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The Power of Suggestion…Finale Part One
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This finale takes place only three short months after the last chapter…three short months, oh but the changes that have taken place during that time……
Welcome to Max and Henry’s twilight zone….
Max walked into the front door of the home she shared with Henry. Henry….just saying the name in her head brought a smile to the face of the beautiful brunette with translucent eyes.
If truth be told, she was just as shocked as everyone else, when what was supposed to be a one night fuckfest had taken an unexpected turn and landed the two polar opposite soul mates smack dab in the middle of an fairytale love story. Who would have ever thought that a straight as an arrow man, and a lesbian who had been in transition into becoming a man, would end up not only together, but so totally in love? It still amazed her when she thought of their incredibly different backgrounds, and their very different personalities…and most surprising to both of them, the drastic change in their sexual desires, and how they felt about their own bodies. Yet here they were, experiencing a happiness…a completeness unlike anything either had felt before.
"Hen, I’m home!" Max continued into the house, dropping her briefcase on the floor next to the coat rack. She walked past the diningroom table, and smiled with delight at seeing the table set with candles, and flowers in the middle.
"Bab…" Max stopped as she walked around the corner to the kitchen doorway, and garnered in all her self control so as not to verbally react at what she saw before her…Henry, dressed in his favorite ‘welcome home Max’ outfit…nothing but a pair of boxer shorts that across the back said…
Max’s rear, enter here
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…an apron with a strategically placed picture of an elephant with a hole right where the trunk would go, and pink fuzzy wuzzy slippers on his feet. Celine Deon was playing on the CD player, and Henry was swaying to the music as he belted out the chorus of ‘I’m Your Angel’ right along with Celine.
Silently Max moved across the kitchen and wrapped her arms around Henry’s chest. "Hmmm, my angel huh?"
Henry jumped with surprise, but then leaned back into Max’s sturdy body, feeling the hardness of her rubber appendage against his buttocks, as well as her nipples poking into his back.
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I wish I could, I wish I could…maybe later?…
I’ll come back for Part 2. Thanks, Seahurst!
Yeah, I don’t care much about this pair and it’s kinda twisted but damn funny… Now, I’m ready for part deux. Thanks.
I want to get on my knees and thank Maxy for stealing Hen Hen from Tina. I just knew there was more to that man. Now the two real lovers can be given another chance to make a life with each other. GO Bette and Tina! This was funny and quiet an eye opening event.
oh wow scary and yet funny
Hey Sea, you remind us all that love comes in many forms. LOve is LOve. :)
This is such a hilarious story I ever read and like the way you put these 2 together. I can’t stop laughing the whole time. Thanks for sharing this story wiht us!
You are so funny,These are the two people I least expected to be together. Thia was awesome. great thanks
See. This is what I mean . You take a pairing that no One would care for and write an absolutely fantastic storyline. Cuz let’s face the writing is good even if people don’t like the pairing. That is part of the reasonI can stand this fic. ANother part id fucking hilirious especially when I think how this pairing came about. i.e. Bette and Tina. So on to part 2. Great job!
OMG that’s disgusting but so funny… Can’t wait for part two.
Okay, once again – really funny! Thanks Sea!
suitably twisted seahurst! and ‘Hen’ is just so emasculating a pet name! how can you top this?
“It smells great man.”………. I actually heard this. It was as if I were sitting here watching “Lâ€! LMFAO!!!!!!! “I’m ready Hen. Eat me my little dude.” ……… Somehow, I can visualize Max saying, “suck me dick, not EAT me.†……….. as I sit here with strange look on my face. ……. Sea, you are simply retarded and I’ll read anything you come up with.
O.O *sits at school, stunned…* LMFAO!!!!! This is hilariousssssssssssss! LOL
that was fucking hilarious! You write anything you want….we’ll read!
So twisted, so funny, so good.
Lord Jebus!, lets hope Ilene gets this idea, so Maxy and Hen Hen came become one, and Henry can leave Tina alone … Now rather ewy but homourous! lmao’ now get to the Alpha Bette and Tina … I just loved the way you portrayed Bette in these chapters, if only ilene would of done it on the show, Tina would be begging
hilarious! i’m still rolling on the floor!
