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Revisionist History Chapter 6
Bettes eyes lit up. My greatest insight today is regarding the fact that we have a pool in the back yardit is an unseasonably warm dayand Im home earlyand Ive earned your forgiveness
This time, Tina stopped Bettes words with her mouth. Then, without warning, she used Bettes knee as a push off point as she rose quickly from the couch.
Last one in buys supper tonight. called Tina over her shoulder as she ran from the living room, removing her clothes as she went.
Bette stood from the couch and followed Tina to the back yard where she watched her remove the last of her clothes and dive in.
I really am leading a charmed life, she thought to herself as she unbuttoned her blouse.
Bette saw Tina swim to the edge of the pool and place her elbows on the side to watch her as she began to disrobe. She contemplated putting on a show, but decided it would take too long. In moments, her clothes were on the cement patio. In a few long strides, she dove into the deep end and turned under the water to rise up behind Tina.
Tina watched, enraptured, as Bette stripped herself of her clothing and dove into the pool. Tina felt Bettes mouth move up from the little dimples on her low back to eventually break the surface of the water and nuzzle into her neck. The feel of Bettes toned body against her back spurred a question
Nothing for three weeks then twice in one day? Tina asked as she enjoyed the affection she was receiving.
We have some catching up to do, Bette responded as her hands rested lightly around Tinas waist. She used her for support in the just-slightly-deeper-than-she-was tall water. Bette pulled herself toward Tina, the cool water rushing back around her body, creating a small whirlpool effect within the larger context of the pool. She then released Tinas hips, placed her hands on either side of her and pushed herself back from the edge of the pool, to float face up, enjoying the warmth of the sun on her face and torso.
Tina turned from the side of the pool to watch Bette float away. She ducked under the waters surface, bent her legs against the poolside, and extended them forcefully to dive underneath Bette, rising beyond the area where she was floating languidly. Bette was startled when she felt Tinas hand on her shoulder, guiding her insistently to shallower water.
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(30 votes, average: 4.53 out of 5)
Hot!! Super hot!!
What can i say/ I’m a slut too! loved it, gives us more!!!!
WAHOOOO!!!!! TIBETTE pool sex. Now that’s they way it should happen. Alright then!!!!
i have to agree with Tina that was fucking incredible..lol..that was a great chapter please dont let me wait for so long..thanks
hey- have been out of town and just caught up on this new story. wanted to let you know how much i am enjoying it and will certainly be looking for more. thanks!
Pander to us if you must…we’ll suffer through chapters such as thing one. (I hope, at least.)
They have made changes to the comment area so now I have to use my sign in name …I have been commenting for a year under Paula….I just got cought up on this story and this chapter is just great…thanks and give us more!
*chuckles* you are totally obsessed with swimming. and i like the new revision to that fucked up history they actually left behind. you should be all the writers for a day and i think the characters might be a little happier with their respective situations. anyway, glad you aren’t slacking off like i am. at least one of us is at the grindstone…but maybe i’ll be there soon enough. maybe…
*chuckles* you are totally obsessed with swimming. and i like the new revision to that fucked up history they actually left behind. you should be all the writers for a day and i think the characters might be a little happier with their respective situations. anyway, glad you aren’t slacking off like i am. at least one of us is at the grindstone…but maybe i’ll be there soon enough. maybe…
what do you mean no more loving after this chapter…you can have drama and loving…don’t sell your self short…you are good…so please continue… and again i had a visual of our girls in the pool…loved it…
Wow! Loved it. Feel free to mix some luvin in with the drama at anytime!
That was better than the other pool sex we had to endure.
K
Wow that was hot. Great chapter.
So Tina is a sissy “head above water” swimmer, is she? Loved it!
You wrote:
1.“…I’m whoring myself out to the NC17 crowd to boost readership.”
Do repeated readings help your numbers? Glad to oblige!
2.“Drama awaits, won’t be lovin for a while after this chapter.”
Oh, that would be the Melvin stuff, wouldn’t it? Gee, can’t we just lurk and lounge by the pool for another afternoon? The show left me all drama-ed out! Can you pass the sunblock? My nose is getting burned out here, poolside.
Rally, I’m loving this story and will follow wherever you take it!
Thanks!
WHOA! Thank you for the wonderful Loving B&T Story really Amazing Sexy Story Whoa! I love it that was so Beautiful writing Please post soon.
Sensual, and yet oh so tasteful. Why did I think of Mrs. Peel? Would this be two Mrses Peel, having a go together in the pool?
Je l’aime beaucoup! Encore!