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The Countdown! Sequel to What have I done? Chapter 107
Chapter 107
“Oh God Baby…you’re teasing me…you must have reached 68 kisses by now.” Tina was finding it difficult to speak.
Bette kissed Tina on the tummy. “Sorry T….but I’m only up to 45.” Bette went back to kissing Tina. She stopped and looked up at her and smiled. Tina smiled back. “This is driving me crazy too you know….but I promised you 68 kisses – and that’s what your going to get.”
“Ok…oh my God Bette….please get on with it…or I’m going to explode.” Tina’s back arched as Bette stuck her tongue into her belly button. “Are you there yet….come on Babe …that has to be 68.”
“I’ve got news for you Tina – it’s only 47! Now – if you’d stop interrupting me I might get to my destination at some point today…but if you keep talking to me – asking me questions like that….I’ll lose count and then you know what’s going to happen don’t you?” Bette winked her sexiest wink at Tina.
“God Baby…no… what?”
“I’ll have to start all over again…now…see that….TINA…I lost count….*****…awwww….I need to start all over again!”
“You were up to 62.” Tina hoped she was convincing.
“You liar….was not!”
“Were too.”
“Nope…was not…so…here I go again. Get ready.” Bette moved back up the bed and was face to face with Tina.
“Baby…why are you torturing me? Come on….68….kiss me….68….come on you know you want to….68…please Baby…put me out of my pre ***** misery!”
“Pre ***** misery huh? So you’re in misery…I’m kissing you everywhere – all over your body – and you’re in misery?”
“Oh come on Baby…you know what I mean….you’re kisses drive me crazy….can’t we speed this up a tad….let’s go straight to 69 ok?”
“Well…if you insist T….I guess…but I hate to break my promise to you….”
“Damn it Bette…break it…please!”
“Oh alright!”
“Bette – I was thinking – instead of top and bottom let’s do it side by side. Less back strain and it could be more fun!!!”
“Ok….sounds like a viable plan…are you really sure you don’t want 68 more kisses from me?”
“Of course I want them from you….but not NOW! Come on Baby…let’s do it….I’m dying here.”
Bette turned her body around and rested her head on the inside of Tina’s left thigh. Tina rested her head on the inside of Bette’s left thigh.
“Ok….T?”
“Yeah Babe?”
“Now that we’re in this position – please – when your pre ***** misery comes to an end – don’t crush my skull – ok?”
“Very funny Porter….now get to work!”
“Such a hopeless romantic Kennard!”
“You think?” Bette had taken her order to get to work seriously and had done just that. “Oh God Baby….you’re…not going….oh my God…you’re not going to…ahhh….let me finish…Baby – yeah right there…my sentence are…you?” Bette had spread Tina’s wetness open with her fingers and was now moving her tongue up and down the outside of Tina.
Tina quickly joined in – even though breathing had already become a serious issue for her. “Oh God Baby…Bette…you’re so wet…my God…I love you….” Tina slid her tongue up and down Bette’s wetness and slid two fingers into her. Bette responded by arching her back and moaning softly.
As they both continued to use their tongues to please each other – they both – almost frantically – searched for the other’s hands. When their hands finally connected… their fingers intertwined. They held hands as they both went over the edge…neither of them wanting to let go. Both of them crying out at the same time – an expression of their love, desire and pleasure.
Bette quickly turned her body around so she was facing Tina. She looked into her eyes. Her eyes somehow looked brighter. They looked at each other for several minutes before sharing a kiss filled with passion. They didn’t speak – they didn’t have to. The love they’d just shared and the comfortable silence between them at that moment said it all.
TBC
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(67 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
double digit numbers need not be counted at times like that. lol. double digits only need to be counted when going rounds in bed or record keeping of orgasms! lol. besides one kiss from bette and the record keeping starts in my most humble opinion. great chapter, please continue, thank you! :)
Between you and Amandamg, I need more cold showers!
Ok – imagine this…a certain writer (me) had to actually draw little Bette and Tina stick figures to make sure I had their heads on the correct thighs! You can do alot with a stick figure. Who knew?
LOL at your comments Lisa. Stick figures ha. Great chapter.
I was so mezmorized by the hotness of this chapter and in my pre-coffee state that as I went to slam another 5 rating on ya I hit the 1 instead…oh boy…no matter still a 5…no reading your stuff before coffee or at least have 2 eyes open…geezzz
Yes – stick figures. And now I’m beginning to think…well maaybe a series of cartoons would be fun…”Stick Figures in Action” – Tinawho? you may be tired but I’ve lost my mind…how do you draw breasts on stick figures anyway?
is it ok to use smarties in stead of m&m’s? allergies you know..
Amanda – gee m&m’s are just like women. I didn’t really say that – did I?
Nightswim – how about SPREE????
do indulge..