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Part 10: The Confusion (Alice & Dana)
Dana: (tears go down her cheeks) No you guys…this is my fault, I’m-I’m gonna fix it myself.
Dana stood up and went out of The Planet crying.
Shane: Dana!
Carmen: I can’t take this anymore.
Shane: What?
Carmen: I can’t take it anymore, I’m gonna talk to Alice and Dannielle.
Shane: Carmen, no.
Carmen: Shane, I can’t stand seeing Dana like this and I can’t stand Alice being with Dannielle, Dannielle, gotta go!
Shane: I know but what are you gonna say?
Carmen: Alice probably didn’t read it all.
Shane: Didn’t what all?
Carmen: The letter Shane! Let’s go.
Carmen and Shane stood up and went out.
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Dana is walking when she saw Alice and Dannielle. Alice glanced at her. She quickly started kissing Dannielle. They were smooching and Dana stood there watching them unable to move, unable to turn away. Someone suddenly touched her shoulders, it was Shane.
Shane: Dana, there you are we were-
Shane realised what she was looking at. She put her hands on Dana shoulder and turned her around.
Shane: Come on let’s go.
They walked off, Alice noticed they were gone and hugged Dannielle so didn’t seem she was doing it for a reason.
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Shane, Carmen and Dana got home. Shane and Dana hopped out of the car, Shane opened the door.
Shane: Jenny!
Jenny: Yeah!
Shane: (turning to Dana) I want you to stay here until I get back okay.
Dana was standing there lifeless with the same blank look in her eyes. Jenny came out.
Shane: Jenny I want you to take care of Dana. We’ll be back.
Jenny nodded and took Dana inside. Shane ran back to the car and drove off.
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Shane and Carmen stopped by Alice’s house. They hopped out and knocked on the door. Alice opened the door.
Alice: Oh my gosh not this again.
She began closing the door but Shane quickly stopped her and went inside.
Alice: Hey Shane! What do you think your doing?
Carmen: Alice you need to stop this.
Alice: Stop what?
Shane: Where’s Dannielle?
Alice: At work.
Shane: At work huh?
Alice: ***** you guys, she doesn’t drug deal, she’s not a criminal and she is my girlfriend.
Shane: Alice, we know what we heard!
Carmen: And we know why your using her.
Alice: (angrily) Using her?! Are you guys out of your ***** mind?!
Shane: Alice the only reason why your staying with her is because you want to make Dana jealous!
Carmen: She’s been through enough!
Alice: (shouting) Probably I’m with her because I want to get over Dana or probably I am because I want Dana to realised how I felt!! How I felt when she left me just because Lara was back!! Do you guys know how that feels?! I want her to suffer, I want her to feel the pain that I felt!
Shane: She didn’t mean to hurt you, she didn’t mean to make you suffer, she loved you, have you ever thought of that?
Alice: She was gonna leave and live WITH Lara in New York!
Shane: But she’s back isn’t she?
Carmen: Do you want to know why she’s back?
Alice: No, I don’t care.
Carmen taking out the letter out of her pocket. Giving it to Alice.
Carmen: Read it.
Alice stared at her for a moment but took the letter and started reading it.
Shane: She didn’t mean the things she said at the party. She regrets breaking up with you.
Alice: (looked up) She still loves me?
Shane looked over and saw Dannielle standing there.
Dannielle: Hey you guys…
Alice turned around.
Alice: Hey, how long have you been here?
Dannielle: Just now. Is there a problem?
Shane: No..we were just going. Come on Carmen.
Shane and Carmen left and closed the door. Alice turned back to the letter.
Alice: (whispering) …she still loves me?…
(to be continued)
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(32 votes, average: 3.38 out of 5)
This is great!! cant wait for the next one :o)
im sorry if i dont have part 11 coz i have to study for a big maths test for tomorrow.. sorry if theres a lateness
this is great i can’t wait to see what you write next I just hope it all works out for the best with alice and dana so please post soon
she still loves me?
squee!!! excellent!!!