SEA… i could just see you typing this… laughing your ass off… i know i was… this was just too funny… and i’m so glad he listened to bette… now hen hen and maxy can live happily ever after…
certainly the most humourous chapter i have read this morning roflmao omg Sea how could you come up with thisloli dunno how i am gonna work today jus havin a stupid smile on my face thinking abt Max’s rear, enter hereOhahhahah tht was a really gross but at the same time funny thing
‘…a place where Max could look forward to coming after a hard day at the office.’ Loaded statement much? ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!! I’m sitting at work right now. I wanted to read this before I left home but didn’t have time as I was already 20 minutes late. I had to fight not to bust a gut from laughing. Scary image of Henry in boxers, an apron, and wait…did he confiscate those fuzzy wuzzy slippers from Tina?! I know she had blue ones. This was strangely hot, and really Daniela Sea is pretty fine. If butch was my type I’d totally fall for her. LOVE love love her eyes. Can’t wait to read more of this, as well as a new chapter of “Put it up to your ear…” =D
While these two aren’t my favorite characters and make a most unexpected coupling, you’ve made this an interesting and amusing transition for them. No doubt they’ve both been assholes at various points with their previous partners, but I’m happy for them that they’ve opened their minds found each other. I have to admit to being distressed at how many of the comments characterize their physical relationship as “sick” or “disguting” when these are terms thrown our way too often, like stones at glass houses.
Unbelievable!!! That is one of the most out there pairing I’ve read on this site. You made it credible not only that funny as hell. Thanks.
Well, I am not quite sure what to say but it was disgustingly and amazingly twisted but funny as hell. What a pair and I hope I never have to look at it on the show because seeing it in my mind’s eye was more than enough. Funny as all get out. Thanks I needed that laughter.
Oh god! That was hilarious! :))
Seahurst… I love your writing, and the fact that this grossed me out SO much is a testament to that… I think this would be very good for Henry. Then he could leave our Tina alone. Parting thought: haha… WeHomo… Looking forward to the next post!
aw every “man” should have his mate!
Well, Sea…this certainly was different and I don’t particularly care for those characters on the show so it was difficult for me to like them. I am biased b/c I’m a devoted TiBetter. Parts were erotic. But I laud your bravery in posting a non girl on girl story.
Sick..but oh SO funny! LOL I needed this. Can’t wait for Autonmy Bette and Confused Tina. After this lets get back to our regularly scheduled program.
i wonder what mikey thinks about his new “mama” LOL…this was sickengly funny LMAO
“I’m ready Hen. Eat me my little dude.” LOL…as absurd as this could be, we have to admit that love DOES comes in any form…as for me you can write whatever crosses your mind ;)
You are killin me. I agree twisted but really funny. If they are around for season 3 I don’t think I’ll be able to look at them the same way. Thanks for that a7 for taking the time. Bring on part 2.
YOU ARE AWESOME!
Rolling on the floor laughing!
who would have thought you had such a sick sense of humour seahurst ?? still drying the tears from laughing — oh and thanks for using celione dion — i hate that woman – couldn’t carry a note in a bucket — so everytime i hear her catawalling i can snigger at Max and Hen. is this a MaHen pairing LOL?? Maybe the next FF challenge should be a unique pairing contest — which you would win by the way with this one..
Maxy & Hen Hen 4-ever.
I have to admit Sea, it took a lot of guts to write this. You did it very well of course, that goes without saying. I know you don’t like to NC-17 stories, let alone these two! But very, very interesting. Couldn’t wait to see where you went with this.
Quite a kick to read … I can see why you needed to purge it to paper! Always a pleasure when you post.
This was soooooo good, creaming myself while laughing, what an experience.It was hot, it was brilliantly written, it has great humor, it had everyting i like in a story. I can almost see the title for the split-off series of the L Word: WeHomo…..Nobody of us will watch that, but who cares….