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The Performance of a Lifetime – Chapter 11
“Bette…” Her name was almost like a prayer on Tina’s lips as the blonde pushed herself more firmly against the hand that was driving her crazy with its slow movement. But it was to no avail as the brunette didn’t seem to be in a mood to be rushed. Tina decided to change tactics and her hand that was resting over Bette’s stomach resumed its movement downwards. Down to answer the need she could see simmering intensely in dark eyes.
At Tina’s insistent touch Bette’s legs opened of their own volition.
“You’re so wet.” Tina stated, her voice full of wonder as her fingers sank into the hot welcoming moisture coating Bette’s sex from top to bottom. Her need to great to resist, Tina pushed two fingers slowly inside the brunette, the copious amount of wetness making it easy for her to slide deeply into Bette.
“Tina…” Bette moaned closing her eyes for a moment. She blindly leaned her head forward to capture the blonde’s lips with their own, wanting to be as close to the blonde as she could possibly get, while she mirrored Tina’s movement and without warning sank two of her own fingers deep into Tina at the same time she extended her thumb to press on the blonde’s previously ignored clit. Tina’s deep moan was swallowed by the pressing of their lips together.
They fell into a rhythm, pumping in and out of each other, stroking each other’s helplessly needy clits with each downwards stroke while they kissed in between panting, their movement getting faster and faster as the pleasure started to surge out of control.
After a while they had to pull away from their kiss, too breathless and uncoordinated to continue as all their blood had rushed southwards and was pulsating wildly between their legs.
Their bodies rocked wildly against sweetly torturing hands and knowing fingers as their eyes met and their stares melded and then suddenly a wave of intense pleasure broke over them both at the same time.
“Teeee..” Bette cried out, her voice breaking as she came hard and long.
“Aaaahh…” Tina’s choked scream overlapped Bette’s voice as light exploded behind her closed eyelids.
Neither of them would be able to say how much time had passed but gradually they became aware of their surroundings again.
“That was…” Tina swallowed trying to bring some moisture back into her mouth.
“…Amazing.” Bette finished for her, throatily. Bette couldn’t remember the last time she had felt this sated and content. It made her heart swell to see the same look of satisfied wonder in Tina’s still slightly unfocused gaze.
Tina nodded, her brain incapable of coming up with words to describe just how absolutely amazing she thought it had been. She leaned her head forward to kiss Bette slowly, softly. There was a satisfied lassitude invading her body that made her want nothing else but to snuggle up to Bette and go to sleep.
Bette pulled away from their kiss with some effort to grab the sheet and pull it over them both. Then she threw one arm over Tina and gathered the blonde close to her body. She kissed Tina’s forehead tenderly and closed her eyes, relaxing.
Tina rested one hand comfortably on the brunette’s side, gently caressing the smooth skin for a moment. She nuzzled Bette’s neck gently before she too settled down with a happy sigh.
In less than a minute they were both asleep, their heads sharing the same pillow as they curled up together in the middle of the canopy bed.
TBC.
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(63 votes, average: 3.87 out of 5)
Wonderful. Truely Truely Wonderful. Thanks. I love this story, the new and the unexplored needs to be explored, I love the interaction between the two. Thanks and Please Post Soon :)
WOW !!!!!!That was “amazing”.
wow ! I’m speechless, it’s perfect !
Thud…. omg that was so hot… i hope this will help bette forget jodie and her crap and move on with tina… that tango was hot and this was a fantastic follow up! don’t let anyone hit u in the head u won’t be able to write updates like this!! :)PPS
Wildly sexy! Whew!
that was so worth the wait!! thanks for sharing. pps
I am speechless…that was amazingly hot!! PPS
And I thought the tango scene was HOT! Whew! This was simply so well done! I love the plot of this story – it is so well crafted! I certainly hope you find the inspiration to post again soon. I wonder what Jody will have to say at the dawn of a new day…
Been waiting for this story all week, absolutely brilliant:)PPS Very Soon Pleeeease
1. That was SO HOT. Fabulous job. Fabulous.2. Thanks for teaching me the word “marmoreal.”
Wow. That was…superb!
Amazing!
