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Round n Round We Go (Ch.25 finale)
Tina supposed it made a lot of sense, especially when Bette was kissing her with those very persuasive lips, and her equally eloquent, stealth, hot tongue. The image of having that one particularly trained muscle tracing on her breasts, her stomach, and down, and down, to her triangle of secrecy… it made her shiver, and grind her hips into the taller woman’s hip bone. “Fuck this elevator…” Never fast enough.
The swearing induced a surprisingly hoarse chuckle from the brunette. Bette had no idea her throat was already so husky, thick with desire. She was loving the effect her voice had over her lovely wife when she felt Tina grip on her more tightly and seeking for her tongue like a desperate traveler from the Sahara desert.
Another ding set them temporarily apart. It was not their floor yet, a young man hesitantly stepped in, quickly picking up the tension and the pressure in the small tight space. Of all the elevators, he had to choose the one where a blonde woman was shooting eye daggers at him, and the brunette leaned on her back, as if waiting for her company to kill him already. He sighed in relief as he arrived before they could actually slaughter him.
Bette took her wife’s hand and rushed down the hallway for their penthouse room, regretting why she hadn’t just take a regular room on a lower floor. She fumbled for their door card, and almost dropped her handbag when Tina pressed up against her behind, and reached to her front, touching and grabbing with urgency. Gulping in a large amount of air, Bette nearly bumped her head into the wooden board of their hotel door. “T… let me just get it open.”
“No way.” Tina smirked, undoing the buckle with one hand, and sliding in the other. She touched the brim of Bette’s lacy underwear, and as she pushed even further, surely came across the hot mess of moisture gathering there.
At the other end of the hallway, the private elevator dinged. Out came an elderly lady with some mini poodle dogs. The impending stranger made Bette nervous. She searched harder and bit her lower lip in an attempt to prevent the moans that were uncontrollably escaping her throat.
Finally, the lock clicked open. The brunette immediately lunged forward into the privacy their room provided, and decided that it was time for justice. “You, were so naughty!”
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I don’t know. It’s such a relief for me to actually finish a story. And it’s sad for me too.
This story, although originally a little side-away, a break from the other one, now holds a very special place in my experience on this fanfic site.
My readers, your passion and your appreciation fueled my strength all the way to make this happen. I sincerely thank you for that.
Tomorrow my journey to build a life abroad starts. I’m sorry if there’ll be less frequent posts on my other story “The Lucky One”, but I’ll try my best to continue writing.
Forgive me if I can’t reply on the comments in the last chapter. And shoutout to all my friends:
pinky3001, mscully, Jackiee1, wkm, Bibi28, SassyGran, mamadoc91, scribe, lipitora, tibettenation1, ut… and everyone reading and supporting!
I have a plane to catch tomorrow, so I’m gonna go to bed now.
Goodbye, my beloved Beijing!
Greetings, Chicago!
On, Wisconsin!
Thank you !! Happy ending , well, I am sure there are more to come. You have bring a lots of joy to us. I love your stories. Keep it up. Congratulations for the completion.
All the best…!
Thanks for such a lovely story. Travel safe
Sad to see the story ending and hope you will sequels the story. That was awesome and happy ending, they are wonderful love them. Thanks for sharing so this wonderful story with us and hope to see you with the new one soon, thanks my friend !
This is both a happy and sad moment for me. happy this wonderful story, and sad because it was over. I really liked this story was a wonderful story of true love. It was good and bad moments but I love them both!
Thanks to you this share with us. and I wish you good luck and many happy moments to life that is waiting for you!
Thx fgor yor story. I really enjoy it. Save trip for you. Enjoy your new home.
Just a shame this incredible story has come to a end.
I truly enjoyed it, the love, the drama and the makeup.
I wish you the best for your study in the States. And I do hope you will find time to continue the Lucky One.
Have a safe trip and till next time!
Beautiful story! Thank you. Best wishes in Madison!
Really enjoyed this story! Looking forward to more of “The Lucky One” — it is one of my favorites.
Robyn,
Wow! You have really done your homework before your trip :)
Congrats for the perfect ending. I couldn’t ask for more :)
I wish you all the best as you start your incredible journey to a new place.
Eat, Pray, Love!
XOXO,
Scribe
well that was just perfect, and I see you granted my wish by adding little Angelica at the end, and they lived happy ever after, now it’s 100% perfect. Im so sad to see this is the end, but as they say “all good things must come to end”. Have a safe flight and enjoy the city, can’t waiti til you start The Lucky One again, but I guess we can give you a breather first…until next story my friend #Always a Pleasure!
Thank you and good luck for you.
Roby!
My heart’s in pieces because of the end of this wonderful story … Le gradually because I wanted to avoid as much as possible to
at the end, but today I finished reading. (twice today).
A true masterpiece !! two souls who were born to love.
A perfect ending!
I want to thank you for giving this gift to us, your loyal readers.
I know you’ve arrived in Chicago, and I wish you all good luck in your
new home.
Please! do not stop writing.
Good luck!
holas me a encantado la historia desde el principio hasta el final no hubo un cap que no me gustara muchas felicicdades y gracias por escribir esta histria AMO A BETTE PORTER te mando un beso desde cancun
Thank You for this geat story, and I’m really looking for more chapters of Lucky One!!!