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The Promise
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The doors flew open on te black mustang after a cloud of smoke settled. The woman with the salt and pepper hair looked at the tomboy with the backwords hat with an unsettling feeling. The young woman in the back seat leaned forward and said, “you sure you want to do this, they may not be ready. They haven’t trained in months, we just can’t release them on the world without some type of…”
The tomboy took off her hat and ran er hands through her unruly hair. “non chere…it must be done now oui? We’ve run out of options…we’ve fought the good fight as long as we can….they’re in there because of us and we will go down in a blaze fo glory if we can release them from this *****”
The women stood at the top of the steps of the desolate building. Years had weathered the building beyond repair and they entered at their own risk, strapped to the nines.
Nearly an hour had gone by and they had remained undetected for what seemed like an unrealistic amount of time. “J.R. its starting to look like our intel was off. There’s no way their here we should go back while we have a chance .”
“Non, we check every inch Windrider.” The tomboy hustled down the next hallway with her Israeli assault rifle in tow.
“JadedRogue is right we’ll never make it through another mission without them.” The young said as she wiped her brow”
“Okay Katey we’re going radio silent now. meet me in the sub-basment that’s where they have to be. JR out” The JadedRogue pressed the comlink at her throat and moved to the stairwell. Windrider moved down the hall lined with broken chairs and disgarded medical equipment. She stopped at the first door and brushed the dust away from the name plate that read “Intheory” she looked across the hall to see a room marked “IloveKc”
“JR I found them. Move to corridoor three –foxtrot – Echo on the double”
Jaded made to double back and found herself eye to eye with one of the security gaurds decked out in pink army fatiuges. The angry woman with the horrible mullet was about to attack when her eyes rolled into the back of her head and she hit the floor like a sack of potatoes to show Katey standing behind her with her hand in the shape of a vulcan deathgrip.
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Woohoo, there be barbarians at the gate and TheRealJLo is on the grid again. Life is good! :) Missed ya woman, and missed the story. Time to catch up *windrider leans rifle against the wall and settles down to read*
YAY you are back!! i missed this story alot :D
I’m so glad you have returned! I loved the intro…brilliant. Good to see Shane and Alice together. I’m so excited right now…doing a happy dance!
Welcome back!! And what a great start. ; )
welcome back, started to say home, just AWOL for a while. so glad to see your name again. Thanks to JR and WIND thanks Dash hasnt change and You can through real good on my computor. thanks again for posting bvh
YEY you’re back. I was missing your story. And the indo was fycking hilarious.
Amazing return baby. I think you know how much I love your writing.
wow damn it looks like everyone coming out of hiding lol so glad to see you back,love the intro to your return. as far as your story I say fuck it and leave it how it is???
Damn, seeing your posting made my day. Seems like all my really favorite authors are coming back. I was just rereading this story the other day so I’m not behind. I hope you keep posting. Good Job.
hmmm my tabs are totatally fucked up, so much has changed on this site and i so don’t want to go back and hilight everything to make it bold or italic…any suggestions?
Welcome back! The format came out ok on my computer.
HELL YES!!! Hi girl, so um, Windrider and I rescused you? For anyone who don’t know, Janet Mare is aka the JadedRogue… i love it, DASH is BACK!!! ~G~
Good to see you back and good chapter!