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    Revisionist History Chapter 6

    Story written on May 30, 2005 by justkeepswimming.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=54290
    Author Notes:

    A dip in the pool at the end of the work day for B&T. Don’t we all wish we had that pool? We’d make better use of it.

    She rolled into a front crawl position and with two quick strokes had reached a position in the pool where she could stand, her shoulders just above the surface of the water. Tina slowly made her way towards Bette, keeping her head above the water as she swam. Bette reached out for her hands as she approached. Both women moved in circles as their fingers touched.

    Thanks for the time, the fingers on Tinas left hand interlocked with those on Bettes right hand as she spoke.

    Thanks for being all that you are to me, Bette pulled Tina towards her and rested Tinas arm over her right shoulder as she placed her own arms around her lovers waist once again. Their lips met in a tender kiss. As they parted, Bette spoke.
    I checked our reservation – its for 7:30, so we havesome time she finished with a smile.

    And what do you propose we do with all this time, as if I didnt know, Tina laughed as she placed tendrils of Bettes damp hair behind her ears.

    Their lips met in another brief kiss. Do you think its possible for me to make you wetter than you are right now? Bette asked. Tina pulled her in and kissed her deeply as she wrapped her legs around Bettes waist. The cool water contrasted with the heat that came from deep within her wife. Bette no longer even attempted to maintain a cool demeanor. Her hands moved to Tinas full ***** and she pinched both nipples between her index finger and thumb as she cupped each breast in the palm of her hands. She maintained her position in the pool, and their kisses became more passionate, threatening to send her over the edge.

    Bette gradually made her way to the side of the pool once again, and Tina let her legs fall from around Bettes waist, reaching the bottom of the pool.

    Lets go inside, Tina whispered in Bettes ear as they broke the contact between their lips.

    I want you right here, please dont make me wait to get inside.

    Tinas head tilted back as her body reacted to Bettes expression of her desire. Just then she felt Bettes hand move between her legs and gently slide inside her. They stared into each others eyes as Bette moved slowly, but insistently, with the expectation of being able to see Tinas response as her body gripped at Bettes hand when she came.

    Do you want me to move fasteror slower, Bette asked, never letting her eyes leave Tinas.

    Tina was moving with Bettes hand as she spoke one word quietly, so Bette could barely hear her.

    Deeper, she said, reaching once more for Bettes mouth with her lips. Her hand reached to provide Bette the same pleasure she was experiencing, and she couldnt help but moan when she entered her softness.

    Oh God T, Bette squeezed her eyes shut as she felt Tinas fingers inside her. The warm sun continued to beat down on them as they moved against each other, reading the silent signals their bodies gave while the gentle movement of the water made subtle sounds of splashing against the patio. As their actions became more intense, the water crested to higher heights, masking the sounds of their breathing as it became more laboured.

    I want you to tell me when youre coming, Bette asked, again looking into Tinas eyes.

    Im almost there, please dont stop, Tina responded

    Nothing could make me stop, T, I love you, Bettes touch was what Tina craved for release.

    Its building up inside me Bettejust like that, Tina dug her nails into Bettes back as she leaned in for a kiss as she came, trying to continue concentrating on Bettes pleasure. Bette was not far behind, however and soon both were drawing the last of their climax with their fingertips, lips reaching out for a kiss as the relaxation overtook them.

    Their lips parted.

    Wow. We havent made love in the pool for a long time, Tina sighed. That was incredible.

    You are incredible, T, Bette replied.

    They swam briefly before returning to the house and preparing for the supper with Melvin.

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    5. hey- have been out of town and just caught up on this new story. wanted to let you know how much i am enjoying it and will certainly be looking for more. thanks!

    7. They have made changes to the comment area so now I have to use my sign in name …I have been commenting for a year under Paula….I just got cought up on this story and this chapter is just great…thanks and give us more!

    8. *chuckles* you are totally obsessed with swimming. and i like the new revision to that fucked up history they actually left behind. you should be all the writers for a day and i think the characters might be a little happier with their respective situations. anyway, glad you aren’t slacking off like i am. at least one of us is at the grindstone…but maybe i’ll be there soon enough. maybe…

    9. *chuckles* you are totally obsessed with swimming. and i like the new revision to that fucked up history they actually left behind. you should be all the writers for a day and i think the characters might be a little happier with their respective situations. anyway, glad you aren’t slacking off like i am. at least one of us is at the grindstone…but maybe i’ll be there soon enough. maybe…

    10. what do you mean no more loving after this chapter…you can have drama and loving…don’t sell your self short…you are good…so please continue… and again i had a visual of our girls in the pool…loved it…

    15. You wrote:
      1.“…I’m whoring myself out to the NC17 crowd to boost readership.”
      Do repeated readings help your numbers? Glad to oblige!
      2.“Drama awaits, won’t be lovin for a while after this chapter.”
      Oh, that would be the Melvin stuff, wouldn’t it? Gee, can’t we just lurk and lounge by the pool for another afternoon? The show left me all drama-ed out! Can you pass the sunblock? My nose is getting burned out here, poolside.
      Rally, I’m loving this story and will follow wherever you take it!
      Thanks!

    16. WHOA! Thank you for the wonderful Loving B&T Story really Amazing Sexy Story Whoa! I love it that was so Beautiful writing Please post soon.

    17. Sensual, and yet oh so tasteful. Why did I think of Mrs. Peel? Would this be two Mrses Peel, having a go together in the pool?
      Je l’aime beaucoup! Encore!

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