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My One Special One – Chapter 6
Tina lifted Bette to her. “Come here.” Bette was dizzy. “I need you to make me come, Bette. I can feel my heart beating in my *****. Pleaseplease”
My God, Bette thought, my head is spinningI must have this woman.
Bette moved down, kissing, licking and nipping gently along the way. Her hands rested on Tina’s hips and slowly turned her to the side of the bed. She put Tina’s legs on her shoulders and now was within inches of the sweetest nectar her tongue would ever dip into.
Tina’s scent was heady – it was heaven’s welcome mat – and Bette could wait no longer. She plunged her tongue inside Tina and knew this was heaven – this was her heaven belonging to this angel.
When Bette entered her with her tongue, Tina threw her head back and gasped; when Bette’s expert movements trailed her tongue between her lips and up to and rolling over her swollen *****, she could feel her eyes begin to roll back. As Bette sucked, at first slowly, then more intensely on her *****, Tina thought she might faint.only the hard pounding of her life’s blood in her ears kept her from doing so.
She had never felt what she was experiencing now. Her insides were what the rockets on the Space Shuttle were at the countdown: pressure, intense heat, a combustion building to a spectacular lift off thrusting her into the heavens.
The rockets were lit, ignition engaged, tripping her internal incineration to push up fiercely from her toes, spreading and firing every nerve ending along its way. Her hands frantically gripping the sheets to maintain some earthly contact – she was on emotional and sensory overload, excited and mildly uncertain because she was headed to a place no one had ever taken her to.
and then it happened. She reached down and put her hands on Bette’s head to pull her even harder into her; her body bathed in sweat, tensed, began to shake, she no longer had any control. This mother of all orgasms slammed into her brain, causing her to arch her back, lifting her body up to try to touch the shooting stars as they whirled by at lightning speed around her.
“Ohmy ***** GodI have never…” were the only words Tina Kennard could form.
In her mind’s eye was flashed a poem she had read but never grasped the true meaning – until this moment with this woman.
The First Time We Made Love
Your time with me
Was your first time
A time you waited for
All of your life
To feel the sameness
Of breast
soft skin
wet *****
You were afraid
You were shy
You said
What if I don’t please you?
I quietly assured you
And murmured these words
Just love me
The same way
You want me to love you
You and I
The first time
Broke open the heavens
Spilled stars across the sky
You and I
The first time that night
continued
to the second
The third
And the fourth
The first time we made love
I cried
Tears of joy filled my eyes
You see, I realized
I had never really made love
Until
The first time we made love
The First Time We Made Love – R
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This night, with this woman, was indeed the first time Tina Kennard had really made love. It was the very first time she surrendered everything. On that acknowledgement her eyes began to fill with tears of joy and fulfillment. In moments her joy would be compounded because she would learn Bette Porter felt exactly the same.
TBC
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(34 votes, average: 4.53 out of 5)
Nurse, could you please bring me a cold compress? Don’t ask me where it’s going. Thanks!
great chapter!!! i need to go take a cold shower now!!!!! cant wait for the next chapter!
*throb throb throb* that was awesome sexy beautiful, your poem was great also. Loved it
Wow, great job of describing the difference between making love and just having sex. Can’t wait for Tina’s turn. Liked the poem
RC that was superbly HOT HOT HOT. The poem was lovely and you described beautifully the difference in just having sex and truly making love. Because they really did make love. Fate and Destiny were correct in their efforts to bring these two together. If only IC would see it this way. Thank you so much for this post, made my week. You are doing a superb job with this story and I love it. Post soon please.
that was so …spectacularly, earth shattering …great desciptions here.as always you are one of my favs.
Breathtaking.
AMAZING.
I’M SORRY BUT THAT’S THE ONLY THAT COULD COME TO MIND. THAT WAS SIMPLY AMAZING. THANK YOU. please post soon. PEACE.
RC…absolutely breathtaking. Truly beautiful. There definitely is a big difference between just f***ing and making love. One is a lot easier than the other. Babe..your poem was amazing. Thanks for sharing. Fate and Destiny’s plan to bring these kindred spirits together was a sacred promise that heaven itself could not undo. RC…my holiday wish for you is the fulfilment of the sacred promise that was created by the heaven’s just for you.
wow… i am with the others… this was so good… they were definetly making love… thank you…please continue
YAAAAY! HAPPINESS!
Um…-thud- That was great. And the poem was lovely.
OH sweet jesus wherever Tina is feeling her heart beating im just glad mine didnt stop while reading that…lol that was so fucking hot i felt myself reading it at speed which means ill just have to read it again…The poem was beautiful in fact the whloe experience was amazeing and i for one cant wait for Tina to return the compliment to Bette….soon
That was making love, you can have sex,but to make love it all different. thanks
That was the most beautiful and loving chapter I have ever read. The way you write a love scene–and I do mean love–is fantastic. Alright, it was totally HOT too.
Damn hot, beautiful, and awesome. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
wow!! that is all I can say. Wow
“I can feel my heart beating in my clit.” Tina ain’t the only one… Alright I REALLY need to go stand outside in the WV cold. I’ll check back in with everyone eventually. *desperately tries to walk without falling over*
oh baby…that was something..brough tears to my eyes it was so beautiful. Thank you and post soon. PS…love the poem
Great chapter. Looking forward to more.
i agree with lamentamini..lol..Tina anit the only one here to feel that..lol..fucking HOT..cant wait for more Arce..thanks :o)
hot and sweet! I loved every second! keep writing. I’ll be reading.
amazing…truly amazing.
Amazing story, post another chapter soon.
i’m with lamentamini — i need to go outside and cool down == phew
this was beautiful…”f***ing is easy”, i’d say, but it was definately making love…and the poem is great…thanks…B&T belong Together
Houston, we got a problem – my computer has just melted!!!! OMFG….I honestly don’t know what to say other than it was a very bad idea to read this at work…very bad idea :o)) I loved the poem and of course your writing…please post soon.
Ahhh this was excellent!! I love that they both know that they’re meant for each other. Thanks for this amazing display of love, rc!!
perfection love this story