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My One Special One – Chapter 6
I don’t want to end up in your trash can, Tina. I want to make love with you, T. I want to finally let myself feel what it’s like to make love with someone, not just spend the night ***** – I want that someone to make love with to be you.”
Tina gently kissed Bette. She then looked directly into those chocolate eyes and with dulcet words and voice:
“Make love to me, Bette. Let me surrender all I’m feeling for you. Perhaps then you will know I will treasure whatever you want to share with me.”
She kissed Bette again but this time the kiss was that of desire, of want and need and it conveyed something much more to Bette: There was promise and honesty. That’s all she needed.
The hungry, prowling and conquering tiger retreated. A deep, primal passion rose up and took its place in Bette and the need to release it came out in guttural moans.
She began kissing and gently nibbling at Tina’s neck; one hand at the small of her back slid down to her ***** and held her firmly while the other made its way under her long skirt, up her thigh and between her legs. As soon as she began rubbing on Tina’s *****, she felt Tina begin a slow, purposeful grind into her. She was hot and she was very wet. Bette could feel that through her panties.
Tina whimpered. Her legs were going to buckle. She may have never been with a woman before but she was going to be with one tonight – right now. She wanted this more than anything she could remember wishing for.
“Bette. Bedroom. Now. Please”
She took Bette’s hand and moved as fast as her wobbly legs could carry her to her bedroom.
They stood at the foot of the bed. Bette once again took Tina’s face in her hands.
“If I do anything you are uncomfortable with, please just tell me. I want this to be a night we both remember with joy, not something you regret doing, T.”
Tina’s breathing was ragged. Her mind was in the beginning stages of love haze but she was able to form some words.
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(34 votes, average: 4.53 out of 5)
Nurse, could you please bring me a cold compress? Don’t ask me where it’s going. Thanks!
great chapter!!! i need to go take a cold shower now!!!!! cant wait for the next chapter!
*throb throb throb* that was awesome sexy beautiful, your poem was great also. Loved it
Wow, great job of describing the difference between making love and just having sex. Can’t wait for Tina’s turn. Liked the poem
RC that was superbly HOT HOT HOT. The poem was lovely and you described beautifully the difference in just having sex and truly making love. Because they really did make love. Fate and Destiny were correct in their efforts to bring these two together. If only IC would see it this way. Thank you so much for this post, made my week. You are doing a superb job with this story and I love it. Post soon please.
that was so …spectacularly, earth shattering …great desciptions here.as always you are one of my favs.
Breathtaking.
AMAZING.
I’M SORRY BUT THAT’S THE ONLY THAT COULD COME TO MIND. THAT WAS SIMPLY AMAZING. THANK YOU. please post soon. PEACE.
RC…absolutely breathtaking. Truly beautiful. There definitely is a big difference between just f***ing and making love. One is a lot easier than the other. Babe..your poem was amazing. Thanks for sharing. Fate and Destiny’s plan to bring these kindred spirits together was a sacred promise that heaven itself could not undo. RC…my holiday wish for you is the fulfilment of the sacred promise that was created by the heaven’s just for you.
wow… i am with the others… this was so good… they were definetly making love… thank you…please continue
YAAAAY! HAPPINESS!
Um…-thud- That was great. And the poem was lovely.
OH sweet jesus wherever Tina is feeling her heart beating im just glad mine didnt stop while reading that…lol that was so fucking hot i felt myself reading it at speed which means ill just have to read it again…The poem was beautiful in fact the whloe experience was amazeing and i for one cant wait for Tina to return the compliment to Bette….soon
That was making love, you can have sex,but to make love it all different. thanks
That was the most beautiful and loving chapter I have ever read. The way you write a love scene–and I do mean love–is fantastic. Alright, it was totally HOT too.
Damn hot, beautiful, and awesome. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
wow!! that is all I can say. Wow
“I can feel my heart beating in my clit.” Tina ain’t the only one… Alright I REALLY need to go stand outside in the WV cold. I’ll check back in with everyone eventually. *desperately tries to walk without falling over*
oh baby…that was something..brough tears to my eyes it was so beautiful. Thank you and post soon. PS…love the poem
Great chapter. Looking forward to more.
i agree with lamentamini..lol..Tina anit the only one here to feel that..lol..fucking HOT..cant wait for more Arce..thanks :o)
hot and sweet! I loved every second! keep writing. I’ll be reading.
amazing…truly amazing.
Amazing story, post another chapter soon.
i’m with lamentamini — i need to go outside and cool down == phew
this was beautiful…”f***ing is easy”, i’d say, but it was definately making love…and the poem is great…thanks…B&T belong Together
Houston, we got a problem – my computer has just melted!!!! OMFG….I honestly don’t know what to say other than it was a very bad idea to read this at work…very bad idea :o)) I loved the poem and of course your writing…please post soon.
Ahhh this was excellent!! I love that they both know that they’re meant for each other. Thanks for this amazing display of love, rc!!
perfection love this story