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Part 10: The Confusion (Alice & Dana)
At The Planet…
Dana’s sitting staring at her coffee. She’s thinking on what to do about Dannielle, should she keep trying or leave them and let Alice find out for herself.
Bette: Tina, Look who’s back!
Dana turned around and saw Bette and Tina, she stood up and gave them a hug.
Dana: (smiling) Hey guys!
Tina: Oh my gosh, It’s so good to see you again!
Bette: How was the competition? Where’s Lara?
They all sat down. Dana’s smile faded away.
Dana: …Lara’s at New York…
Bette: (looked at Tina) Oh okay..
Tina: ..so you and Alice…?
Dana: She’s got a girlfriend, Dannielle.
Bette: (frowning) Dannielle?
Tina and Bette looked at eachother.
Tina: Are you…okay?
Dana: (sarcastically) Oh yeah…great..fine..
Silence…
Dana: So..where’s Angelica?
Tina: She’s in the hospital, we were actually stopping by to get some coffee.
Bette: Hey babe, we’re late, we should get going.
Dana: Is she alright?
Tina: Yeah she’s just a little sick.
Bette: Do you wanna come with us?
Dana: No, sorry I’m waiting for Shane and Carmen…tell her I said Hi and get well.
Tina: Thanks..are you gonna be alright?
Dana: Yeah..
They stand up and give eachother hugs. Tina hugs her last.
Tina: (while hugging her, whispered) She’ll be back.
She broke of from the hug and smiled at Dana, squeezed her arm and went. Dana sat down back down.
Dana: I hope your right.
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Couple of minutes later, Shane and Carmen entered and sat down next to Dana.
Shane & Carmen: Hey.
Dana: Hi you guys.
Shane: (saw her looking sad as ever) Look Dana, I know Alice is hard on you but you can’t let that bring you down..Alice..Alice is just confused and we all know that she’s still hurt about everything.
Dana: It’s all my fault, I should’ve not said the things I said, I should’ve not done what I’ve done. I don’t blame Alice for what she’s doing, I probably deserve it..
Carmen: Dana it’s not your fault, it’s no ones. Stop blaming yourself what’s done is done we can’t change that but we can fix it.
Dana: I probably should’ve stayed at New York..(her eyes started getting watery)
Shane: Dana your not listening, we are going to bust that ***** and get Alice back, okay?
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(32 votes, average: 3.38 out of 5)
This is great!! cant wait for the next one :o)
im sorry if i dont have part 11 coz i have to study for a big maths test for tomorrow.. sorry if theres a lateness
this is great i can’t wait to see what you write next I just hope it all works out for the best with alice and dana so please post soon
she still loves me?
squee!!! excellent!!!