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the misadventures of Evan-Marie:the girl episode part 8( sequel to who holds…)
present day
For the first time in weeks both of us were speechless. During our mini-marathon of the television show The X-Files, we couldnt help but laugh at Mulders jokes and swoon over Scully. We even argued over which season Scully looked her best. Lindsey was stuck on the last two seasons while I said season five was her best. A stupid argument, sure but it was our stupid argument. I had been at her house since early that Saturday morning munching on food and on her. Both my favorites. Her father was away on business and so we had the house to ourselves. Lindsey had only told me recently about her mothers death. I thought both her parents were alive but after our suspension, she told me that Mr. Kierson couldnt call her mother because she was dead. In fact Mr. Kierson couldnt even get in contact with her father…he was away on business. But enough about that.
We stood outside her bedroom door; me staring at the nameplate hanging in its center and her staring at me. I didnt need her to say she was waiting for me to make the first move, that I already knew.
So…this is your room? I asked nervously.
Ya know, it looks much better on the inside, she said suggestively.
Youre probably right, I laughed.
Wanna check it out? she asked putting her hand on the door ***** beginning to turn it.
No! Wait! I screamed.
She released the ***** and held her hands up as if the ***** itself was on fire.
What? Lindsey asked confused by my sudden outburst.
I, uh, I think we, uh…
Nervous? she asked dropping her hands and holding mine.
Very.
I am, too. Ive never done this before, she confessed.
Really?
As much as I act like am experienced, Im not. This is my first time, too
Wow.
I know, that is a lot to take in but Im telling you the truth.
In those few seconds, my nerves settled somewhat.
We can wait, Lindsey offered.
I dont want to.
I think we should wait. Make our first time special.
It didnt take me to long to agree.
I would like that, I agreed.
Whew, Im glad thats settled, she laughed.
I joined her.
Want to see my room anyway?
Without the pressure to live up to her expectations, I answered immediately.
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(29 votes, average: 3.66 out of 5)
I love this story!! I’ve read all the parts and all I have to say is; keep ’em coming!
I hope they find her in there and feel bad. Great story.
You have me soo wrapped up in this story!! Please maybe just one more for tonight? I love the insight on Bette and Tina’s relationship. What I love more is the realtionship Between Evan and Lindsey! Their making some smart decisions at a young age! Total opposite of what i did girlfriend!!
I love your story. Please more.
She’s in the closet huh? HAHAHA, I have a feeling they’re going to find her. Please post again soon!
LOL!!! What u hiding from??? I love this story. more, more, more.
really beautiful and kind..they needed that kind os conversation to works things out again..go on please
Love this story, although Bette seems a bit cold.
Why was she in the closet? Can’t wait for the next chapter.
I love how you are telling us this story through Evan’s eyes! Very interesting and enlightening! This story makes me want to be a better parent!
Aww…no child (myself included) likes to hear their parents arguing…I’m proud of Evan, she’s brave…hopefully, the tension in the household eases up a bit…omg, I can only imagine how nervous Evan was thinking about her first time…geez, I should know…when it comes to relationships, I suck at it…wait rewind that, what relationships?!…I’m a 19 year old who’s never dated before, sad huh?!…Anyways, kick ARSE chapter! Please update soon!
Another good chapter. Post soon.