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The Beginning Of A Friendship, Chpt 21
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Sure we are… I mean… If you still want to… I mean… Oh god! I dont know what I mean!
I had started off sweetly, trying to make it up to her, but I was so annoyed by my own confusion I hided my face behind my hands and rubbed hard over my cheecks, trying to recollect my thoughts.
When I looked up, shyly, I caught Bettes blinking, somewhat surprised look.
Sorry… I continued, starting to take the paintings out of my trunk I mean I would really like to see you again tomorrow… But if you dont feel like having lunch with me than thats fine of course… Im really sorry to leave you like this. I seem to be feeling sick a lot these days
I was actually trembling on my feet again when I said this, and my heart was pounding like I had just run a marathon.
Im sorry T… Im not feeling to good myself… Sorry I took it out on you
She looked into my eyes apoligizingly
Im also sorry I havent told you my father is african-american
A blush shot upto my cheeks… She must have noticed my confusion
Dont worry about it T
She softly placed her hand at my arm, but the connection… That tension that was building up between our eyes… She broke it… faster than she had ever done… She seemed to be building a wall between us.
Im sorry Bette
It came out hoarsly… Damn! I felt soo stupid!
Bette:
I couldnt look at her… I loved her so damn much it hurted and I couldnt stand the thought of spending the night, lonely and miserable in my house-but-not-home and even worse was the thought of her in the arms of Eric.
Really, Tina, dont worry about it, its not a crime to be surprised, I should have told you…
I wanted her to stay and I wanted her to leave… Both seemed extremely frustrating.
*Damn! She confused me… She dazzled me…*
She blushed, shyly, and looked so sweet my heart melted… I wanted this woman so bad… every piece of her, every thought, every beat of her heart I wanted… I wanted her to be part of my life, spend her life with me…
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Children are so smart,they know who loves they complete.Looks like Steve and Tina is the winners here. Hope Steve kicks Erice ass for hurting Tina. Lets get our girls together and get rid of everyone but Rosie and Steve. thanks
those two are killing me…talk, talk, talk…please
Poor Tina! Here she comes to the realization that she is falling in love but not with Eric but a woman. And of course that woman being Bette, is a woman of passion and love in her heart. Tina is afraid of her feelings and now she is faced with not only her family but Eric’s family. I hope that Rosie will help Tina to follow her heart right into Bette’s waiting arms. It would be interesting to see what kind of reaction that Bette would have to Rosie and Rosie to Bette. This is an amazing story.
Good chapter. I agree with Lamentamini, what stupid sister and a asshole boyfriend, let Steve kick eric ass and then Tina break up with him at the same time too. Bette and Tina need to talk and open up to each other. Ok post soon please, thanks!
damn eric!!!!! relax bette, tina u want each other time this will take time
so the whole family came to visit… maybe they can take eric back with them… and yes i do hope steve sees tinas wrists… and then he beats the shit out of eric… love rosie… see kids know who love them… thats why she was always with tina… and her mother needs to be bitch slapped… please continue
Bette, Bette, Bette…you must be patient with our young southern belle. Give her some tme to learn about the ways of the world. And Julia needs to be bitchslapped. Stupid people should not breed. Stevie, look at Tina’s wrist, then make her tell you how she got that bruise, then go beat the shit out of Eric. (Sorry I’m in a pissy mood today so I want to beat the crap out of assholes even moreso than usual =/)
OK, in two words, JUST AMAZING.Love your story and love your style.
Well, that will just screw up tina’s lunch date with Bette, pls don’t have Bette take it the wrong way!!!
what can i say this was amazing chapter just loving the wat you write lets hope tina tells eric soon post soon
Kids know who love them more ;) Well sure hope Tina will sort out her confusion soon, let her talk to someone before she let her confusion and fear eat her up alive :D love your story.
Jeez the whole family came to visit…could it be Eric is planning on surprising Tina with a marriage proposal? And of course, in front of her family so she’ll feel obligated to say yes. I have that feeling, he’s such a jerk. Hope Steve see’s Tina’s wrists and takes care of Eric. Rosie is so adorable…children sense when people love them. Rosie’s special to Tina and vice versa. Poor Bette…hope she doesn’t give up on Tina, because all Tina needs is to spend more time with Bette. Thanks for the update.
great update.. hope these guys get their shit together soon. by the way is steve gay? just kinda got that feeling! maybe tina will confide in him and put her mind at ease a bit!! just a thought.x.x.