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Pretty Women, episode 11
Story written on January 24, 2007 by justloveB+T.
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She felt the prickling sensaton of tears in her nostrils, and swallowed hard, but her eyes grew wide with surprise as the brunette opened her briefcase to take out a wallet, handing her several banknotes.
We’re going out to dinner tonight… Business meeting… Buy yourself something nice.
Still ashtonished the warm-hearted blonde felt how the 50-dollar bills were pushed in her hand, and without counting she knew that she had never held more money in her life.
Bette smiled, seeing the expression of surprise turn into disbelieve as Tina looked up to her. She trusted the blonde with her money, somewhere deep inside aware of the fact that something stronger was connecting them… The strong pounding sensation in her chest told the confident galleryowner that she was playing it safe. Money ment very little to her any more, she realized with a shock, and she realized that the real jump would be to trust someone with her heart rather then the pieces of green paper that seemed to mean so much to the world. She winked, her chest filled with the heavy feeling of sadness as she added:
Consider it a bonus…
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Any special wishes?
Tina smiled a 1000-watt smile, not willing to show the inner tumult that played with her heart and mind.
They glanced simultaneously at the outfit the blonde had been wearing the day before, casually, but neatly laid over a chair, and the young mother felt her face jerk in a genuin smile. She nodded, knowing what the brunette wanted from her.
Boring!
Bette looked at the woman before her in disbelieve. The gorgeous blonde wouldnt even look boring in an oldfashioned flowery dress.
Conservative.
She, presumptuously, corrected.
Boring…
The blonde confirmed her earlier stated word, her nose wrinkled up slightly.
The gorgeous brunette felt the laugh come from deep in her abdomen.
Elegant.
She continued the playfull banter, at once looking straight into those amazing eyes. Something about this woman took her breath away, and she was about to say something when the buzzing of her phone caught her attention.
A quick glance at her watch told the brunette that for the first time in her life, she would be late for work, and, aware of the fact that she frankly didnt care, she ignored the vibrating phone, knowing it would be Eric.
A chuckle got stuck in her throat as she felt Tina drew nearer, and before she knew what hit her, soft and yet burning lips grazed her cheek as her briefcase was gently slid into her hand.
Have a nice day, darling
The upperclass british accent Tina had put on made Bette smile. Laughing hazel eyes, close to her own, a wink, the blonde’s breath against her skin, her heart fighting to either wrench of jump at every beat, was slowly coming to life.
The brunette gave the pretty woman a gorgeous smile, as she started to exite the penthouse, but, with a sudden swift of heart and gesture, turned around and let her arm slide around Tina’s waist, kissing her softly on the cheek, before turning to head out of the door.
Bette?
The blonde called out, her eyes fierce, glimmering mischieviously.
Yes?
The doorknob loosely in her hand, the brunette turned around, her gorgeous long locks surrounding her face as the frame of a perfect painting.
I would have stayed for 4…
The blonde sexy woman bit her lip in anticipation of Bette’s reaction, trying to hide the chuckle that wanted to come out.
But instead of the surprise in the dark-brown eyes she had expected to see, playfull glittering, resembling flickering flames, pushed right through to her soul…
I would have paid you 6…
And with those words, the brunette, whose heart was beating in a rhythm she couldn’t keep up with, exited the penthoue, leaving Tina, ashtonished.
Slowly, a smile appeared on her delicate face, making her look even more angelic then before. She looked around her new, luxurious surroundings, and the smile slowly turned into a grin before the pretty woman uttered a loud out laugh.
For a week, she would be with Ms Bette Porter, and allthough she tried to tell herself it was the foresight of the money, the clothes, the surroundings that made her heart fly, deep down she knew it had much more to do with longing warm chocolatbrowneyes, that were a window to the other half of her soul.
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The wait was worthy! OMG I missed your stories so much. I would have stayed for free, more Bettesexual, blondies are not my type. Doesn’t look like you had a block, seems like you were busy, awesome update!
Are you posting again very soon? Love this and it never seems long enough.Thanks!
I think the words were definitely found, stated and written beautifully. PLEASE LET THEM KISS SOOOOOOOOOOOON!!! Brilliant job!!!
hey hey girl! finally you did it! now that you have some time i think that we can enjoy of your wonderful talent don’t you think? when i read the first part i think this will be a very good chapter and it was as always, the answer tho the questions the why Bette answer and why Tina stay it’s simple they fallen in love since the first time they saw eacht other but maybe someone should tell them that. take care!
So glad that you are continuing this story–it’s terrific. Just saw the movie on cable for the first time in years–I had forgotten how good it was–but I like it so much better with our girls!
JustloveB+T, I’m loving this story. Waiting anxiously for each update!!!
