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Playing By Heart
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Though she was completely aroused, Bette was still mindful of Tina’s comfort level. Sensing a slight hesitancy at her stomach, she leaned up onto her elbows for a better view of the woman slowly making her way towards Bette’s center.
“You don’t have to do that,” She whispered down to the gorgeous blonde.
Stilling her movements, Tina looked up to meet Bette’s gaze. It took a moment for her to register the words just uttered.
Glancing down at her ultimate destination Tina was pensive.
Bette started to sit up more but was stopped when Tina put pressure with both hands on her abdomen, pushing her back down. She gently set her chin down on the twitching abs watching Bette’s chest rise and fall with each breath.
“What if I want to?” she countered.
“There’s no pressure, baby. I’ll understand.”
Inside, Tina was swooning at Bette’s efforts to make this experience as comfortable as possible. But on the outside, she made her determination very apparent.
“I really want to do this for you,” she began, an erotic thought crossing her mind. “Why don’t we…” she couldn’t quite bring herself to verbalize the suggestion.
Again, as if reading her mind, Bette posed the question, “You wanna do it together?” a smile tugged at the corner’s of the ad executive’s mouth. Oh my God, she wants play with numbers already? This is so hot! she thought.
“Can we?” Tina blushed yet again at her indirect request for a little direction in the art of orally pleasuring her first female lover.
Flashing a seductive grin Tina’s way, Bette nodded in affirmation.
“Spin around.” She commanded, the words rolling off her tongue like slow moving honey, and just as sweet.
Tina immediately felt the return of her aching want and suppressed a moan as she carefully sat up and turned her body to straddle Bette’s torso backwards. Bette began salivating watching the perfectly rounded bottom settle just below her breasts.
With her hands on Bette’s thighs, Tina bent forward smoothing them down to the knees as she slid her moistened lower lips up past the brunette’s heaving breasts.
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You did not disappoint. Loved it.
MeLL, MeLL, MeLL…… I was looking for more….of your story definitely, now if all following chapters are all in the same vein …. I will certainly accept your choice…..but you need to know that I love the entire story as a whole and I am still looking for more! ;0) thank you
Amazing as always,I love your writing.PPS .
Well, Well, I see Tina didn’t waste anytime gettign what she needed and allowing Bette to get what she wanted, again and again. That was thrilling.
While analyzing what I like about this NC-17, is that it is very realistic both in the description of their rapture and their pillow talk. Tina’s hesitancy in asking questions of Bette and Bette’s perception/sensitivity of what Tina was asking and lessening her embarrassment. Really good communication between the two lovers. That coupled w/three orgasms, well, one couldn’t ask for more than that. ;-) I love the way you describe the physical and the emotional. I have to say while “it” was great for them, “it” was good for your readers too. :-)
First of all, that was f***ing hot! Just caught up on the last 2 chapters. And b) did you steal my iPod? I mean really it’s eerie how all the tracks in my “sex mix” are in this little tale. Janet, Dave, Faith….I’m getting freaked out here(lol). So happy the ladies took care if Alice so that Bette’s night was uninterrupted. And totally hilarious Bette running around locking up the house and using a chair for extra precaution against…. Too funny,
I could read this chapter once, twice, dozens of times… It always satisfies. ;)
Sweet Jesus! I’m tingling with my own thin layer of sweat…that “spin around” about did me in…hahaha…this chapter begged for multiple reads! Perfect sex mix, will be making my own copy. Oooh, the Gremlin…always loved the name…red with a gold pinstripe…screams babe magnet, right??Hahaha, not quite. Have a good 4th!
Nothing like a bold Tina and a pleasantly surprised Bette.
That was another wow update. Wow! Just Wow! You’re doing more then fine writing these NC-17 Meloveslu :) Brilliant. Thank you.
WOW that was hot and yes the bold Tina is sweet and hot, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Try me!!!!!lol lol lol lol!!!! Don’t get me into there either my dear even though many women find me attractive, it’s disturbing for them knowing the truth otherwise!!!! I’m (sorry about that) straight lol and is soon getting married to a gentleman!!! But it’s true that if I was on , for sure I would have a problem having those girls round me!!!Therefore I appreciate your stories, the way you write them, although I have such big deal with it when it comes like those chapters wich is brilliantly written that I have to go and run or get to my piano to let my body ease ;)!!!! Because for real, as for me, I can transpose the love, this chemistry love between two people of same sex to my situation and it’s works. Don’t get me wrong, There’s deep love between straight people, but sometime or most time the love between people of same sex is very strong to fight against the world. Or maybe, the special love that Bette and Tina showed us on TLW was such unique, too well played.But it would be my pleasure trying something out with you, I mean with your lyrics!!!. Later tonight, will send to you a PM. Thanks for the update!!!! Now i need to run and playing piano at the same time, how can I do that????
Your writing did not disappoint, it was wonderful. If they don’t come up for air, Tina won’t have any feelibg in her legs, poor sweet thing. She has received a fantastic indoctrination into the world of girl on girl loving by the best. Hope someone catches Alice before she climbs out the bathroom window because I know she will try to get her nosey little butt over there. Thanks for sharing a wonderful story. Don’t want to sound like an ungrateful greedy guts but, MORE PLEASE!!!!!. lol
Once again you have delevired a beautifuly crafted piece for this I thank you. TY :)
Oh dear!! … MeLL!! You really make me speechless!! How did you do that!? :-D it’s not so long chapter but goodness!! It’s so hot!! I am at the beach today slightly got sunburn as it’s hot here but I don’t think it is as hot as this!! LoL … and the conversation between them!! Gosh!! I really can picture how hesitate and shy was T when asking B that!! Ah.. Yup! no hanging but looks like you play part on increasing the temperature worldwide in wherever your reader is located :-p he3.. Do you know that I really love this story?! :-) Thanks for posting MeLL! :-) looking forward for the next chapter ;-)