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Los Angeles Breeds Forbidden Love – (Chapter: One- Wet Roads)
“Is she okay?” Spencer questioned, dreading the answer as she rushed out the front door, heading towards her parked car. Her head spun dangerously, and for a moment she felt like she might not be fit to drive.
“No…” There was a long pause on the other line, and it is pretty evident the girl was crying, “She’s in critical condition…. They don’t know if she is going to… Going to… Make it.” She spoke, trying in vain to control her sobs. Spencer felt her stomach hit her toes as she leaned against her car door, completely ignorant of the fat drops of water soaking through her clothing.
“I’ll be right there.” Spencer managed after a moment of shock as she slipped into the drivers seat, pulling out of the driveway and heading towards the hospital. She felt like she was in a trance as she drove, the car seeming to maneuver itself. She couldn’t lose Sarah. She was her fiancé. Her beautiful, perfect, fiancé, and she can‘t just get taken away like that.
After parking slightly askew in a handicapped parking space, Spencer rushed inside, finding Andrea and her soon to be mother-in-law seated in the waiting room. The stale hospital smell of bleach floor cleaner and urine nauseated her almost immediately. Moving over to the weeping pair, Spencer sat down beside them, feeling painfully empty. She knew something didn’t feel right this morning, why on earth did she have to let Sarah leave? Leaning forward she rested her elbows on her knees before she buried her face in her palms, just then feeling the chill of the water that had soaked through her sweatshirt.
Spencer felt a hand rubbing circles in her back, but it wasn’t comforting. It just reminded her of how real this all was. This couldn’t be happening. She and Sarah had a future all planned out already, complete with adopted kids and a house on the beach. It can’t just disappear like it never existed at all.
Spencer lifted her head, looking around the room for something, although she wasn’t quite sure what. Some kind of hint or sign that told her everything was going to be alright. But, there is no comfort in the waiting room. All she could see were the grim faces of other people in equally grave situations. It was heart breaking to see the glimmer of hope flash across their faces as the nurse entered, only to fall when it was not their name being called. Some just looked braced for bad news, their shoulders stiff and eyes cast down towards the ugly mint green linoleum.
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wow… all i can say is amazing… and its only the first chapter… wow… pms im out of words… u left me speechless
wow… all i can say is amazing… and its only the first chapter… wow… pms im out of words… u left me speechless
damn! i was feeling all sad that sarah died and stuff, (it’s still sad, dont get me wrong) but, damn! she was cheating on spencer. with ashley? SHOOOW! wow! GREAT!!! this is awesome! i totally love it! keep up the great work! PMS!!
damn! i was feeling all sad that sarah died and stuff, (it’s still sad, dont get me wrong) but, damn! she was cheating on spencer. with ashley? SHOOOW! wow! GREAT!!! this is awesome! i totally love it! keep up the great work! PMS!!
next update please wow when they met it ain’t going to be pleasent and that is so sad spence had to find out after sarah died…pms
next update please wow when they met it ain’t going to be pleasent and that is so sad spence had to find out after sarah died…pms
DAMN! LOVED IT!!!!
DAMN! LOVED IT!!!!
Wow…You are one of my favorite writers and this story has captured my attention and most definitely, my heart. Love, loss, deception, fear, intrigue, betrayal and most of all shocking! You have it all wrapped up into one amazing chapter, now that is brilliant writing. I’m sure Spencer and Ashley are going to meet…sooooo looking forward to the next chapter. PMS
Wow…You are one of my favorite writers and this story has captured my attention and most definitely, my heart. Love, loss, deception, fear, intrigue, betrayal and most of all shocking! You have it all wrapped up into one amazing chapter, now that is brilliant writing. I’m sure Spencer and Ashley are going to meet…sooooo looking forward to the next chapter. PMS
ooo i hope she falls head over heels for ashley. I hope ashley doesnt act like a complete as to Spencer just cause she was Sarahs fiance….I hope she falls for spencer even harder than either of them fell for sarah.
ooo i hope she falls head over heels for ashley. I hope ashley doesnt act like a complete as to Spencer just cause she was Sarahs fiance….I hope she falls for spencer even harder than either of them fell for sarah.
Well this should be interesting. Can you fall in love with someone who caused your fiance to cheat on you?
Well this should be interesting. Can you fall in love with someone who caused your fiance to cheat on you?