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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 30
She hung up the phone and turned to me
Hey you…
Her voice was so soft and tender I melted and when she reached out to my hurt cheek my knees felt weak.
Her touch…
So much tenderness…
So much care…
So much agony…
I wanted her to kiss me…
Love me…
She misinterpreted my soft moan.
Does it hurt?
I opened my eyes and looked in to her chocolatebrown ones.
How could I feel so much for a woman? I had never felt anything like it, I could look into those eyes forever… The feeling she gave me, the tension in my stomach, the lightness in my head… I could see myself in her eyes as I realized I hadn’t answered her yet… But I couldn’t bring myself to break the connection of our gazes…
No… No it’s ok…
I seemed to lose control over every part of my body when she was near me… I couldn’t see clearly, I felt dizzy, my knees buckled, my voice was hoarse… All those things that cheap novels described when mentioning love… I was so in love with her, and nothing else mattered to me that second. I just wanted to be with her, caress her…
*Make love to her*
*Whoaaaa… I don’t even know how to do that…*
I had to touch her… It was an urge too strong to deny or overcome. I approached her and put my arms around her.
Thank you so much Bette… You don’t know what it means to me that you just… care…
She smiled and her soft hands cupped my face… With her everything seemed to fit, like we were made to be together, to touch eachother.
Off course I care…
She gently placed my unhurt cheek against her shoulder and we just stood there for a while, enjoying eachothers presence… Well… I hope…
*God why am I so insecure… She just said she cared right?*
I tried to stop thinking for a while and just enjoy the moment. She caused shivers to run up and down my spine as she played with my hair..
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(30 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
if i die of anticipation its all your fault!!!!!!
great, yet greatly frustrating chapter! Please continue posting fab posts asap
are you trying to kill me? please let them kiss in the next chapter?
okay I’ve been very patient and very nice up until now……LOOK OVER YOUR SHOULDER AND MAKE SURE YOUR DOORS AND WINDOWS ARE ALWYAS SECURELY LOCKED…CAUSE I’M COMING!!!!!!!!!! U TEASER…..Y STOP THERE ESPECIALLY AFTER SUCH A LONG DELAY IN UPDATES?????!!!!!!
hey just why leave it there i hope they kiss in the next chapter i cant wait
This story is fantastic but soooo frustrating. Enuf already, kiss, kiss please.
Argh, de spanning valt te snijden! Hou ons niet langer in spanning en zorg ervoor dat ze nu eens doen wat hun hart zegt :) Loved it, as always!
at least have them kiss….oh I’m dying here!!!!
justloveB+T, I love this story. Bette and Tina belong together in your story. Who will open the door frist? Thank you for your writting Please Post Soon
WHAT?! 6 pages without a KISS!!!! Oh man, you really like to torture us, don’t you? You seem to enjoy that, you are being mean, young lady! lol.. Come on Bette, just open the damn door and give Tina a kiss of DEATH! LOL…i mean take her her breath away… ahh.. can’t wait! Please continue.
Girl… you´re killing me here!!! Don´t be that cruel with us please….POST SOON!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY…
Well…you´re were right…i loved it..just great at always…but…hm…cliffhangers :), but am thinking we are getting there soon…right? Post soon…plz and thanks for saving my day..again…
Hi! i make a happy face when i see you have post! yea! and when i finish readign i was so happy! this chapter was so sweet with a lot of spark! and truly love. i know that is a lot of pressure about the kiss but girl you can write wathever you want i am always be happy to read it cause every time you make a post you do it in style! i love this story! take care!
F*ck, why stop here. Hé, hoe kan je dat nou zo harteloos zijn. Mijn computerscherm kwam steeds dichterbij….en juist op het laatste moment, oeps, gedaan. Zit ik hier wel met een levensgroot probleem nietwaar ;). Wel je kan het nog net goedmaken, ik blijf hier nog een uurtje zitten en ik verwacht je volgende post. OK?
I love it, just let them talk to each other and admit what they are indeed feeling. Thanks for the post.
You do know how to torture us, don’t you! Great story – great writing. Just…need…more…please
you just love to torture me…simple sorry won’t work this time…do something…this chapter was so great, how can you express the intensity of their feelings the way that i can totally feel it…just perfect
Your killing me here!!!!! lol you have no idea how much i love this story!!!! I cant wait for them to finally share their first kiss!!!! Your doing an amazing job, keep them coming
The tension is filling up every available space and is starting to choke Bette and Tina (and everyone else). I love to watch people get to know one another and I love long stories. The build up is hard sometimes but is so worth the wait. You are the leader and I will follow. Besides I hate leading, it is much funnier to just hang out follow right along. I miss Rosy, can she come out to play with me? Maybe she will get to come visit Tina that way I can see her also. I love the way you have allowed us to see the inner workings of Bette and Tina.
well when i saw six pages with pg ratin i was happy tht ok maybe a kiss would pass your censorship and i might imagin them kissing an maybe have a peacefull night but babe ya really killin me here have sum merci on frustrated souls like us who still belive in tibette inspite of their fall out if they dunkiss already i would break the damn door myself lolpls post soon coz i am eagerly waitin preety plslol
I love love this story! Dont normaly comment but wanted to say what a great job your doing with this one. I can’t wait for theire first kiss, maybe next chapter eh! Post real soon.
Wonderful update can’t wait for more.
whooooooooooooooo 6 pages you give me oxygen and then u suck all the air out of the room by playing with door!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
J’adore ton histoire et j’attends avec impatience la suite. Je te fais confiance pour la suite, tu n’as pas besoin de nos conseils. Continue, nous sommes pendues à tes lèvres!!!!Post soon please…
thanks for the wink… you were right i was reading at work early this morning.. about 4am… love this story… and i love the pace… keep it real… so open the door already… and let bette give her the good night kiss we all want to see… later baby
Are they gonna play Tug of War with the door handle? LOL “Hey, why won’t the damn door open!?” *tug, tug, fall back on butt* OOF! “We’ve got to stop meeting like this” I remember Randy saying that in the bathroom in “Incredibly True Adventure of Two Girls in Love” and thought it was adorable then. It was still adorable with Bette saying it here. Thank god we got a chapter today! I was missing this story yesterday and sat around all morning here at work refreshing the site hoping for new material. Wow you can tell I love my job right? ;)
You’re killing us here!! lol plz post soon!!!
You are such a tease! I bet you are going to make them both chicken out and go back to bed, or the lock will get stuck or something, or Alice will call – anything to keep those lips from kissing…Still waiting for more.
The SUSPENSE is KILLING ME! Please post again soon!
Haha.. it reminds me of… well in … I pushed open the door to my roomate’s room and she was standing right behind the door, so the door corner hit straight right down in the middle of her face.. hurting her nose and especially her lips.. causing the lower lip to bleed a little… oh gosh :S hey, u can write on this idea and have Bette checking Tina’s bleeding lip and then… grazing lip with fingers?? and then they kiss?? ;)
btw, I totally understand how it feels to have ‘killed’ so many readers ;) but no worries, u’re doing such a great job, I bet they aren’t really complaining :D
you truely are killing us here! lol pls post very very soon!
Good chapter. Ahh not nice to leave us like this and please post soon, thanks!