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Taking the Long Way – (Chapter: 29: California Stars)
It felt good to let out that little burst of emotion. Ashley was laughing as I set her feet back down on the beach.
“So you are ok with everything.” Ashley said with a smile looking at me.
“Hmmm let me think…I just had the most amazing woman tell me that she loves me and I know I feel the same way. Yeah…I guess I am ok.” I replied as I wiped some small streaks of mascara left by tears off her cheeks.
“I don’t want tonight to end.” Ashley whispered wrapping her arms around me. I felt the same. I just wanted to sit with her underneath the California stars, on this beach for as long as I could. I didn’t want to sleep because waking up would mean the evening would be over. Not that I wasn’t looking forward to the days ahead of us, but a night like this only happens once in a life time for some people if they are so lucky. I didn’t want to waste a minute sleeping if I could be awake to revel in the euphoria.
“Is this your private beach?” I asked.
Ashley nodded. “Yeah, only my dad and his band members have the access code for the road and the cove protects it from beach access.”
“So there is really no chance of uhhh…’interruptions’ per say?” I asked with a smirk.
“Nope no chance at all. Dad and the boys are out on the strip tonight…what did you have in mind?” Ashley asked in a sultry voice. I think she full well knew what I had on my mind.
“Oh just a little of this.” I whispered gently sucking on her pulse point. “And a little of….” Ashley’s phone rang loudly and we both jumped. God damn our cell phones. They had unbelievable timing for killing a moment.
“So much for no chance of interruptions” she said laughing. She looked at her phone and then flipped it open.
“Hey Dad….Yeah we are fine…we are at the beach house.”
House? I looked around not seeing any houses. I peered harder through the darkness and faintly saw steps leading up the side of one the rock cliffs and into a grove of trees at one end of the beach. I assumed the steps lead to a house.
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OMG, this has to be the most awesome story on this site. Beautifully descriptive words that sends the reader over the edge, just as you have written: We had been pushing each other right to the edge and we need to feel the fall badly. SEXY HOT! I LOVE THIS STORY! Please, I beg of you, PMS!
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