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    Story written on March 14, 2008 by felix86.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=68922
    Author Notes:

    Dana wakes up alone and goes to find Alice.

    “How much?”

    “Tell me something first.”

    The woman looked at Dana a bit sceptically at first then shrugged her shoulders.

    “Fine, she’s not here at the moment. You got a pen or something?”

    Dana handed over a pen and her small address book and watched as the woman scribbled down a few lines.

    “That first one is her address, I don’t know what number she lives at, but that’s the place. The second one is the name of a club she sometimes hangs at.”

    Dana looked at what had just been written, deciding that this was as much help as she was ever going to get she handed three hundred over to the girl.

    “Thanks. Remember, I don’t want any of this getting out.”

    The woman looked from the money to Dana then back again and nodded as she moved quickly off. Dana looked at the address, started her car and headed off.

     

    She pulled up to a block of flats and turned off her car. She sat for a few minutes wondering what to do, there was no way she was going to knock on every door and ask for Alice, she’d probably be arrested for being disturbing the peace or something.

    Suddenly the door to the building opened and out stepped Alice, she was wearing jeans and t-shirt had messy hair and was whistling to some random tune looking totally gorgeous. Dana just smiled at the sight, Alice was taking out her rubbish, looking completely at ease and contented. Taking a deep breath Dana got out of the car and jogged over to the whistling beauty.

    “Hi.”

    “Jesus Fucking Christ!”

    Alice jumped a mile and dropped her bag of rubbish she looked at Dana, who just stood in front of her shifting from one foot to the other not knowing what to do.

    “Sorry.”

    “What the fuck are you doing here?”

    “I came to see you.”

    “What? Why?”

    Dana looked around nervously, she really didn’t want to get all involved out in the open.

    “Can we maybe go inside?”

    “No.”

    “Oh. Okay.”

    “Listen, don’t take it like that but I don’t normally invite random people back to my home.”

    “I’m not random.”

    “What you picked me up once and you think you know me.”

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    1. To parapharse your story… “Christ felix86, what are you doing to me?” Excellent update! I can almost get past my jealousy of you having seen Leisha in concert. ;-D I was so excited to see that you posted and the chapter did not disappoint. Hotness, a little humor and the impending drama. Good for Dana to track Alice down. Good for Alice to drop her walls for a bit (as it were). I am very worried about whatever is behind the door. Take care of our girls, OK? This really was great. And did I mention the hotness? Thanks so much!! Hope to see another chapter soon.

    2. Wow! Great update, I agree with Goose…i was very freakin excited to see that you had posted. You really balanced everything nicely i thought, but i must say. Whoever is at the door better just be an impatient delivery boy waiting for a signature. Please do take care of our Alice, can not wait to see a possible 3rd chapter! Thank YOU!

    5. WOW!! What a great chapter. Who is at the door? I hope Alice is gonna be okay. I’m glad my Dana went and found her woman. They are so hot together. Pls post again real soon.

    10. WOH hotness hotness- I have a feeling that Dana is gonna get out and try to protect Alice and get into more trouble… yeah that’s just Dane. But who’s at the door? I can’t help but remeber the skinny girl’s saying “somebody isn’t gonna be happy” that Alice didn’t get paid sleeping with Dana. But more drama! I love it love it love it. Gosh, if there were a hooker like A, I guess I would have to try her– yeah, jk, I ain’t that brave

    11. Ohh i so wasnt ready for tht chapter to finish!! Tht was excellent nd i love seeing Al and Dana in these situations reli interesting. Oh that and the fact that its reli HOT lol. Cant wait for ur next post to see who is behind tht door and wats gunna happen :) PPS X

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