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The Greatest Love Story Ever Told
“Tina you didn’t”
“I did, I got bored of the lecture, then I had to spend the rest of the day and night visiting every bloody relative I have and apologise for not being at the party…..nightmare….so what did you get up to last night”
“Not a lot…just watched a bit of T.V. then caught up on some sleep”
“Good, oh before I forget the last suppers starts at 7.00, mum said can you tell dour face, she being trying to ring him all weekend apparently”
“Dad’s away on business somewhere, he won’t be back until Friday”
“Oh good….oops…. I meant he will be missed….anyway I’ll be going then things to do , people to see” Tina rolled onto her back and was ready to get up when Bette grabbed her arm.
“What, you’ve just got here….can’t you stay, at least for a little while” Bette pleaded
“I was planning to spend the rest of the afternoon with you, that was when I thought you might be missing me…but since your not….” Tina teases.
“And did you have anything specific in mind what we could do this afternoon…that is if I had missed you” Bette tugged at Tina arm and pulled her closer
“If you had missed me then I did think of few ways you could improve on your technique and I was prepared to share them with you….maybe even show you” Tina voice was low and raspy
“Oh really” Bette matched Tina’s tone.
“Yeah” Tina whispered just as she dropped her eyelids and melted under Bette’s lips.
It was 6.30 before they came up for air and Tina scarpered back home.
After a pleasant dinner Bette and Tina cleared up then escaped up to Tina’s room it seemed that no time has passed at all when they heard the light tapping on Tina’s bedroom door and her dad peeped his head in.
“Ok girls Tina has an early start in the morning, time to say your goodbyes. He said.
“Ok Dad” she replied as he closed the door.
Tina took Bette’s hands and dropped her head on to Bette’s forehead, her heart sank and it continued to sink until it reached the pit of her stomach. She dropped her eyelids in a feeble attempt to stop the tears from falling. Bette’s soft voice brought little comfort.
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I am lovin’ lovin’ lovin this story. MORE!!! :) please
What a beautiful story PPS
the bitch! but why?
Those little grifters have obviously taken the money and run. Never mind them, I have a better plan. Someone’s put a set of evil winged monkeys up on eBay… I’m top bidder and there’s not long to go. Just you wait, skimmer! Ha! In the meantime, whilst we’re doing all this waiting, any chance of the next post? Cheers!
Skimmer – still great to read for the 2nd time. THank you and now I’m waiting to read the continuation. Thank you still excellent story teller!
Thanks and we wait for the continuation. :o)
jp, you mean to tell me that £3.26 didn’t buy you professionals? God, what is the world coming to… Skimmer, you better come out of that hole with a new chapter soon. I mean it.
That was wonderful and B&T are awesome and love them, let see more of B&T. Please post more, thanks!
This is a wonderful story
Hi skimmer,I was directed to your stories by the forum board.Reading them now and loving every minute of it.Thanks for sharing your talent.