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The “B” word Chapter 33 Beach And Bargins
Two unmarked FBI cars are speeding down Pacific Coast Highway.
Dominic and the girls are looking for the house.
There it isBette yells out
Dominic turns on his turn signal and turns into the drive..He is relieved that the security gate is up and he can zip right on through.
He pulls up to the house He is greeted by a guard who has a huge rottweiler on a leash.
The guard asks him if he was followed.
No one followed us.. Dominic announces
Who are they? The guard says as he points to Bette and Tina..
Their with methey are ok.The guard looks them up and down.
Tina grabs a hold of Bette hand
Were okTDominic wont let anything happen to us.. Bette whispers.
The other men see they have arrived and they hustle Maria out to the patio
Maria.I have been waiting to meet you face to face.. A female voice says.
Maria is too terrified to talk.She just looks..
Just as Dominic and the girls are getting ready to enter the mansion..
The one man says..I thought you said you werent followed!
As he points to the two cars that just sped into the drive way.
The men in the suits.wisk Bette and Tina into the house
The other men draw their guns..
No dont do that.he tells them.please they are not here to harm..
Back at Bette and Tinas house.
Shane and Jenny are pacing the floor.Alice, Dana, and Carmen arrived..
They are shocked at the details of events.
AT the CAC.
Franklin is in conversation with the attorney of the CAC.
After todayI want that ***** out of here! I dont care what happens or who gets mad!
Franklin says as he is shaking his fists.
The attorneysaysBut Franklin.She has a contract.
Meanwhile at the Beach house
Can I offer you a lemonade? The woman says to Maria.
Maria is thinking to herself Is this Peggy Peabody?
Maria has never met her
NO I just would like to know why I am here.I want to be released immediately
Also may I have my cell phone back so I can call my family.I know they are out looking for me.! Maria says in a demanding voice
Boyyou sure arent scared of anything are you? You are in my house with these huge guards and your going to tell me what to do..! The woman announces.as she smirks at Maria.
Maria hesitates and sits down. She sips the lemonade
Your guests have arrived The man announces.
Bette and Tina are guided on to the patio where the woman has Maria..
Dominic is still outside trying to explain who the guys are to the guards..
Maria! Bette says as she grabs her sister up in an embrace Tina and Bette are embracing Maria in a huge hug.
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The three of them have no idea what is in store for them..
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(45 votes, average: 3.36 out of 5)
could you please stop the cliffhanger ? it’s killing us !
OK I”m not reading any more until next week. I can’t take the cliffhangers.
Now spacey, listen very carefully I shall this only once – STOP DOING THIS, you’re driving me crazy with all these cliffhangers, are you trying to send me to an early grave???!!! lol
I wonder if you can be charged with 1st degree murder in a case of heart failure! That’s it…I’m done…you are killing me with these cliffhangers. Jesus, I’m getting old, have a bit of sympathy, child. :-)
No more cliffhangers,I’m to tired and to damn old for many more. Are they all going to be alright? Why the FBI.. okay instead of reading my coment Please write another charter Please.
This is getting more more interesting and excited. Post soon.