That was so amazing and HOT!!!!!! I so hope Jodi does not cause them trouble. Thank you PPVS
That was amazing…more please:)
That was very hot and senuous writing. More please!
that was beautiful… OMG… i loved it… now let them rest and then its time for round two… PPS
WOW, that was AMAZING! I love the connection that Bette and Tina share.
Sabina….I am totally speechless! This whole chapter was written with such a level of unprecedented maturity. I can’t wait for your next post!
oh happy day….doing my happy dance…happy dance!!! PPS!!! not a week from today *hint*
super hot. *fans self*
I just love this story ! PPS !
well..that was..wow…i am speachless…more please..soon =)
This chapter was amazing. It’s difficult to write NC-17s w/o them appearing to be smutty. This was passionate and delicious but not tawdry. PPS.
hi. i re-read chapter 10 last night and i was wondering when you would post, and here’s the wonderful gift. i love how their intensity just shines through this chapter. i hope you really, really, really, post soon, as this is one of my favorite stories.forget about giving us a cookie, here’s two boxes of chocolate chip cookies for you! hope you post really soon, and i hope that Jodi won’t cause any trouble. this story is awesome.
Is it hot in here? Just me? AMAZING. Just amazing.
Your pace is incredible…as much a part of the story as the story itself. Thank you!!
*THUD* That was sooooo hot! PPS!!
Woo!!! Had to turn the thermostat down on the air to cool off the room and the computer!!! Too hot for words. This was very tastefully done. Passionate without being smutty. PPS
amazing!
Wow. Just… wow. That was well worth the wait. Excellent post, sabina. thanks + post soon.
OMG that was amazingly written!!! I’m so glad the girls didn’t have to hit you over the head to find release :) Your story is well worth waiting for!
DA-AMN!!!!!!! Well it has already been quite hot here in LA…I’m quite certain that just turned the temp up to scorching…never really one for a/c unless it’s necessary & it just became an absolute necessity ;) Truly “amazing!!!” Thx & can’t wait for the next one :)
This chapter was beautiful. Tina and Bette totally rock….more please. Thank you.
holy cow… that was… i don’t even know the words…
Wowzzzzzzz, Sabina I just read every chapter of both of your stories. Amazing,I’ll say it again, Amazing. I know Jodi couldn’t here them but she will find out and if she starts anymore of her crap with either of them I hope they leave and go on their own little honeymoon. Thank you, Md
Sabina- i’m not sure if i’ve commented yet- i read you from my blackberry more often than not- but i signed on this morning specifically to tell you that i love your writing. you have a wonderful flow and way with storytelling. I’ve enjoyed this from start to present and wanted to say thank you!
You had me scared. I thought you disappeared. I was so happy to see an update. That was an amazing chapter, beautifully written.
Beautiful.
I had been wondering where this story was but that was worth the wait. I hope this solidifies something more in their relationship.. and that Bette shuts any of Jodi’s advances down more vigorously then she has previously. The connection she seems to have with Tina deserves that much.
whoa!!!! Alice is so gonna tease them for their ‘got laid deliriously happy faces’ tomorrow…and Jodi is going to be sooooo green!!! Bring it on.
That was hot – need to cool of. Love this story. Please continue soon.
I was so excited to see that you posted, and it was a bonus to see the rating. Great post as usual–I can’t wait for more! I love your writing!
Here’s me leaving a comment with the hope that added to the others, it will encourage you to post sooner… I simply love this story!!! I’m always curious to see how writers handle NC-17 when writing such a beautiful and romantic love story, as the nature of such a scene might represent a big challenge… Well, I’m glad to say that you didn’t disappoint in the least!!! And considering that the last chapter can very well be considered a “sex” scene in itself, I’d say that the bar was set even higher! Well, you did absolutely great; the build up, the emotion, the ever present connection, the first encounter and the slow progression toward the second…. everything was very well done, and I appreciated the “humility” of the whole scene. What I mean is that you didn’t try to do too much too soon just because it’s “them”, and that leaves a huge potential and a very promising progression for the relationship and the story to come… Thanks a million, keep writing, and please post soon! ;) K.
Just keep on posting please.
beautifully written, love this story :)
I just had to read it twice, i couldn’t focus, damn this was amaizing, beautiful, sweet, hot, and much more, thank you. PPS.