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the L saga: Episode Twenty-Four
“Can I talk to you?”
Dana turned towards her. “I’m busy,” she turned back around and continued to talk. Tina looked at Alice and looked at Dana.
“Dana—can I please talk to you?”
“Can’t you see I’m talking?” Dana retorted. Alice felt hurt and walked away. Bette looked at Dana.
“What was that about?” Dana shook her head.
“It was nothing.”
“That was really rude of you Dana, you better go talk to her. C’mon Tina,” Bette and Tina walked away from Dana. Dana sighed heavily as she went to go find Alice.
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Shane walked towards the booth and walked over to Carmen. She wrapped her arms around Carmen, and Carmen smiled.
“You’re doing great tonight.”
“Thank you,” Shane leaned closer to her and kissed her skin.
“You look beautiful tonight.” Carmen bit her bottom lip as Shane purred in her ear.
“Are you trying to earn something McCutcheon?”
Shane smirked. “Yeah, you can say that.”
“Because you’re getting closer to your prize.” Shane smiled and kissed Carmen’s neck. Cherie watched the display of affection between Shane and Carmen. She downed the rest of her martini and licked her lips. She walked away from the table and back to the bar.
“Hey, don’t you think it’s time for that big announcement?” Carmen looked at Shane, and Shane smiled.
“I guess it is.” Shane reached past Carmen and grabbed the mic. Carmen turned the music down, and everybody looked at Shane. “Hey you guys, thanks for coming here tonight. I really appreciate it a lot. Well—on to the big announcement.” She took a deep breath and smiled. “I’ve been offered a multi-million dollar deal with Harbor Inc. to open up a five salons in the United States and six overseas, and I told them yes. So you’re now looking at a rich woman.” Everybody cheered and clapped, and Shane smiled. “So I’ll be leaving in two days for New York City to work on the new salon.” The cheering and the clapping continued. “So you guys enjoy the rest of your night, and thank you once again for being here.” Shane nodded and handed the mic back to Carmen. Shane wrapped her arm around Carmen and hugged her. She gave her a kiss on the cheek. “I need to talk to you later.” Shane pulled away from Carmen, and Carmen continued to play the music. Bette, Tina, Helena, Ryan, Jenny and Diem found Shane and congratulated her.
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(36 votes, average: 3.36 out of 5)
I did love it u were right. U gotta keep posting and keep me entertained, other wise i will find things to blame on u and give my College tutor this website and tell him to shout at u for my unfinished work :D
T.A.’s are trouble…be careful Bette.
Jenny is like the old Shane. And for real if i was Carmen i would ouch Shane so hard in her face that it would make her think about me alot more haha man whats up with her!?!? haha i get really into the stories as you can see. I’m glad Dana and Alice worked things out…. and i fyou kill Cherie i promisse you no one will miss her haha
its punch not ouch sorry
Damn trouble or drama coming and is big. Bette be careful or Tina gonna kick your ass. Im with Probie and let see more please, thanks!
Toyna and Dana again No way. Shane is going to lose Carman for an old bag. like Cherie ugh Bette should watch her PA as the like to get close to the teacher and good sex and good grades. Tina will beat some a** or kick Bette one thanks
Stands up applauding
I still think Alice gave in to easily. I think Dana, Bette, Helena and Shane need to go to a class on how to keep the hussys at bay. While thier partners can go to a class on how to keep the hussys away from your girlfriend (LOL).
lol@Probie! I think Zara should hook up with Shy and they can be slutty together, unless Shy is already dead from OD’ing on drugs. Oh man I wonder if Ton-Ton is back to try and get Dana again?