Oh yes, it is those those all seeing eyes that are the window to Bette’s soul. Between Tina’s laugh and smile and Bette’s eyes a person can get lost in their own little Tibette heaven. The kiss that wants to take place will remain at the back of their minds.
i would be at bette’s call for free…can’t wait to see tina shopping
Too short and so far in between. This is my favorite story. PPS and longer.
I saw your post and I started doing the happy dance. I read it and I loved it and I need more. I’m addicted.
Trying to catch up on my reading. Got about a week and hoping to get rid of the shoulder cast and sling. after 6 mi=os I,m tired. of it Everything is fine in Texas Love this Bette and Tina. they are great to gether but real great in this. I would have stayed with Bette for nothing. Heck I would have paid her. Hope things are great with you thanks
Hey! U know I am loving this story so much :)The way u write it leaves me feeling all giddy and excited and with a huge grin on my face ! U r doing a good job and it was all my pleasure to do the detective work for the lost words hehee . Please post soon m’kay?? pretty please? I cant wait to read more. I’ll catch u soon yeah :)
Astonishing. If you write chapters like this after recovering from a severe writersblock, girl I wish you would have them all the time….sorry for you but oh boy not for us ;-). The tension between the two is palpable and put in words so real that it almost hurt when I read it. I also like the playful banter between them. I really think Tina will come up with with something classy but yet very sexy to wear for that business meeting. Je hoeft me echt niet te bedanken voor mijn vriendelijke woorden in mijn commentaren, ik heb alle bewondering voor de fanfic schrijvers en ik bedoel voor alle fanfic schrijvers tibetter’s & belena’rs. Als een story goed is dan maakt het mij niet uit wie de hoofdpersonages zijn en ook niet wat anderen in hun commentaren schrjven, ik lees die trouwens nooit voordat ik de mijne neerpen om zo objectief mogelijk te zijn. Vind ik iets niet goed dan lees ik het verder maar geen er ook geen negatieve commentaar op. Naar jouw posts kijk ik halsreikend uit omdat ze niet alleen heel erg goed zijn maar me ook altijd beroeren en een beetje uit evenwicht brengen. Ze zinderen nog altijd een dagje na. Bedankt daarvoor.
“… it had much more to do with longing warm chocolatbrowneyes, that were a window to the other half of her soul.”… Aaaaawwww, it’s because of lines like this one that I love your writing so much and that you’re forever in my top 3, sweet JLBT! My god, this is such a wonderful journey you’ve taken us on! If I was rich, I would hire you to only write your amazing stories! But I know life gets too often in the way, unfortunately. Anyhow, I’ll stick with you no matter how long it takes you to take this story to its resolution, cause again, with a writing like yours, it is the journey that matters! Thank you, thank you, thank you…
emm once again another great chapter.. :) And hun it ain’t any hassle for me to read, I consider it a pleasure!! Looking forward to more!
“with a sudden swift of heart and gesture, turned around and let her arm slide around Tina’s waist, kissing her softly on the cheek” that is very very very smooth ;) Arrgghh… I can’t have enough of your story and have missed you terribly… let’s kill the W-word together-gether ;)
LMFAO @ the formatting hahaha that was frustrating, hope I got it right now LOL
Great, I’m happy, you’ve updated this story! But unfortunately these two ladies are making slow progress – will keep us waiting for twenty chapters until they kiss? Bette needs to realise that she has found something that she can’t buy with money, and Tina has found something that is worth more than money. So let them go for it! Please post soon and longer, thank you!
LMAO Don’t worry about formatting. The site likes to take stories people have worked hard to make look pretty and make them look like poopie-shit. xD I can’t believe Bette just gave Tina cash and told her to buy something to wear to dinner. When I watch the movie I always feel so bad for the girl. =/ I hope Tina has common sense though and picks out some street clothes (no not THOSE kind of street clothes LMFAO) and wears those when she goes to get an outfit for tonight instead of her, um, “work” clothes. PPS!
1st brb
2nd?…yay…anyway. this is just great. i love the movie and the way you rewrite it is…just amazing. thank you so much for it. can’t get enough of it. so despite all your busy-ness please keep writing. pps
okay 3rd. damn. but okay.
Yeah… Bette wouldn’t have had to pay for me to stay… Not a cent. :D Love it, and this is the perfect bedtime story for me! Love how in depth you go with that they’re thinking and feeling… just… all around love it. Hug right back at you!
Good chapter. They are cute and funny and they kiss on each other cheek is sweet (but hope on the lips next time lol) and can’t wait to see what Tina is wearing to surprise Bette. OK post soon please, thanks!
Great post, this story always makes me all giddy inside :o))
Nice update, I look forward to the next chapter.
Since you mention my name (laughing) I would have thought you knew me :O)…..one never knows. But as I mentioned earlier..I love this story and you write it so well – so do post soon