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    The Performance of a Lifetime – Chapter 11

    Story written on May 17, 2008 by sabina.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=69588
    Author Notes:

    A B/T romantic comedy

    Bette felt her mouth water at the sight of the blonde’s naked breasts, dark pink, hard nipples standing proudly under the moonlight.

    The brunette extended her tongue and pressed it to the nipple closer to her and licked it in one long, unwavering, wet stroke. Then she turned her face and did the same to the other nipple.

    Tina tensed her hands on Bette’s hair and tugged on it pulling the brunette tighter against her. She closed her eyes and bit her lower lip to stifle a moan.

     

    Completely focused on the bounty presented to her Bette cupped her hands around the pliable breasts and pushed them closer together to blow warm air on both eager nipples at the same time. Then she took one in her mouth and the other in her hand and sucked one and pinched the other between her thumb and forefinger at the same time.

    “Mmmm…” Tina moaned. She pushed her hands down Bette’s neck, down her back inside her top, down her sides, desperate to feel more of the brunette.

    Tina’s moan of pleasure hit Bette’s ears and clit at the same time. She resisted the urge to groan in reply. She could feel her soaked panties and the seam of her pants rubbing her with every jerking motion of her hips. She was so ready to come and Tina hadn’t even touched her. She changed sides to pay homage to the neglected nipple. She didn’t want any part of the blonde to feel left out.

    “Bette. Bette.” Tina whispered frantically. She just couldn’t take it anymore. She was wet beyond belief, her balance was completely shot and the part of her brain that wasn’t in complete melt down recognized that the only thing keeping her upright at this moment was probably the door at her back. She needed a bed and she needed Bette naked in it and she needed it now.

    “Yes?” Bette let go of the nipple regretfully promising to come back soon. She heard the desperate tone and she responded to it.

    “Bed. Now.” Tina articulated slowly.

    Bette could only nod her agreement. She got up shakily and extended her hand to the blonde who took it quickly.

     

    They walked the few steps that separated them from the bed quickly but when Bette was about to push Tina to lie down, the blonde stopped her.

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    1. Wonderful. Truely Truely Wonderful. Thanks. I love this story, the new and the unexplored needs to be explored, I love the interaction between the two. Thanks and Please Post Soon :)

    4. Thud…. omg that was so hot… i hope this will help bette forget jodie and her crap and move on with tina… that tango was hot and this was a fantastic follow up! don’t let anyone hit u in the head u won’t be able to write updates like this!! :)PPS

    8. And I thought the tango scene was HOT! Whew! This was simply so well done! I love the plot of this story – it is so well crafted! I certainly hope you find the inspiration to post again soon. I wonder what Jody will have to say at the dawn of a new day…

    18. Sabina….I am totally speechless! This whole chapter was written with such a level of unprecedented maturity. I can’t wait for your next post!

    23. This chapter was amazing. It’s difficult to write NC-17s w/o them appearing to be smutty. This was passionate and delicious but not tawdry. PPS.

    24. hi. i re-read chapter 10 last night and i was wondering when you would post, and here’s the wonderful gift. i love how their intensity just shines through this chapter. i hope you really, really, really, post soon, as this is one of my favorite stories.forget about giving us a cookie, here’s two boxes of chocolate chip cookies for you! hope you post really soon, and i hope that Jodi won’t cause any trouble. this story is awesome.

    28. Woo!!! Had to turn the thermostat down on the air to cool off the room and the computer!!! Too hot for words. This was very tastefully done. Passionate without being smutty. PPS

    31. OMG that was amazingly written!!! I’m so glad the girls didn’t have to hit you over the head to find release :) Your story is well worth waiting for!

    32. DA-AMN!!!!!!! Well it has already been quite hot here in LA…I’m quite certain that just turned the temp up to scorching…never really one for a/c unless it’s necessary & it just became an absolute necessity ;) Truly “amazing!!!” Thx & can’t wait for the next one :)

    35. Wowzzzzzzz, Sabina I just read every chapter of both of your stories. Amazing,I’ll say it again, Amazing. I know Jodi couldn’t here them but she will find out and if she starts anymore of her crap with either of them I hope they leave and go on their own little honeymoon. Thank you, Md

    36. Sabina- i’m not sure if i’ve commented yet- i read you from my blackberry more often than not- but i signed on this morning specifically to tell you that i love your writing. you have a wonderful flow and way with storytelling. I’ve enjoyed this from start to present and wanted to say thank you!

    39. I had been wondering where this story was but that was worth the wait. I hope this solidifies something more in their relationship.. and that Bette shuts any of Jodi’s advances down more vigorously then she has previously. The connection she seems to have with Tina deserves that much.

    40. whoa!!!! Alice is so gonna tease them for their ‘got laid deliriously happy faces’ tomorrow…and Jodi is going to be sooooo green!!! Bring it on.

    42. I was so excited to see that you posted, and it was a bonus to see the rating. Great post as usual–I can’t wait for more! I love your writing!

    43. Here’s me leaving a comment with the hope that added to the others, it will encourage you to post sooner… I simply love this story!!! I’m always curious to see how writers handle NC-17 when writing such a beautiful and romantic love story, as the nature of such a scene might represent a big challenge… Well, I’m glad to say that you didn’t disappoint in the least!!! And considering that the last chapter can very well be considered a “sex” scene in itself, I’d say that the bar was set even higher! Well, you did absolutely great; the build up, the emotion, the ever present connection, the first encounter and the slow progression toward the second…. everything was very well done, and I appreciated the “humility” of the whole scene. What I mean is that you didn’t try to do too much too soon just because it’s “them”, and that leaves a huge potential and a very promising progression for the relationship and the story to come… Thanks a million, keep writing, and please post soon! ;) K.

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