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    Savannah

    Story written on August 27, 2011 by kins40.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=78126
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    Chapter 6

    She made a quick sign with her head to invite the man to sit down. There was no need to attract the other guests’ attention and Mr Duvalier very much did so, with his constant and unbearable guilty demeanour.
    He did not hesitate and took a seat. He knew better than to attract the blonde woman’s anger. He had been on the receiving end of her ire once too many times already.
    Robert Duvalier had been a respected game tracker but a little gambling problem had forced this otherwise quiet man, to offer his knowledge and services to people like Jodie Lerner. 
    This type of business was dangerous but lucrative and it served well to appease the loan sharks which circled the pathetic life of this once upon a time respected man.
    He was now in the employ of Jodie Lerner, a rich, egomaniac and impatient woman who stopped at nothing to get her wishes no matter how illegal the stakes.
    They were a team, a team of poachers and in Robert’s eyes, Jodie was one of the worst kind. 
    She liked killing, taking immense pleasure in downing magnificent species. It was like an obsession to get the biggest and best trophy sized animal. As soon as she was in possession of her trophy, she never took a second glance at the wasted carcass of the animal whose life she had just taken.  Money was not her motive, it was pure ego gratification. 
    If, Duvalier’s weakness for a game of cards, was not already slowly killing him inside, the devastation, people like Miss Lerner created by their actions, was definitely going to be the end of him. He knew it already but he had a family to support and until such times, he would continue to sell bits of his soul to the greatest bidder.
    "I know what happened to our elephant." He said, his shifty eyes darting around to make sure that no one was within earshot. "It was spotted by men of a local tribe and one of the mobile veterinary unit from the Porter Foundation intervened. They treated the animal and last time I saw the beast it was in great shape!"
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    1. You are such an amazing writer..you always have the ability to bring me inside of the story as I if am there observing. Jodie is so slimey..poacher is the perfect job for her. Really great update..can’t wait for more!!

    2. Hey you… So great to be back! I wish I had had a Tina to take care of my own back these last few weeks, that is a sure fact!!!… Anyway, thanks for this chappy, partner, I love the fact that there is a vilain in this story. And what a vilain!! God, how worse could she get??… But I love it. Screw Jod… Oups, sorry for the bad language. I love the African context of this story. I know I will sound like a big softy romantic, but the savannah atmosphere makes great love stories! I love where this is going, and this is a fantastic story. Thanks for sharing. You know that already, but I was lkg fwd to you returning with a new long story. Thanks my friend! xxx Kw

    3. All I know is…is that if ‘Jodie the skanky ho’ messes with that elephant or our Bette and Tina ‘fledgling wannabe / soon to be’ romance…I’m gonnna come through the computer and kick her slimy ass myself! I love this story…thank you so much for the vision of our girls in such an original context…but at the same time keeping us familiar with the girls we know! I can hardly wait for more and I hope you come back soon!! Thank you!!

    4. I really don´t know what it is, but this story reminds me of an old John Wayne movie called Hatari. I don´t think there were any poachers in that film, but a rather flirty baby elephant. I really dislike this Jodie, but it´s such a great story, so a few more chapters and then she better go for a serious walkabout..

    6. Thanks for the update. Please let the injured elephant smell jodi and go crazy and stomp her arrogant ass to death. Hope Tina pushes jodi aside when she appears to get in Bette’s pants. And/or let Bette find out it was jodi that tried to kill the elephant and have her arrested and jailed for years for poaching. Killing her would be the next thing for the authorities to do to her. Just hate her. Thanks.

    7. i can’t wait for the next day either, and as for Jodi, I vote she gets either mauled by a lion or crushed by an elephant! Evil bitch! BTW I went to your page and read all of your stories, I finally found the time to do so, my favorite was “at first sight” very trippy very good! thank you!

    8. Hi Kins! Thanks for the update!! 20degrees is a lot of difference! Good luck for the adaptation ;-) thanks for spare your time to posting the updates :-) hmm.. I am counting on the elephants who is having a very good memory to take necessary action when he sees the assailants! Jodie alone already a disaster, now you put her with lots of money… Egomaniac with blood thirst attitude and not so bright brain.. Ugh!! I hope she’s not having more power as it will be a perfect disaster recipe >_< and Kins my friend.. somehow must admit that you joined the club already as you make Jodi the perfect villain in the story ;-p lol... So glad that you made boundary between her and Bette as I am sure Bette would not be attracted to her at all! Please let the certain nurse blonde and her have more exposure?! ;-) I am so looking forward to their Saturday too :-D

    9. Welcome back Kins! Thanks for the extra posts whilst you were on holiday. Hope you had a wonderful time away. I gotta tell you the opening of this chapter put me back on my heels! I initially mistook the blonde to be Tina. Clumsy reading on my part :S As always, looking forward to MORE! such a well written and enjoyable story.

    10. Beautiful update, thanks;Dwell, “the devil called Jodi” seems will not take Bette out of her head soon! but she make the story more interesting :)I’m looking forward for tomorrow too ;D

    13. Ah, ze plot thickens. If Jodi touches that elephant, I’m coming after her myself. ;-) Welcome back from holiday! (Weird for this usually silent reader to be leaving a first comment.)

    15. Thanks for the update. I never thought I could dislike Jodi more than I already did until now. I love Dainty’s idea of the elephant remembering Jodi and going postal on her…lol.I love the gentleness that Tina has with Bette. I think if Bette is ever going to open up to someone again it will take someone with patience and kindness like Tina.

    16. When you said the “Blonde” can’t remember last night event.. I thought It’s Tina? and Helena is with her?..I’m more worried… but it turns out it’s only Jodie. Man.. I’m relieve..but i’m afraid what is Jodie planning?.. Bet if Bette knew that Jodie is the one who’s responsible to that Elephant’s injury ..She will never forgive her.

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