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What if you’re stuck in that place? part 5
“To the pool?” she asked and we laughed
“This is not what you think…. I like it here… nice breeze” I laid down in one of the pool chairs and Niky started walking around the pool. Laughing “Hey be careful, don’t run because if you fall… I can’t save you”
“Sure you can… you… are… mermaid Shane” that wasn’t even funny but we were laughing at it
“You’re crazy!” then she started walking my way
“Can we go to your room?” she asked with a sexy smile and I didn’t say nothing but she could reed my smile
“Can I come?” I looked back so see who it was…. Carmen
“Carmen!” Niky said laughing
“Hey guys… um….hahah” She was high…. I could see it in her little red eyes
“TAKE IT OFF ALREADY!” said someone from upstairs. We all looked up and saw like 15 people looking at us “GIVE IT UP ALREADY… I WANT SEX!” we started laughing and ran back inside. We heard a lot of ‘boo’s’ and ‘Aww’s’
“so let’s get to my room and have some fun” Niky said
“I got pod” I got mad…. I mean… I do pod but once in a while… Carmen has a problem.
"Carmen what are you doing?" i said
"What does it look like SHane?"
“Carmen can I talk to you for a second?”
“No Shane… look… I like drugs , they make me feel good and safe… I’m not going to stop because of you… why would I? I don’t care about you… you are just a good fuck….” I don’t know why but that hurt… really hurt… and I don’t know why cause…. I think like that… at least towards everyone, except her… I turned around and left them standing there. I get to my room take a shower and turn the tv on. I feel so fucking mad right now… not to mention used…. My past life coming to bite my ass. Fuck her you know… fuck her… I could have anyone
‘knock knock’ WHO the HELL
“Fuck OFF!”
“OPEN THE FUCKING DOOR SHANE” Carmen… who the FF… AHH
“GO TO HELL”
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(25 votes, average: 3.28 out of 5)
I’m lovin’ the storykeep going pls
omfg u can’t leave it like this…wow by the way this is the first sharmen story where shane is not the fucked up one so keep going….. great update PPS!!!!!!
wow hell of a chapter!
gosh. what a turn of events. can’t wait to get deeper into carmen’s past and yeap, for the first time it’s carmen having a problem instead of shane. interesting.
ouch, didn’t see that one coming (the whole she died..from carmen). I love this story.. so different, exciting!! PPS
:O whatta cilff hanger! :O
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!cant wait for more!!!1poor carmen……….and shane to some extend….they need to calm down and realsie that they really like each other…..thay have to give it a try…please pps!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!