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The Beginning Of A Friendship, Chpt 21
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Are you ok Tina?
She spoke softly… Tenderly… Cupping my face in her hands and looking intensly into my eyes.
*Please Bette… Please kiss me…*
I… Im fine
I stammered
Youre trembling… Are you sure?
Her eyes were filled with concern and I loved her for it… It felt like I loved her more every second… every nanosecond… I started trembling even more realizing how much I longed for her to touch me, to kiss me, to want me…
T? Should I take you home?
I was a coward… A stupid, blond, countrygirl coward… But I couldnt handle the confusion, the race of my mind had won over the race of my heart…
*This time*
It scared me, the way I felt, and it was that feeling that made me nod my head…
Yes… I think Ill head home
Bette:
Disappointment… Sadness… Hurt… It must have been showing in my eyes before I could put my protective wall up again, which was the hardest thing I had done in a long time… Including talking to my sister!
She wanted to leave… She didnt feel it… The strong connection between us…
Hey Babysis! Wazzup!?
Saved! At least I could have T close to me for a few more minutes while I introduced her to my sister.
Hey Kit, This is Tina, Tina, my sister Kit
Tina:
Well… this definitly explained Bettes beautifull tanned skin, but I hadnt expected it… at all… That pointed out to me how naive I was… Truely a countrygirl…
Kit stretched out her hand and I, still dazzled, took it. Why did the color of somebodies skin confuse me that much? I mean… I could have known through the poem? Why was I so naive????
Heard a lot about you, girl!
Ive heard a lot about you too
Yep, I heard! Youre the one who stood up to my babysis… Youve got my back huh?
Kit smiled, and it was a real smile, not only lips, but eyes too. I dont know why, but it kind of reassured me instantly and I gave her a smile too.
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Children are so smart,they know who loves they complete.Looks like Steve and Tina is the winners here. Hope Steve kicks Erice ass for hurting Tina. Lets get our girls together and get rid of everyone but Rosie and Steve. thanks
those two are killing me…talk, talk, talk…please
Poor Tina! Here she comes to the realization that she is falling in love but not with Eric but a woman. And of course that woman being Bette, is a woman of passion and love in her heart. Tina is afraid of her feelings and now she is faced with not only her family but Eric’s family. I hope that Rosie will help Tina to follow her heart right into Bette’s waiting arms. It would be interesting to see what kind of reaction that Bette would have to Rosie and Rosie to Bette. This is an amazing story.
Good chapter. I agree with Lamentamini, what stupid sister and a asshole boyfriend, let Steve kick eric ass and then Tina break up with him at the same time too. Bette and Tina need to talk and open up to each other. Ok post soon please, thanks!
damn eric!!!!! relax bette, tina u want each other time this will take time
so the whole family came to visit… maybe they can take eric back with them… and yes i do hope steve sees tinas wrists… and then he beats the shit out of eric… love rosie… see kids know who love them… thats why she was always with tina… and her mother needs to be bitch slapped… please continue
Bette, Bette, Bette…you must be patient with our young southern belle. Give her some tme to learn about the ways of the world. And Julia needs to be bitchslapped. Stupid people should not breed. Stevie, look at Tina’s wrist, then make her tell you how she got that bruise, then go beat the shit out of Eric. (Sorry I’m in a pissy mood today so I want to beat the crap out of assholes even moreso than usual =/)
OK, in two words, JUST AMAZING.Love your story and love your style.
Well, that will just screw up tina’s lunch date with Bette, pls don’t have Bette take it the wrong way!!!
what can i say this was amazing chapter just loving the wat you write lets hope tina tells eric soon post soon
Kids know who love them more ;) Well sure hope Tina will sort out her confusion soon, let her talk to someone before she let her confusion and fear eat her up alive :D love your story.
Jeez the whole family came to visit…could it be Eric is planning on surprising Tina with a marriage proposal? And of course, in front of her family so she’ll feel obligated to say yes. I have that feeling, he’s such a jerk. Hope Steve see’s Tina’s wrists and takes care of Eric. Rosie is so adorable…children sense when people love them. Rosie’s special to Tina and vice versa. Poor Bette…hope she doesn’t give up on Tina, because all Tina needs is to spend more time with Bette. Thanks for the update.
great update.. hope these guys get their shit together soon. by the way is steve gay? just kinda got that feeling! maybe tina will confide in him and put her mind at ease a bit!! just a thought.x.x.