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    The Power of Suggestion…Finale Part One

    Story written on May 18, 2006 by Seahurst.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=60945
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    Then, slowly…just like Bette had instructed….

    "Baby, you’re home…" Henry murmured with contentment.

    "Yeah…with you."

    Max looked around the broad shoulders of her lover, noticing the wonderful aromas wafting up from the stove. Slowing turning Henry around so they were facing each other, she said, "It smells great man."

    "Thank you Maxy." Henry beamed at the compliment. "Why don’t you go get changed and then we can eat."

    Leaning up, Max placed a soft kiss on each of Henry’s cheeks. "Be right back Hen."

    ~~

    "I didn’t know you were such a good cook," Max smiled as she wiped her mouth with the cloth napkin Henry had set beside her plate, then shoved it back down the open collar of her shirt.

    "Well," Henry blushed at the compliment, and looked down shyly. "I wanted to make something nice for you. I know how stressful your job can be."

    Max reached out and caressed the back of her hand down Henry’s cheek. "That was very sweet of you Hen. This was a great surprise…" Whipping her hair out of her eyes with a flick of her head, and grinning. "And it tastes damn good."

    "Not as…" Henry really blushes now as he can feel the slight movement in his shorts caused by the direction of his thoughts. "Not as delicious as you Maxy."

    Max cocked her head to one side and gave Henry a seductive smile. "Really? I bet you wanna taste don’t you?"

    Before Henry can respond, Max pushes back her chair and motions for Henry to come to her. Henry’s face breaks out into the biggest grin, knowing that all his plans for this evening were coming true. Getting up, he walked around the table and straddled Max’s lap, wrapping his arms around her neck. Max reaches around with one arm pulling Henry closer to her, and with the other hand pulls out the waistband of Henry’s boxers and peaks inside. Just the fact that Max is staring at him excites Henry, and he and Max look down and watch with amazement as Henry grows big and hard right before their eyes.

    "I love watching that happen," Max whispered in awe. "It’s like watching one of those sponges that are compressed into a tiny square, grow right before your eyes when you put them in water."

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    4. I want to get on my knees and thank Maxy for stealing Hen Hen from Tina. I just knew there was more to that man. Now the two real lovers can be given another chance to make a life with each other. GO Bette and Tina! This was funny and quiet an eye opening event.

    9. See. This is what I mean . You take a pairing that no One would care for and write an absolutely fantastic storyline. Cuz let’s face the writing is good even if people don’t like the pairing. That is part of the reasonI can stand this fic. ANother part id fucking hilirious especially when I think how this pairing came about. i.e. Bette and Tina. So on to part 2. Great job!

    13. “It smells great man.”………. I actually heard this. It was as if I were sitting here watching “L”! LMFAO!!!!!!! “I’m ready Hen. Eat me my little dude.” ……… Somehow, I can visualize Max saying, “suck me dick, not EAT me.” ……….. as I sit here with strange look on my face. ……. Sea, you are simply retarded and I’ll read anything you come up with.

    17. Lord Jebus!, lets hope Ilene gets this idea, so Maxy and Hen Hen came become one, and Henry can leave Tina alone … Now rather ewy but homourous! lmao’ now get to the Alpha Bette and Tina … I just loved the way you portrayed Bette in these chapters, if only ilene would of done it on the show, Tina would be begging

    19. SEA… i could just see you typing this… laughing your ass off… i know i was… this was just too funny… and i’m so glad he listened to bette… now hen hen and maxy can live happily ever after…

    20. certainly the most humourous chapter i have read this morning roflmao omg Sea how could you come up with thisloli dunno how i am gonna work today jus havin a stupid smile on my face thinking abt Max’s rear, enter hereOhahhahah tht was a really gross but at the same time funny thing

    21. ‘…a place where Max could look forward to coming after a hard day at the office.’ Loaded statement much? ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!! I’m sitting at work right now. I wanted to read this before I left home but didn’t have time as I was already 20 minutes late. I had to fight not to bust a gut from laughing. Scary image of Henry in boxers, an apron, and wait…did he confiscate those fuzzy wuzzy slippers from Tina?! I know she had blue ones. This was strangely hot, and really Daniela Sea is pretty fine. If butch was my type I’d totally fall for her. LOVE love love her eyes. Can’t wait to read more of this, as well as a new chapter of “Put it up to your ear…” =D

    22. While these two aren’t my favorite characters and make a most unexpected coupling, you’ve made this an interesting and amusing transition for them. No doubt they’ve both been assholes at various points with their previous partners, but I’m happy for them that they’ve opened their minds found each other. I have to admit to being distressed at how many of the comments characterize their physical relationship as “sick” or “disguting” when these are terms thrown our way too often, like stones at glass houses.

    23. Unbelievable!!! That is one of the most out there pairing I’ve read on this site. You made it credible not only that funny as hell. Thanks.

    24. Well, I am not quite sure what to say but it was disgustingly and amazingly twisted but funny as hell. What a pair and I hope I never have to look at it on the show because seeing it in my mind’s eye was more than enough. Funny as all get out. Thanks I needed that laughter.

    26. Seahurst… I love your writing, and the fact that this grossed me out SO much is a testament to that… I think this would be very good for Henry. Then he could leave our Tina alone. Parting thought: haha… WeHomo… Looking forward to the next post!

    28. Well, Sea…this certainly was different and I don’t particularly care for those characters on the show so it was difficult for me to like them. I am biased b/c I’m a devoted TiBetter. Parts were erotic. But I laud your bravery in posting a non girl on girl story.

    29. Sick..but oh SO funny! LOL I needed this. Can’t wait for Autonmy Bette and Confused Tina. After this lets get back to our regularly scheduled program.

    31. “I’m ready Hen. Eat me my little dude.” LOL…as absurd as this could be, we have to admit that love DOES comes in any form…as for me you can write whatever crosses your mind ;)

    32. You are killin me. I agree twisted but really funny. If they are around for season 3 I don’t think I’ll be able to look at them the same way. Thanks for that a7 for taking the time. Bring on part 2.

    35. who would have thought you had such a sick sense of humour seahurst ?? still drying the tears from laughing — oh and thanks for using celione dion — i hate that woman – couldn’t carry a note in a bucket — so everytime i hear her catawalling i can snigger at Max and Hen. is this a MaHen pairing LOL?? Maybe the next FF challenge should be a unique pairing contest — which you would win by the way with this one..

    37. I have to admit Sea, it took a lot of guts to write this. You did it very well of course, that goes without saying. I know you don’t like to NC-17 stories, let alone these two! But very, very interesting. Couldn’t wait to see where you went with this.

    39. This was soooooo good, creaming myself while laughing, what an experience.It was hot, it was brilliantly written, it has great humor, it had everyting i like in a story. I can almost see the title for the split-off series of the L Word: WeHomo…..Nobody of us will watch that, but who cares….

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