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Taking the Long Way – (Chapter: 29: California Stars)
“Ok yeah. You are right. Pants off now.” She said between breaths. She rolled off of me and we both pushed our own jeans off. It was just going to be faster that way. We had been pushing each other right to the edge and we need to feel the fall badly.
Our hands reached each other at the same moment and we both gasped. She was so wet and I wanted inside her so badly but I hesitated, as did she. I looked at her.
“Same time?” I asked knowing this was her favorite way. She loved when we could get off at the same moment.
“Please.” She whispered.
I nodded. “Ready ,beautiful?”
“God, yes!” We entered each other at the same time. Her moans were my moans. My thrusts were her thrusts. Her caresses were my caresses. I leaned in and kissed her as we quickly worked in time together. The kiss quickly brought us to the beginning of what we wanted to feel so badly. Ashley pulled back a bit.
“I want to see you Spence.” She said quickly. I nodded and opened my eyes. In the past she would come just a bit before I would. Seeing the waves crash through her always brought mine following rapidly. Tonight I felt my self tensing at the exact same moment she did. Her eyes told me she knew the same.
“Oh God Spence its going to happen at the exact same time.” She breathed. I nodded not letting my eyes of hers. Then it happened. My eyes became exact mirror images of hers. Our gasps were the same, our screams were the same…our love was the same.
We let the waning ebbs of the orgasm course through us in silence. As our bodies relaxed we pulled out of each other the sensation making both of us jerk involuntarily.
“Jesus, Ash that was beyond incredible.” I said kissing her gently.
She smiled. “If I had known giving you guitar lessons would turn out like this, I would have started so much sooner.” I laughed.
“Ash, if I had known telling you I love you would turn out like this, I would have done that much sooner too.” I whispered seriously.
I saw tears forming and I pulled her in close to me. I would definitely give the world tonight just to dream a dream with her in our bed of California stars.
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OMG, this has to be the most awesome story on this site. Beautifully descriptive words that sends the reader over the edge, just as you have written: We had been pushing each other right to the edge and we need to feel the fall badly. SEXY HOT! I LOVE THIS STORY! Please, I beg of you, PMS!
That was great!
Great Update. Keep up the good work. I can’t wait for the next chapter. PMS real Soon.
OMG, this has to be the most awesome story on this site. Beautifully descriptive words that sends the reader over the edge, just as you have written: We had been pushing each other right to the edge and we need to feel the fall badly. SEXY HOT! I LOVE THIS STORY! Please, I beg of you, PMS!
That was great!
Great Update. Keep up the good work. I can’t wait for the next chapter. PMS real Soon.
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beautiful.
beautiful.
one hell of a guitar leason, perfect ending with the quote from the song…pms
one hell of a guitar leason, perfect ending with the quote from the song…pms
Damn I went to bed at 3am and it is 6:51am when do these people sleep lol….I love this story so much seriously love it love it love it. I always look up the song that people put in their story and let it play why i read it and i loved this. Not to mention hott. I am definately a fan of sex on the beach.
Damn I went to bed at 3am and it is 6:51am when do these people sleep lol….I love this story so much seriously love it love it love it. I always look up the song that people put in their story and let it play why i read it and i loved this. Not to mention hott. I am definately a fan of sex on the beach.
OMG so beautiful. I felt like crying. I love this. I really love this.
OMG so beautiful. I felt like crying. I love this. I really love this.
once again, i get SUPER excited at seeing this story posted, and once again… it does not disappoint… FANTASTIC and i can’t wait for the next one!!
once again, i get SUPER excited at seeing this story posted, and once again… it does not disappoint… FANTASTIC and i can’t wait for the next one!!
that was freaking hot, sensual, amzing and beautiful…i loved it….can’t wait to read more…pms….I LOVE THIS STORY
that was freaking hot, sensual, amzing and beautiful…i loved it….can’t wait to read more…pms….I LOVE THIS STORY
Damn it I’ve been playing guitar for 7 years now and that has never happened to me! PMS it was great
Damn it I’ve been playing guitar for 7 years now and that has never happened to me! PMS it was great