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My Skin is Painfully New – Chapter 17
You are breathtaking, babe, she said looking directly into Bettes eyes.
Tina untied her own robe, the pink silk easily slipping off her shoulders to reveal the exquisite fullness of her *****. Bette gasped at the sight of her lover before her, naked and trusting. Bette reached out her hand to touch Tinas breast, a caress that began as a soft exploration of something so familiar, yet again brand new. The first slow hesitant touches became more insistent, more demanding as the two women pulled their bodies as close together as possible, soft warm skin sliding against more soft warm skin.
Tina moved back slightly to take her breast in her hand and guide it to Bettes mouth. Bette took the gift and cherished it with her lips and tongue, lightly tugging the erect nipple with her teeth. Tina was moaning and rocking against Bette, the sounds encouraging Bette to continue. Tinas gasps became louder and louder.
Bette, stop! she said insistently. Oh my God! Ahhhh.
Tina, whats wrong, Bette asked, suddenly alarmed as she watched Tina doubled over and clutching her protruding abdomen.
Feel this, instructed Tina, putting Bettes hand on her abdomen. Can you feel that?
Bette felt that Tinas abdomen had become as hard as a rock.
Whats happening, whats wrong? Did I hurt you,? asked Bette desperately.
It was a contraction, said Tina, gasping for air now that the pain had passed.
Youre sure?
Well I cant imagine what else it could have been, said Tina.
Oh my God, Im taking you to the hospital right now, Bette cried, can you walk? Should I call an ambulance?
Bette, baby, calm down. Im fine, see. Its over, Tina said soothingly while placing Bettes hand on her now softened belly.
Youre okay, really? Bette asked, a worry line creasing her forehead as she bent over Tina.
The books say that can happen sometimes, Tina explained, its nothing to worry about.
Let me get the book, Bette said, starting to crawl out of the bed to retrieve the What to Expect While Your Expecting bible that was on the dresser across the room.
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(50 votes, average: 4.12 out of 5)
I agreed, they’re light everyone’s eyes to see earth better.
Hey, i can wait for a new chapter when its this good. Poor Bette and Tina….they might not try this again until after the baby.
so worth the wait…thanks for another great update!
Hope Bette and Tina doesn’t stop the love making.only if it will hurt the baby. Loved this.
Hey, i’m with chasemenow, with an update this good i would wait as long as it takes:) I hope Bette doesn’t get too ‘spooked’ by the false alarm…they can try again closer to the due date *wink*, to bring on the little one..hehe….Thanks for another wonderful chapter!
hmm…Braxton-Hicks huh? wowzers. you learn something new everyday. I love seeing Bette’s protective side. That’s beautiful. Keep on keeping on, your writing has me enthralled.
Oh, poor Bette. I trust that Tina will reassure her and lead her down the path again. Enjoyed this chapter very much. Good writing like yours takes time and I’m happy to see a new chapter whenever it arrives.
Thanks for the beautiful chapter! Will be waiting for the next one, no matter how long it takes!!!
When I started reading, I was tempted to comment, “Bette, let me introduce you to someone, someone named Braxton-Hicks.” Nice chapter…thanks for this.
When we have to wait weeks apart for updates its ok when its this good. Love this story….its so good. thank you.
Great update!
Well-written!
” Bette relented and opened her lips, inviting Tina to continue the lovely stroking.”
‘The Lovely Stroking’ – that’s a GREAT title for a fanfic!
Thank you!
Hey I’ve been looking for an update to this. I love it thanks… yeah worth the wait :D
Great chapter very well written! I’d need to hold off until after the baby:( Obviously I’d love it if you posted quicker but I’ll wait;)
OOh…So Good!! thanks
Glad you are back with us. Very nice job by the way. Don´t keep us to long before the next post.
Add my voice to the chorus – wonderful and worth waiting for. Thanks for continuing.
great chapter,your worth waiting for
OH, so damn good! You have one of the best stories around and I love every word you write. I am a big fan. I agree with the others. It was worth the wait!
love the story, can’t wait for a new chapter!