Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of . Age verification is required to proceed.
Never Break The Chain – (Chapter: PS: I Don’t Say Thanks)
It was cold and dark. The light drizzle of rain that had been falling had turned into a steady down pour. Everything seemed dimmer and tarnished, or maybe that was just her perception of things.
While she’d been standing here for over half an hour she had kept her hat pulled low and kept her sunglasses on even though it was night time in L.A.
She hadn’t thought to bring an umbrella or to go to the corner store and buy one either. She didn’t care if she was wet, didn’t care if she got sick.
Truth was she just didn’t care.
She wanted a cigarette but she’d used her last in New Mexico and she wasn’t about to ask any of the people loitering around the bus station for one. She didn’t want to talk to anyone.
She had been tempted to just walk off into the night but even in the state she was in she knew that was dangerous.
She hadn’t brought anything with her except her I.D. and her guitar. No money, no food, and plenty of regrets shadowing her every step.
She had made the phone call not expecting much of anything at all. Almost hoping that the number was disconnected or belonged to some one else. But it hadn’t and she’d had to ask for help. The words had been especially hard to get out.
But that was just the way she was..
She heard the sound of a car approaching and the slash of the headlights made her squint even behind her sunglasses.
She hated neon lights or whatever those really bright lights were on newer cars. They fucking blinded a person!
She squinted at the car.
Green.
Her favorite color.
Expensive and sleek.
A sexy car one she would have drooled over any other time.
It came to a stop abreast from her and the passenger window slid noiselessly down.
“Get in.”
She hesitated realizing for the first time that she wasn’t in any condition to get into the car soaking wet as she was.
The trunk popped open.
She knew she wasn’t going to be told again to get in.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.


Wow, one chapter and this story already has me engrossed! I have a lot of different scenarios playing around in my head right now, and I’m looking forward to more. Great start!
this is really good..hmmm staring to make me wonder a bit about madison and spencer…haha keep writing..
Wow, one chapter and this story already has me engrossed! I have a lot of different scenarios playing around in my head right now, and I’m looking forward to more. Great start!
this is really good..hmmm staring to make me wonder a bit about madison and spencer…haha keep writing..
wow. very very intrigued. this is like way out there without being stupid ridiculous and thus a turn off. nice. well written as well. keep it up please. =)
wow. very very intrigued. this is like way out there without being stupid ridiculous and thus a turn off. nice. well written as well. keep it up please. =)
Uh OH! Im not exactly sure what is going on, but I am definitely intrigued. Both Spencer and Madison are cold towards Ashley. I have a guess, maybe, but we’ll see. Update soon.
Uh OH! Im not exactly sure what is going on, but I am definitely intrigued. Both Spencer and Madison are cold towards Ashley. I have a guess, maybe, but we’ll see. Update soon.
oOo, frist time writer?? Awesome first chapter I must say=) Totally got me on the edge of my seat…please update soon, I’d love to hear what Spence & Madison have to say to Ashley and why the hell Ashley left Spencer behind! Good job hon^_^
oOo, frist time writer?? Awesome first chapter I must say=) Totally got me on the edge of my seat…please update soon, I’d love to hear what Spence & Madison have to say to Ashley and why the hell Ashley left Spencer behind! Good job hon^_^
Wow…great first chapter. Is there a lil somethin’ somethin’ going on between Spencer and Madison….Spadison?? Could that be the reason of Ashley’s leaving?? Look at me…one chapter and speculating all this crazy stuff!! lol…hope you decided to continue!
Wow…great first chapter. Is there a lil somethin’ somethin’ going on between Spencer and Madison….Spadison?? Could that be the reason of Ashley’s leaving?? Look at me…one chapter and speculating all this crazy stuff!! lol…hope you decided to continue!
WOW. I LOVE THIS STORY. CAN’T WAIT TO SEE WHAT ASHLEY DID TO MAKE THEM SO MAD! IT SOUNDS LIKE IT IS GOING TO BE INTERESTING. CONTINUE
WOW. I LOVE THIS STORY. CAN’T WAIT TO SEE WHAT ASHLEY DID TO MAKE THEM SO MAD! IT SOUNDS LIKE IT IS GOING TO BE INTERESTING. CONTINUE