lot.
Now, as always, I’m already waiting for the next chapter !
Thank you !!
… oh, by the way, I forgot : I hope you spent a great time on camping trip ! ^_^
WOW! Thank you Lauren I’m still catching up but I Love it still Awesome Story Please post soon.
Hope you had a great time on your trip. Go Wolfpack!!
i’m so glad the sisters are meeting… and i know things will go well.. keep up the good work.. i love this story… please continue
K
Great chapter. HOpe all goes well. Can’t wait for more.
missed your writing but hope your trip went well. Nice chapter and i can’t wait for more
Lauren, glad you enjoyed your trip. I think it’s a prerequisite for all dorms to be small..lol. Really enjoyed this chapter. Bette puts Tina before golf and Tina needs Bette for reestablishing her relationship with Sarah. Thanks..please continue.
I’m glad you had a good trip. Are you excited about school to start? When do you actually move to campus? And when do your classes start? I need to know so that I will be able to handle you possibly not posting as often as you do. I love your story and I hope you will continue with it even when life gets busier.
haven’t been through such situation to understand how things unfold, however, it’s nice to be walk through it and watch how things go. thanks for the update.
And you are stopping here you bastard….Ohhh god I want more. We were just getting to the good part where Tina and Sarah start talking. Wonderful update and story Lauren. Keep going. Post soon
I keep visualizing Bette, my eyes follow her long legs, clad in white slacks, down to her the brown and white saddle cleats.
She has on a white visor to complete the look. And a short-sleeved buttoned up blouse, tastefully left open to show her healthily tanned skin. I’ll let you choose the blouse color. After all, it is your story…Ha!
What were we talking about?
Oh, the story…hope the parents take advantage of the close proximity and meet with Tina. They have a gorgeous future daughter-in-law. Plus, she’s loaded. She might buy them an Avis dealership.
My mind is evil…
Good chapter. Oh this is very hard for Tina and glad that Bette there with her. Please post soon, thanks!