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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 30
Previously on ‘the beginning of a friendship’:
Bette:
‘Tina?’
She looked upto me and a sunray caught her face as she did, making her eyes sparkle and her hair glister… I forgot to breathe… I forgot everything around me.. She looked so beautifull…
But…
She would never be mine…
‘What do you want for breakfast? I’m starving!’
And with those words I turned around and made my way to the kitchen…
*I’m starving allright… But I’m not sure it’s for food…*
And sighing I opened my fridge, hoping to find something in it…
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Chapter 30
Tina:
After I had called in sick, we spent the day talking… I talked so much my throat was dry… we talked about Eric and my family which made me cry, we talked about the pizza, that was still on the cabinet in the hallway which made me laugh… It just felt so right being there, and she listened…
*How can listening be sexy?*
But she made it that way…
Her big dark eyes looked into mine with such interest, and with her somewhat husky voice she asked exactly the right questions on exactly the right time…
I had missed her when she had ordered me to go and take a shower (she couldn’t herself, she had to wait a while with her knee)…
I’d missed her so much in those 15 minutes I wondered how I’d gotten through days without her…
She must have changed while I was in the shower for when I got downstairs again she was on the couch making a phonecall…
She was wearing one of those suits she seemed to be so fond off, her beautifull long legs crossed over eachother…
I just stood there in awe of her beauty.
‘No Al, really I’m fine’
Bette:
After breakfast we talked…. Well actually, she talked and I listened… She had gone through more in 24 hours than most people went through in 10 years. We laughed when we found the very cold and very hard pizza, still on top of the cabinet. She cried as she told me how Rosy was taken away from her. I softly stroked her back while she let the tears shed, less desparetly than the night before.
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if i die of anticipation its all your fault!!!!!!
great, yet greatly frustrating chapter! Please continue posting fab posts asap
are you trying to kill me? please let them kiss in the next chapter?
okay I’ve been very patient and very nice up until now……LOOK OVER YOUR SHOULDER AND MAKE SURE YOUR DOORS AND WINDOWS ARE ALWYAS SECURELY LOCKED…CAUSE I’M COMING!!!!!!!!!! U TEASER…..Y STOP THERE ESPECIALLY AFTER SUCH A LONG DELAY IN UPDATES?????!!!!!!
hey just why leave it there i hope they kiss in the next chapter i cant wait
This story is fantastic but soooo frustrating. Enuf already, kiss, kiss please.
Argh, de spanning valt te snijden! Hou ons niet langer in spanning en zorg ervoor dat ze nu eens doen wat hun hart zegt :) Loved it, as always!
at least have them kiss….oh I’m dying here!!!!
justloveB+T, I love this story. Bette and Tina belong together in your story. Who will open the door frist? Thank you for your writting Please Post Soon
WHAT?! 6 pages without a KISS!!!! Oh man, you really like to torture us, don’t you? You seem to enjoy that, you are being mean, young lady! lol.. Come on Bette, just open the damn door and give Tina a kiss of DEATH! LOL…i mean take her her breath away… ahh.. can’t wait! Please continue.
Girl… you´re killing me here!!! Don´t be that cruel with us please….POST SOON!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY…
Well…you´re were right…i loved it..just great at always…but…hm…cliffhangers :), but am thinking we are getting there soon…right? Post soon…plz and thanks for saving my day..again…
Hi! i make a happy face when i see you have post! yea! and when i finish readign i was so happy! this chapter was so sweet with a lot of spark! and truly love. i know that is a lot of pressure about the kiss but girl you can write wathever you want i am always be happy to read it cause every time you make a post you do it in style! i love this story! take care!
F*ck, why stop here. Hé, hoe kan je dat nou zo harteloos zijn. Mijn computerscherm kwam steeds dichterbij….en juist op het laatste moment, oeps, gedaan. Zit ik hier wel met een levensgroot probleem nietwaar ;). Wel je kan het nog net goedmaken, ik blijf hier nog een uurtje zitten en ik verwacht je volgende post. OK?
I love it, just let them talk to each other and admit what they are indeed feeling. Thanks for the post.
You do know how to torture us, don’t you! Great story – great writing. Just…need…more…please
you just love to torture me…simple sorry won’t work this time…do something…this chapter was so great, how can you express the intensity of their feelings the way that i can totally feel it…just perfect
Your killing me here!!!!! lol you have no idea how much i love this story!!!! I cant wait for them to finally share their first kiss!!!! Your doing an amazing job, keep them coming
The tension is filling up every available space and is starting to choke Bette and Tina (and everyone else). I love to watch people get to know one another and I love long stories. The build up is hard sometimes but is so worth the wait. You are the leader and I will follow. Besides I hate leading, it is much funnier to just hang out follow right along. I miss Rosy, can she come out to play with me? Maybe she will get to come visit Tina that way I can see her also. I love the way you have allowed us to see the inner workings of Bette and Tina.
well when i saw six pages with pg ratin i was happy tht ok maybe a kiss would pass your censorship and i might imagin them kissing an maybe have a peacefull night but babe ya really killin me here have sum merci on frustrated souls like us who still belive in tibette inspite of their fall out if they dunkiss already i would break the damn door myself lolpls post soon coz i am eagerly waitin preety plslol
I love love this story! Dont normaly comment but wanted to say what a great job your doing with this one. I can’t wait for theire first kiss, maybe next chapter eh! Post real soon.
Wonderful update can’t wait for more.
whooooooooooooooo 6 pages you give me oxygen and then u suck all the air out of the room by playing with door!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
J’adore ton histoire et j’attends avec impatience la suite. Je te fais confiance pour la suite, tu n’as pas besoin de nos conseils. Continue, nous sommes pendues à tes lèvres!!!!Post soon please…
thanks for the wink… you were right i was reading at work early this morning.. about 4am… love this story… and i love the pace… keep it real… so open the door already… and let bette give her the good night kiss we all want to see… later baby
Are they gonna play Tug of War with the door handle? LOL “Hey, why won’t the damn door open!?” *tug, tug, fall back on butt* OOF! “We’ve got to stop meeting like this” I remember Randy saying that in the bathroom in “Incredibly True Adventure of Two Girls in Love” and thought it was adorable then. It was still adorable with Bette saying it here. Thank god we got a chapter today! I was missing this story yesterday and sat around all morning here at work refreshing the site hoping for new material. Wow you can tell I love my job right? ;)
You’re killing us here!! lol plz post soon!!!
You are such a tease! I bet you are going to make them both chicken out and go back to bed, or the lock will get stuck or something, or Alice will call – anything to keep those lips from kissing…Still waiting for more.
The SUSPENSE is KILLING ME! Please post again soon!
Haha.. it reminds me of… well in … I pushed open the door to my roomate’s room and she was standing right behind the door, so the door corner hit straight right down in the middle of her face.. hurting her nose and especially her lips.. causing the lower lip to bleed a little… oh gosh :S hey, u can write on this idea and have Bette checking Tina’s bleeding lip and then… grazing lip with fingers?? and then they kiss?? ;)
btw, I totally understand how it feels to have ‘killed’ so many readers ;) but no worries, u’re doing such a great job, I bet they aren’t really complaining :D
you truely are killing us here! lol pls post very very soon!
Good chapter. Ahh not nice to leave us like this and please post soon, thanks!