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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 28
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Chapter 28
Later that night in the hotel restaurant.
Bette and Tina are having dinner alone. Lara had volunteered to go the course one more time to take more specific notes.
“Bette?” Tina starts.
“Yeah.” Bette replies looking at Tina.
“I am so proud of you, I didn’t get the chance to tell you earlier.” Tina says.
“Thank you Tee.” Bette replies and takes Tina’s hand in hers. “I couldn’t have done it without you. But it’s tomorrow and Saturday left. I haven’t qualified yet.” Bette says.
“I know, but you never gave up, after the doctor told you that you would never play golf again. You kept going. You kept your strength and showed a determination that I envy you.” Tina says. “And still with all these things on your mind, working like crazy to get back into this game. You still had time for me.” Tina says and looks at Bette with tears threatening to come out.
“Tee, I will always have time for you. You are the most important thing in my life. You come first. Golf come second. And that will never change.” Bette says and smiles at Tina.
“I love you.” Tina says and smiles back.
“I love you too.” Bette replies.
The food arrives and the eat in a comfortable silence. Glancing up at each other.
After dinner Bette wanted dessert, so she ordered a blueberry pie with whipped cream. Tina didn’t want anything.
“Tina? What are you going to do about your sister?” Bette asks carefully.
Tina looks away and out the window.
“I don’t know.” Tina replies.
“It’s only
“I don’t think I’m ready.” Tina says becoming a little sad.
“I’m not talking about meeting your parents, only Sarah. She might be the ticket back in.” Bette says, trying to convince Tina to talk to her sister.
“I shouldn’t need a ticket back in, in the first place.” Tina replies.
“I know that, but I saw your face when you looked at your sister. You wanted to throw your arms around her too. Didn’t you?” Bette says.
Tina doesn’t answer right away.
“She has gotten so big.” Tina says and a tear find its way down her cheek.
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Hey Lauren, glad you’re back. I’ve missed this story the last few days. Another wonderful chapter, I hope that Tina and her sister find some common ground.
It hurts to be rejected by your family. some times one person can make a differents. Sarah might be the one.. Thanks
don’t stop here. i’m anxious to read about the reunion. great story Lauren, please continue soon.
THanks so much for getting Tina back with her sister. This is so loving and then maybe golf??? THansk
WONDERFUL CHAPTER…HOPE ALL GOES WELL.PLEASE POST SOON..THANKS
Bette is right family is important and i´m glad she put Tina in the first base in her life i hope Tina and her sis could be able to make it trought so as with her parents..i love that Bette have i said that before???..lol..thanks Lauren i hope see another chappy later :o)
Freaking Fantastic
“I hope you enjoy”, you said ? Well, that’s a pretty euphemism !
For me, I never stopped to LOVE your story, Lauren, and I only hope you’ll keep it for a looooong time ! ^_^
Your Bette and Tina are so engaging through your gifted pen, and the deep tenderness and loyalty of their relationship is something that touched me a lot.
Now, as always, I’m already waiting for the next chapter !
Thank you !!
… oh, by the way, I forgot : I hope you spent a great time on camping trip ! ^_^
WOW! Thank you Lauren I’m still catching up but I Love it still Awesome Story Please post soon.
Hope you had a great time on your trip. Go Wolfpack!!
i’m so glad the sisters are meeting… and i know things will go well.. keep up the good work.. i love this story… please continue
K
Great chapter. HOpe all goes well. Can’t wait for more.
missed your writing but hope your trip went well. Nice chapter and i can’t wait for more
Lauren, glad you enjoyed your trip. I think it’s a prerequisite for all dorms to be small..lol. Really enjoyed this chapter. Bette puts Tina before golf and Tina needs Bette for reestablishing her relationship with Sarah. Thanks..please continue.
I’m glad you had a good trip. Are you excited about school to start? When do you actually move to campus? And when do your classes start? I need to know so that I will be able to handle you possibly not posting as often as you do. I love your story and I hope you will continue with it even when life gets busier.
haven’t been through such situation to understand how things unfold, however, it’s nice to be walk through it and watch how things go. thanks for the update.
And you are stopping here you bastard….Ohhh god I want more. We were just getting to the good part where Tina and Sarah start talking. Wonderful update and story Lauren. Keep going. Post soon
I keep visualizing Bette, my eyes follow her long legs, clad in white slacks, down to her the brown and white saddle cleats.
She has on a white visor to complete the look. And a short-sleeved buttoned up blouse, tastefully left open to show her healthily tanned skin. I’ll let you choose the blouse color. After all, it is your story…Ha!
What were we talking about?
Oh, the story…hope the parents take advantage of the close proximity and meet with Tina. They have a gorgeous future daughter-in-law. Plus, she’s loaded. She might buy them an Avis dealership.
My mind is evil…
Good chapter. Oh this is very hard for Tina and glad that Bette there with her. Please post soon, thanks!