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The Long and Winding Road chp 1
THE LONG AND WINDING ROAD – CHAP ONE
Tina Kennard woke up with the same headache that she had for over a week. She lay silent for a few minutes until she felt Henry’s hand touch her ass and squeeze it with serious intent. She did not move – hoping that he would think her asleep and leave her alone.
It was not that she did not get aroused by Henry – in fact compared to the men she had dated in her teens and early twenties he was a huge catch. He only drank at weekends – and never spirits , he did his share of the chores within the house and worshipped his son.
The only time Henry got really drunk was once a month when Tina’s period arrived and he considered his masculinity to be called into question because another month had passed and she was not pregnant.
When she had been trying to get pregnant when she was with Bette – they had shared the monthly disappointment.
Bette knew to the minute when Tina’s period was due to appear and its arrival had become a pained but SHARED ritual – Bette would pull Tina into her arms and swear that one day they would have their child – they would have the baby that would make their seven year marriage complete.
Tina felt tears welling and fought to silence them — she did not want him to know how deep the hurt ran in her. To him it was a mere slight on his powers that would be satisfied the next time he got a boner or gave her two orgasms in a row. For Tina it was the monthly knife through the heart – she longed for a child of her own.
Of course Micky was cute and he adored her but he was not her child. She had not carried him and spent hours talking to him while he was inside her – or gone through the agony of childbirth or the wondrous joy of holding him while he was still attached to her.
Tina lay in silence as Henry’s alarm sounded and he got up and went through to the bathroom. He emerged exactly 24 minutes later – scratching his balls as usual – what the hell was it with men and their bollocks ?
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(56 votes, average: 4.14 out of 5)
Wonderful chapter loving it already..Please bring on some more fun….Thanks Post soon
Didn´t see that one coming – Just picked up my jaw. What can I say, I´m hooked once again. Do continue soon!!
this is a very interestin beginning. definitly you must continue please!
Yes! Yes! Yes! I gotta have more of this! I began reading and got confused then decided to trust that you would fill in the missing pieces. I can’t wait for more! Ally-does it get tiring and boring knowing sooo many woman crave your words??;)
You’re just full of surprises, Ally. It’s so good to see your devious mind at work in a new arena. This really is a unique interpretation. I can’t wait.
Please please please dont forget the L wing, but whoa that was great, look forward to hear from you soon
no way man.. don’t stop there!!
Well I must say, I wasn’t expecting that!!! Please continue.
Whoa, that’s an really interesting start! Update again soon please. And don’t forget The L Wing. ;)
ally, you are a woman with an incredibly fertile imagination – please continue with both of your wonderful stories – Bette president or pregnant I’ll take her either way.
Okay, I know that you are a True Tibetter, so I am hoping for a reunion here. So the roles have been reversed. Now Bette is the one pregnant. Please let those two get back together. Sorry about the whinning. Great story.
Looks like my Dear,you have another winner in the making. A preganant Bette, Eat your heart out Tina. Hope that Henry has his penis stuck in the car door. If you stopped the L-Wing we all would come visiting you. thanks
Damn, what a twist on things. Bette’s pregnant. You cannot post this once a week, I’m already looking for more.
I was a little hesitant to read this one……I thought it might be too sad reading about Dana’s funeral, but knowing that you were the author, I knew it had to be good……and of course you didn’t disappoint. I love the L Wing and it looks like this is going to be another winner!
Very interesting twist in this story. Please do continue and post again soon. I can’t wait to hear Bette’s eulogy to Dana’s life!! Thanks, Ally.
BBBBBBBBBBBBPPPPPPPPPPPPP…that’s my girl!! ok, next chapter…
wow.. this is one story with a lot of twists.. please,please continue..
oh god… yes please continue… i hope henry got his dick caught in his pants and he doesn’t show
OMG!!! Bette is pregant! very interesting. I love it…can’t wait for more, but please don’t forget the L Wing too. Thanks for posting.
If you write it I read it and am certainly never disappointed. Great start I am totally hooked already. Please carry on but don’t forget the L Wing. I certainly haven’t! Thanks again for entertaining me.
oh my god.. please continue Ally!
wow i just have no clue what to say apart from wow! u have yet again left me speechless
Wow. You’re living up to your award :DThis is great!
Well this is definitely different. I was actually confused for a bit thinking the funeral was going to be a flashback. I’ll stick with this and see how it turns out. Glad you aren’t giving up on L Wing. :)
Oh you are on such a roll – drama queen! you know we want more!
awesome twist ally. so tina and bette haven’t seen each other since provications and bette is expecting, this is very interesting. Look forward to the next instalment, please continue
wow!! another fantastic start ally!!! More Please!!! And please also another chapter of l wing. pls!!!
Great twist – definitely didn’t see that one coming. Please carry on!
its bad enough you have us waiting with bated breath for each installment of the l wing, and now i see you are going to do the same with this story!!!!!!!!!!
Ally, you are definitely the mistress of mystery and twisting s/ls. Keep going.
You must continue…please do!
This is going to be interesting,
Ohhhh snap!!
i knew the twist was coming, i guessed one but not the pregnancy thing LOL…well, tme to see them doing something about getting back together, right?
HOLY SHIT! HECK YEAH continue!
Wow,nice! First I am glad that you did not make Bette pathetic and mourning after Tina. It appeared as though she was able to move on. Secondly Henry just rubs me the wrong way, not because he is a man but because, no matter what frame of reference he is placed in all I can see is him fucking Tina against Bette’s bedroom door in thier house. The way in which Tina went about the whole situation just makes me puke! So I will always regard him in a ill way. Besides that he is just not hot and has no chemistry with Tina, AT ALL! Anywho, please give us another chappy! Dying to know what happened with Bette after the two years!
Yes, please continue… as long as you’re not letting the L wing go! lol. wow, 2 good ones at the same time, you go girl!!
wow awesome..im sure Tina will feel like shit after this..she didnt get pg and Bette did..damn hehe please continue :D
This is fabulous…I love a pregnant Bette! Thanks!
Helllooooooooooow Bette… Byebye Henry… I hope… LMAO! This is great!
that’s a wonderful beginning, ally… and i also don’t know what’s up with men scratching their balls.
Ok girl…you become a little writing fool now. You have two to work on. : )
WHAM!, you’ve got me hooked already. Please continue with this at the same speed as with the L Wing and I love you forever.
Loving it! Chapter 2 please!
Ally, a new story from my favorite drama queen—love it. This is going to be good and I can’t wait to see what happens next. Bette being pregnant is going to kill Tina. Can I have a little preview of what comes next? pleeeeeeese!
Shock, holy freaking cow, what an awesome twist, like it. Please post soon, thanks!
Gee ally did you have to put that twist in right when i was drinking? I had to sponge down the computer after clearing my lungs! Awesome as usual…now back to study *cries*
An exceptional start, to what I know is gonna be another great fan fic. Thanks
Wow! No words! A pregnant Bette .. Amazing Ally. Now we are going to get 2 wonderful stories. Pls continue.
I like it!
this has a great start can’t wait to read the rest please post soon I love it
This is one of my favorite stories!
I’ve read it many times. and yet every time I read it again, completely fascinate. I love this story!
I love alternative Tibette stories in which they are happy and in love! (a little drama can) :)
So I just got told by a friend about your fics and how amazing they are especially this one so I just wanted to say I can’t wait to finally start reading this as soon as I get home but I’m so excited because I hear you’re amazing