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The Power of Suggestion…Finale Part Two
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Bette waved her hand in the air, interrupting Jenny’s thoughts. "Yeah, okay…I got it. Please…don’t go into any more detail!" She shuddered, but then laughed. "Although, does that mean my little step by step instructions helped or disgusted our little "not as hetero as he thought," hetero homo man?!"
"I don’t know about Henry," a soft, seductive voice purred. "But I was so turned on, I still get wet when I think about it." The whisper floated down Bette’s ear canal, and she felt her whole body break out in goose bumps.
During the conversation, the group had been so engrossed in the conversation, no one noticed Tina walk up, and lean down behind Bette.
Trying to clear her throat so her voice wouldn’t squeak, Bette asked, "Tina, when did you get here?"
Ignoring Bette’s question, Tina reached down and slowly tucked a lock of wavy black hair behind a very sexy ear. The circle of friends watched in awe as she moved even slower, leaning down and licking Bette’s earlobe from bottom to top.
"I’m here to tell you that I am ready baby."
Bette felt her heart burst with happiness at hearing those words.
"Although," Tina smiled mischievously… "speaking about that night in the chapel, you know what I have been thinking about since then?"
"What?" Bette managed to croak. She was practically paralyzed with both shock and desire shooting through her body.
"Well, you were so gracious to share with everyone my favorite way of being touched, but we didn’t have the opportunity to share with them yours."
"Isn’t that right girls?" Tina asked as she looked at all the wide eyed women, frozen in place around the table.
Bette’s face turned red, and she immediately tensed up. "Uh…Tina, I don’t think that anyone is interested in…"
"Oh, I beg to differ with you Bette," Tina interrupted, not letting the flustered brunette finish. "I have no doubts that these women would love to hear what makes you come every time…and without me even touching you."
Shane, who normally wouldn’t want to intrude into someone else’s personal business, leaned forward, because above all else, she was a consummate professional when it came to the art of making love. And, if Tina knew how to make a woman like Bette have an orgasm without being touched, her curiosity overpowered her sense of privacy.
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I so loved this story. To funny Bette pulling Tina out of the car. Sea Thank you
OMG, that was extremely sexy and well, explosive. I was not sure that they were going to make into the house. Now that would have been a sight that I would have paid hard earned money to see. Bette bringing Tina to an orgasm right there on the sidewalk for all to see. Are you sure that you want to end this little wild story?
I had such a good time reading this. Please let out any other ideas of this nature that are jumping around in your brain. I enjoyed visiting with you in San Francisco.
You had fun writing it, we had fun reading it, and B&T…just had fun.
“TINA!!!” Bette yelped as she found herself being led up the sidewalk by her newly trimmed pubic hairs.” LMAO I didn’t even know that’s possible.. Loved it from the very beginning.. Thanks..
I’m with everyone. This was so funny and sexy and I’ve enjoyed it immensely. The scene in the Planet and outside B&T’s house was hilarious!
Sea, that was off the chain! You’re crazy!!!
Excellent and oh so sexy!
Good chapter. Love Bette carries Tina out of the planet and pulling Tina out of the car and the outside of B&T is so funny and hot. Thanks!
I just read this story and love ur sense of humour, the scenes at therapist, Planet and especially out side their house was hilarious lol:)))))))))))
this chapter was even crazier and i agree with helena, when i read about B&T together all i can think of is…well, whatever helena said…anyway, i think you should do finale part 3 and explain what happened after they get into the house and before they lived happily ever after :)
Someone’s horny. LOL.
hilarious!
Finally! Great fun, loved it.
Sea, you are completely out of your mind……that opening scene with the therapist was a riot. Bette did tell Tina to get hershit together; but I don’t think she meant like this. Tina is going to end up a looneytune just like Jenny and Moira / Max!……..Now for the rest of it….I somehow expected mind blowing sex. Although THAT didn’t happen within pages 1 – 4, it was still funny as hell nonetheless!! ANDDDDDD, I still think it should be you seeking therapy Sea, right beside Tina!
OMG! Hilarious. This is one hell of a crazy story. But i just love it! ^_^ I think BTF is right, Sea. You need to give us finale part 3 ;-) Pleeaaase…
As it should be!
seahurst –you are a twisted woman and i love you for it. jenny and helena ??? thats actually worse than hen and max – though thats cos i loathe Jenny. i again bow to you – totally brilliant
“TINA!!!” Bette yelped as she found herself being led up the sidewalk by her newly trimmed pubic hairs. “Tina…ouch…baby…oh…honey…ouch…slow down!!!” ROFL!!!!!!!!!!! Methinks someone was ready for some, uh, primal sex. ;)
I liked it Ms.S realy good!!!!!!!!!!!
just… lmao!
OMG U stopped there? lmao’Way meany, I was all excited, when they get into the house, we was gonna see some hot sreamy sex goin dwn, BUT I loved this lil story, I wished s3 ended like this, or maybe this could be in s4 somewhere .. maybe u could do a xtended chap of this, with the steamyness plz lol!
Seahurst, I can’t believe you wrote that but, I’m so glad you did. It was funny as all get out and rather HOT too. Now you must come back and tell us what happened once they got in the house and then end it. WE MUST KNOW. Tina had me all worked up with her lascivious description of what Bette needed so you must come back and tell us what happened, then hte BBQ and then what happens after everyone goes home. Helena and Jenny? When Tina was doing her description, and Shane was leaning forward to hear, I thought you were gonna tell us that Shane fell off her chair. Now I’m going to read the entire thing again. Thank you Seahurst.
One more vote for finale part 3! :)
Seahurst, I do believe that’s the first time I’ve ever seen the phrase “got ’em by the short hairs” actually illustrated. Oh well, Bette deserved it after making Tina exit the car the way she did. But how come we didn’t follow them inside for the main show?
Love it, love it, love it! I haven’t cracked up so much since – help me out here folk, was it – Captivated?
It’s Sunday, and I want to thank god (and Seahurst) for comic relief!
That was so funny and sexy all at the same time. Jenny and Helania.not so funny, Henery and Max well you get what you deserve. Thanks
Please – just one more part to the finale?!!? Loved the back and forth between B/T, especially short hairs,lol! Thanks for writing!
OMG….This was one crazy story……Is there any other funny/weird things that’s running around in your head? If so, feel free to keep sharing!!!!!!!
So great Sea, a way with words you have for certain! My god I was rolling of my chair with laughter again… Jenny/Helena LMAO Hope to read more from you soon!
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING…….I AM JUST…….AT A LOST FOR WORDS…..I…I….I….ERRRR….NEEDA COLD SHOWER……SEE YA LATER…..LMAO
1st……..I like that!!
Woo Hoo – crazy love, Sea.
Hahah… I love that Bette carries Tina out. And what Helena says after that… I think that might be a common issue among viewers of the show… You’re one twisted woman, but I love your stories and anxiously await your next endeavor!
Girl, you did it again, it’s still early in the morning overhere, I’m so horny….i’ve got to wake up my wife, she is so gonna like it. Thanks for that.
Crazy is right to describe this, but let’s add a word “Hot”