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The Way It Always Should Have Been (Bette’s Point of View)
“Mmmm! Bette!” T moves her hips to the rhythm my fingers have created. The next thing I know Tina thrusts her fingers into my center, and I freeze. I lean my head back and let out a moan I didn’t know I had in me. Tina’s fingers continue their assault on my body. I’m still for a moment to take in the pleasure Tina is giving me. I snap out of my trance and continue to make love to Tina. This is different than the fucking we did at my house. We move together, cheek to cheek. This is the way it always should have been with us. I try not to think about the possibility that this could be the last time I ever make love to Tina. To be honest, I don’t think I can handle having her and then losing her. I don’t have time to ponder that thought for very long because Tina has thrown be into the most intense orgasm I’ve ever had. My head jerks back, and I let out a sound that I’m sure can be heard all over the city of LA. As I’m coming down from my amazing high, I curl my fingers inside of Tina and she tenses as she lets her orgasm wash over her.
“Ahhhhh!” Tina moans so loudly, and I think it’s the most erotic sound I’ve ever heard. I kiss her elegant neck, and I hear her whimper as I kiss her neck. My heart is pounding so hard…I can’t catch my breath. I don’t want this to end. Tina grabs my face and kisses me. I’m still panting as I rest my cheek against hers. She wraps her arms around me, and I immediately feel a sense of peace. Oh God, it’s happened, I’ve fallen back in love with her. Maybe I’ve always been in love with her. Maybe this whole time it’s been her, and I didn’t realize it. I long to hear her whisper ‘I love you’ into my ear like she used to. I miss whispering ‘I love you T’ into her ear.
I gasp as she pushes me back on the bed. I look up at Tine, and she is just staring at me not saying a word.
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(32 votes, average: 3.66 out of 5)
Wow! That was amazing and very, very beautiful. Wonderful writing. You described their feelings and emotions soo well. Thank you so much! I am definitely going to have to bookmark this one. :)
That was f**king intense!! Absolutely great post!:-) you really have a talent so just pls keep on writing tnx..
Wonderful update, thanks
WOW!! Great update….keep on writing!
Wow, you’ve captured each of them so,… well just perfectly during this encounter. I just wish they would say what they are feeling, that they are still so in love with each other. Fantastic update. Thanks for posting.
So hot!
That was amazing. Bette’s feelings were so raw and intense. You’re incredibly talented. Please come back with another story for us.
that was just simply brilliant. Thank you loved every word.
Simply amazing.WOW.Thank you very much for this beautiful update.
Holy Moley! One of the top 5 NC-17s I’ve read on this site in the last 7 years. It’s difficult writing NC-17s that are erotic, tender, reckless, intense w/o being trite or boring. This was amazing!