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the misadventures of Evan-Marie:the girl episode part 8( sequel to who holds…)
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Of course.
*****
2 weeks earlier….
The blaring sound of the alarm woke me on the first day of my suspension. I didnt recall setting it as I slammed my hand on the clock shutting it off. I rolled over onto my side pulling the covers over my head.
Rise and shine.
The covers were ripped off of me exposing my barely covered skin to the cold air.
No, no, no, no, I moaned.
Oh yes, yes, yes. Its time to get up.
Mom? I asked lifting my head.
My mother towered over me with her hands on her hips waiting.
Get up, she demanded.
Knowing not to keep her waiting, I jumped up.
Your suspension starts today and so does your punishment. After Tina feeds you, she will give a list of things that need to be done today. You will complete this list, I mean everything on the list and then will you be able to eat dinner. I will leave lunch up to her. Do I make myself clear?
Yes.
Okay then, Im off to work, she announced leaving me in my room.
I stood in the same position for I dont know how long before Tina popped her head in.
Sweetie?
Huh? I answered.
Forget what your mother said. You dont have to do any of it.
No, I have to.
Why? Because she said.
Yes, because she said. I would if you told me to. Same thing.
No its not the same thing cause I wouldnt demand that you do. Baby, you dont have to. I know that you feel that youve disappointed your mother but you havent. Youre far from disappointing her. Youre a good kid, a great kid. Dont let her make you think otherwise.
But shes my mother and I have to do what she says, I cried.
So am I, she confirmed.
Tina held me by the shoulders and forced me to look her in the eyes.
So am I.
*****
The sound of their raised voices woke me from the twisted slumber that I found myself in. Back arched, one knee drawn close to my stomach while the other one pointed downward. And my calf was somehow wrapped around my left arm. Or my left arm was entangled with my leg. Either way I began to feel the pain from my awkward position. Carefully and extremely slowly I unscrewed myself and sat up in the closet. I could hear Tina screaming at my mother and my mother yelling back.
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I love this story!! I’ve read all the parts and all I have to say is; keep ’em coming!
I hope they find her in there and feel bad. Great story.
You have me soo wrapped up in this story!! Please maybe just one more for tonight? I love the insight on Bette and Tina’s relationship. What I love more is the realtionship Between Evan and Lindsey! Their making some smart decisions at a young age! Total opposite of what i did girlfriend!!
I love your story. Please more.
She’s in the closet huh? HAHAHA, I have a feeling they’re going to find her. Please post again soon!
LOL!!! What u hiding from??? I love this story. more, more, more.
really beautiful and kind..they needed that kind os conversation to works things out again..go on please
Love this story, although Bette seems a bit cold.
Why was she in the closet? Can’t wait for the next chapter.
I love how you are telling us this story through Evan’s eyes! Very interesting and enlightening! This story makes me want to be a better parent!
Aww…no child (myself included) likes to hear their parents arguing…I’m proud of Evan, she’s brave…hopefully, the tension in the household eases up a bit…omg, I can only imagine how nervous Evan was thinking about her first time…geez, I should know…when it comes to relationships, I suck at it…wait rewind that, what relationships?!…I’m a 19 year old who’s never dated before, sad huh?!…Anyways, kick ARSE chapter! Please update soon!
Another good chapter. Post soon.