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Playing By Heart
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“I love this song.” Tina acknowledged into Bette’s breast just before Dave launched into the lyrics.
So here we are tonight
You and me together
The storm outside
And the fire’s bright
Oh and in your eyes
I see what’s on my mind
You got me wild
Turned around inside
Oh, and then desire,
See, is creeping up heavy
Oh inside here
And I know you feel
The same way as I do now
Let’s make this an evening
Lovers for a night
Lovers for tonight
Bette’s heart was again pumping fast and she struggled to maintain breathing while she watched the tip of the blonde’s tongue swirl around her hardened nipple. Bringing her lips down around it again, they sucked it into her mouth before retreating up and off in measured form only to repeat it all over again.
When Tina soon realized that only one of the twin glands was getting all of her attention, she quickly went for the other one, tongue first. She flattened the top part of her tongue along the tough, shriveled tip. A moan escaped her vocal chords as she softly grazed her teeth against Bette’s mouthwatering bosom. Pulling the stiff nipple up between her teeth ever so lightly, she smiled when she heard a whimper, barely audible over the wet, noisy assaults her mouth was perpetrating against it.
We kiss and sweat
We’ll turn this better thing
Into the best
Of all we can offer
Oh this rogue kiss
Tangled tongues and lips
See me this way
I’m turning and turning for you
Oh girl
Oh just tonight
Both gloriously naked bodies were covered in a thin layer of sweat. Tina was still digitally manipulating Bette’s clit and the brunette’s moans were increasing in quantity and volume. By this time, Tina had made her way down to Bette’s flat belly. Her tongue explored the solid tone of muscle just under the caramel-colored skin. Concentrating her efforts around the belly button, Tina could smell the arousal that was pooling once again between Bette’s legs.
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You did not disappoint. Loved it.
MeLL, MeLL, MeLL…… I was looking for more….of your story definitely, now if all following chapters are all in the same vein …. I will certainly accept your choice…..but you need to know that I love the entire story as a whole and I am still looking for more! ;0) thank you
Amazing as always,I love your writing.PPS .
Well, Well, I see Tina didn’t waste anytime gettign what she needed and allowing Bette to get what she wanted, again and again. That was thrilling.
While analyzing what I like about this NC-17, is that it is very realistic both in the description of their rapture and their pillow talk. Tina’s hesitancy in asking questions of Bette and Bette’s perception/sensitivity of what Tina was asking and lessening her embarrassment. Really good communication between the two lovers. That coupled w/three orgasms, well, one couldn’t ask for more than that. ;-) I love the way you describe the physical and the emotional. I have to say while “it” was great for them, “it” was good for your readers too. :-)
First of all, that was f***ing hot! Just caught up on the last 2 chapters. And b) did you steal my iPod? I mean really it’s eerie how all the tracks in my “sex mix” are in this little tale. Janet, Dave, Faith….I’m getting freaked out here(lol). So happy the ladies took care if Alice so that Bette’s night was uninterrupted. And totally hilarious Bette running around locking up the house and using a chair for extra precaution against…. Too funny,
I could read this chapter once, twice, dozens of times… It always satisfies. ;)
Sweet Jesus! I’m tingling with my own thin layer of sweat…that “spin around” about did me in…hahaha…this chapter begged for multiple reads! Perfect sex mix, will be making my own copy. Oooh, the Gremlin…always loved the name…red with a gold pinstripe…screams babe magnet, right??Hahaha, not quite. Have a good 4th!
Nothing like a bold Tina and a pleasantly surprised Bette.
That was another wow update. Wow! Just Wow! You’re doing more then fine writing these NC-17 Meloveslu :) Brilliant. Thank you.
WOW that was hot and yes the bold Tina is sweet and hot, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Try me!!!!!lol lol lol lol!!!! Don’t get me into there either my dear even though many women find me attractive, it’s disturbing for them knowing the truth otherwise!!!! I’m (sorry about that) straight lol and is soon getting married to a gentleman!!! But it’s true that if I was on , for sure I would have a problem having those girls round me!!!Therefore I appreciate your stories, the way you write them, although I have such big deal with it when it comes like those chapters wich is brilliantly written that I have to go and run or get to my piano to let my body ease ;)!!!! Because for real, as for me, I can transpose the love, this chemistry love between two people of same sex to my situation and it’s works. Don’t get me wrong, There’s deep love between straight people, but sometime or most time the love between people of same sex is very strong to fight against the world. Or maybe, the special love that Bette and Tina showed us on TLW was such unique, too well played.But it would be my pleasure trying something out with you, I mean with your lyrics!!!. Later tonight, will send to you a PM. Thanks for the update!!!! Now i need to run and playing piano at the same time, how can I do that????
Your writing did not disappoint, it was wonderful. If they don’t come up for air, Tina won’t have any feelibg in her legs, poor sweet thing. She has received a fantastic indoctrination into the world of girl on girl loving by the best. Hope someone catches Alice before she climbs out the bathroom window because I know she will try to get her nosey little butt over there. Thanks for sharing a wonderful story. Don’t want to sound like an ungrateful greedy guts but, MORE PLEASE!!!!!. lol
Once again you have delevired a beautifuly crafted piece for this I thank you. TY :)
Oh dear!! … MeLL!! You really make me speechless!! How did you do that!? :-D it’s not so long chapter but goodness!! It’s so hot!! I am at the beach today slightly got sunburn as it’s hot here but I don’t think it is as hot as this!! LoL … and the conversation between them!! Gosh!! I really can picture how hesitate and shy was T when asking B that!! Ah.. Yup! no hanging but looks like you play part on increasing the temperature worldwide in wherever your reader is located :-p he3.. Do you know that I really love this story?! :-) Thanks for posting MeLL! :-) looking forward for the next chapter ;-)