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Taking the Long Way – (Chapter: 29: California Stars)
“Ok…Well I think we are going to stay out here tonight…..Yeah I think she had a good time at the concert.” She said winking at me. “Ok Dad. Love you too. Night” Ashley hung up the phone and then turned it off. “My Dad says hi and not to do anything he wouldn’t do….which leaves us pretty wide open to anything!”
I laughed. “So there is a house out here?”
“Yeah a small one up there.” She said pointing over to the cliff with the stairs I had seen earlier. “We can go up there if you want.”
“I kind of like it out here. It’s a warm night and I like the sound of the ocean.” I said pulling her into me. “Although a bonfire and some music would make it perfect.”
“Well I think those are two things we might be able to remedy” she whispered in my ear. “I happen to have a guitar in the trunk,” She said backing away to head back to the car.
“What about the fire? Do you have some wood and matches back there too?” I teased.
“Come on Carlin, you are a hick from the sticks I would think you could ‘rustle up’ some fire fixins’ from around here somewhere.” She said with a country twang in her voice.
“Ohhh, you better watch it city girl. If I catch you I am going to toss you into the ocean.” I said giving a half hearted sprint after her as she turned with a squeal to run to the car. I let her go and busied myself finding stuff for the fire. The full moon made the search easy and I found some dry grass for starter and an armload of driftwood. I dug out a spot in the sand and arranged the grass and some of the wood so it was ready to light. I didn’t have anything to light it with and I sure as hell didn’t want a fire enough to sit and rub two sticks together Survivor style. I jogged back to the car hoping that Ashley would have a lighter. She was sitting on the trunk tuning her guitar in.
“Hey, Ash…”
“Yii! Jesus, Spence you scared me.” Ashley yelped. She got up and backed away from me.
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OMG, this has to be the most awesome story on this site. Beautifully descriptive words that sends the reader over the edge, just as you have written: We had been pushing each other right to the edge and we need to feel the fall badly. SEXY HOT! I LOVE THIS STORY! Please, I beg of you, PMS!
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