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What if you’re stuck in that place? part 5
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‘BANG BANG’ Shit she’s gonna bring the door down. I get up and open it
“WHAT!?”
“Why do you do that?” She asked mad
“WHAT tHE FUCK AM I Doing? HUH?”
“That… you’re mad because of what I said”
“I don’t care anymore Carmen, get out now”
“No…I’m sorry ok?”
“Your words don’t mean shit to me right now Carmen, you’re fucking high”
“SO WHAT… I’m always high Shane, ALWAYS… why do you want me to be someone who I’m not?”
“And why do you care what I think?”
“……I-I… I DON’T KNOW”
“…. I’m not trying to make you be someone you are not… I’m trying to find the real you”
“Why?” I breath
“….I don’t know”
“This is the real me Shane…. if I don’t take this shit… I’m miserable ok… I don’t like feeling like that… pain comes… you think I’ve never tried to get clean? I have Shane, I have…. And every time I breathe to take everything in, when my heart breathes again…. I can’t help it, she keeps me drowning… every time I tried to rise above, I’m swept away…I cant help it….”
“Who is she? What did she do to you,? What was so bad to be worth all this?”
“Nothing” she took out a bottle fool of pills, I didn’t know what it was, but I was next to her in a beat and took the bottle from her hands
“Then why the fuck you need this?” I asked her
“Give me the fucking pills Shane” she is dead serious… but so am I
“No…What did she do huh?”
“Shane I’m not going to ask you again, give me the pills now”
“Who the fuck you think you are huh?… you think you can make everyone do what ever you want?… I guess that was all bullshit at the cab the first night we met. about not letting it go in your head…. Well bite your tongue next time, cause your just as every other junky piece of trash model out there” then she punched me hard in the face…not that I didn’t deserved it. I fell down wining in pain. She got down and grabbed the pills
“Don’t think you know a fuck about me Shane… don’t” she turned around and just before leaving “Oh and a… she didn’t do anything to make me do this………….." she looked at me and i did the same "…..she died”
fuck… now i really feel like shit…
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I’m lovin’ the storykeep going pls
omfg u can’t leave it like this…wow by the way this is the first sharmen story where shane is not the fucked up one so keep going….. great update PPS!!!!!!
wow hell of a chapter!
gosh. what a turn of events. can’t wait to get deeper into carmen’s past and yeap, for the first time it’s carmen having a problem instead of shane. interesting.
ouch, didn’t see that one coming (the whole she died..from carmen). I love this story.. so different, exciting!! PPS
:O whatta cilff hanger! :O
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!cant wait for more!!!1poor carmen……….and shane to some extend….they need to calm down and realsie that they really like each other…..thay have to give it a try…please pps!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!