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The Reluctant (Chapter 11)
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“Until I get my coordination back and make her leave.” I joked. Dana pointed a finger at me.
“No more fights for you! You’re turning into Shane. Besides, you don’t want to mess up your face anymore than it already is.” I rolled my head towards her.
“Thanks, Dane. It’s nice to know you care.” I said dryly.
“I try.” She smirked.
“Well at least I’m not afraid of a little thunder and lightening.”
“You’re mean.”
“Watcha gonna do about it?” I asked with a grin, flicking her lightly on the forehead.
“Hey!” She whined, swatting my hand away. “Don’t make me resort to a pillow fight.”
“Please, Dana, don’t torture me.” I was kidding, of course, but she kind of shrunk back. “Oh, I was joking!”
“I know! I’m not an idiot.” Don’t say anything, don’t say anything…
“Hey, can I ask you a question? As your best friend?” She smiled at me.
“Yeah, of course.” I looked down.
“Why did you really break up with Tonya?” It seemed to catch her off guard, because she did this stammering thing with her mouth, then sighed. “Dana?” I prodded.
“Lara called.”
“What?” I gapped at her. No fucking way. I was so close!
“A couple days ago. We’re supposed to meet up when I get back tomorrow. Things weren’t good between me and Tonya anyways, and with Lara… well, you know.”
“Are you gonna fuck her?”
“Alice!”
“What? It was a valid question. I mean, that’s what your brain automatically thinks about when you see her, right? How fast can I get her into bed?” I stood up and went to make sure Tonya was gone. She was. I sat back down on my own bed.
“Okay, just stop.”
“Sorry.” I muttered, shrinking down beneath the thin sheets. This friend thing was going to be very difficult.
***
“Dana?” I was lying in bed, sheets pulled up to my chin, blinking in the darkness.
“Yeah?” She called back softly from the other bed.
“I’m sorry. About…earlier. I hate when you’re mad at me.” She didn’t answer. “Come on, say something!”
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Really good ending to a really great fic. well done.
Nice job. Thats the Danish ending that makes us all happy :) Really sweet ending. Thanks for the story.
Awsome job! Loved the update but the fact that it was the last one mad me feel a bit down. Well, at least you started another one:) Again, congrats on this sweet spin for Danish!
Yay! Happy Danish ending! You made my night! So I guess this story is over huh? That makes me a little sad! :-( Hopefully you’ll continue to work on the other story you just posted. I really like the idea that you started! This was a great story Dork! Continue to write and keep me happy!
Okay, we got our Danish ending, but how serious was Dana about meeting up with Lara in a few days? Is she with Alice because she wants to be or because she was afraid of hurting Alice or completely losing her friendship? Will there be a sequel with Alice dealing with Dana and Lara…
Yay Danish! Loved it! Update soonies!
yayyyyyyyyy see THIS is what i want to see!!!!!! I’m so glad you brought danish together! lets keep them that way~!!!!!
I missed soooo much! lol but wow this was fantastic D. Consider you printed :) lol hope to read more DanishNess from you feel free to just post post post oh and POST :)
For the record, I did end up regretting it the next morning…but then again, I just hate being woken up by my alarm..EVERY morning. :D I had a feeling Dana might want to be more than just friends. :P Wohoo, Danish back together…and they’ve got nothing to hide. :D
Great ending to a fantastic piece of writing. Looking forward to more from you.