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The “B” word Chapter 33 Beach And Bargins
The B Word Chapter 33 Beach, Bulk, & Bargains
The scene opens in the family room of Bette and Tinas house.
Jenny, Shane, Tina, Bette, and Dominic are sitting round very anxious on what to do.
Dominics cell phone is ringing Hello this is Dominic
Dominic replies to the voice on the other endSo she is where?
Tina hands Dominic a pen so he can write down the address.
Dominic asks Is she ok? Dominic has worry in his eyes.
He hangs up the phone.He informs them he knows where she is..
He heads out get in his SUV Escalade..Wait for usBette and Tina run out of the house
Bette tells Shane to call Alana and tell her not to come to the house with the babywhen everything is okThey will come and get Anna Bella.
Dominic speeds out to Malibu with Tina and Bette in the SUV.
Where is she being held..Bette asks
Is she ok? Tina asks.
Dominic calls his friend at the FBITony and tells him to meet him at 3223 Pacific Coast HighwayASAP.He will explain when he sees himJust hurry and bring some back up with you!
Marias cell phone rings Come on let me answer itIts probably my family wondering where I am! Maria fusses at them..
The muscle guy who has the phone looks at her and shuts the phone off.
You *****! Maria says
He looks at the other man who has yet to smile..I think we need to hush her up!
Yea I think we do the other man states as he stands up and walks toward her..
Maria starts to get a little scared but she is too stubborn to let it show and to stupid to shut her mouth.
I cant wait till they get you guys your going to jail with your buddy for a long timeTell Bubba I said hello.! Maria says sarcastically
Just then the door opens..Hey what are you guys doing! The third man says
Maria is thinking to herselfdamn am I lucky..
The boss wants to see her out on the patioin five minutes! He announces and shuts the door.
You see their boss is a woman but you cant see her faceHer voice sounds familiar however..She goes out to the patioHer maid brings her some lemonade..
She looks out onto the infinity poolas she sips her lemonade.
Did you make the phone call? She asks the third man in a suit
Yes we did. He replies
GoodI hope this goes our wayif not. The woman states.
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(45 votes, average: 3.36 out of 5)
could you please stop the cliffhanger ? it’s killing us !
OK I”m not reading any more until next week. I can’t take the cliffhangers.
Now spacey, listen very carefully I shall this only once – STOP DOING THIS, you’re driving me crazy with all these cliffhangers, are you trying to send me to an early grave???!!! lol
I wonder if you can be charged with 1st degree murder in a case of heart failure! That’s it…I’m done…you are killing me with these cliffhangers. Jesus, I’m getting old, have a bit of sympathy, child. :-)
No more cliffhangers,I’m to tired and to damn old for many more. Are they all going to be alright? Why the FBI.. okay instead of reading my coment Please write another charter Please.
This is getting more more interesting and excited. Post soon.