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My One Special One – Chapter 5
Tina heard herself whimper. Except for the other night, she had never been kissed by a woman, never even wondered what it would feel like – and now she felt like she would faint from the way her head was spinning and the sexual energy making her hair stand on end; her thighs moist in a heightened want she had never experienced before.
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“Hey, Shane, getta’ load of Porter, will ya? My God, I’ve never seen her so hot with someone on the dance floor”
“WowBette is really into her, Al.”
“Well, not yet, Shane”
“Jesus, Al, maybe that isn’t what this girl is about for Bette. This looks different. Yeah, it’s hot for sure, but there’s something else. I meanjust look at them.”
Alice and Shane couldn’t stop staring at Bette and Tina. The dance floor was crowded, but the glow from the lights appeared around them, setting them apart from all the others.
Something new, something hot, something ever after was being born and the sizzle of their excitement permeated the room with a silent, smoldering, sexual haze.
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Bette was dizzy from the emotion coursing through her as she kissed Tina. She had kissed many a woman in her day – and some right here on this dance floor. All the previous had been preludes to ***** in its rawest form – physical release, no emotion attached.
This? She had no words to describe it. Yeah, Porter at a loss for words. Her mouth on Tina’s, their tongues entwined, doing their own slow dance of getting to know their new erotic partner – no time or no reason to think of words.
Bette could have stayed in this moment forever, kissing and holding this gorgeous creature – this woman who was setting her body on fire. Somewhere deep inside Bette knew Tina Kennard was knocking at the door of Bette’s soul – the door marked “Do Not Enter – No One Allowed Passed This Point.”
…she couldn’t figure out why or how this was happening so quickly – and she was frightened.
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(32 votes, average: 4.78 out of 5)
If hot and romantic was what you were going for, you were successful. Please don’t leave us waiting for an update for too long!
Love the story can’t wait for more, post a new chapter soon.
Wow, what a fantastic build up to what we hope is coming. Alice as usual, sticks her foot in her mouth, but ya gotta love her. Can’t wait for your next update.
wow, romantic and hot – i love it…this is so poetic and amzingly written, love their thoughts, love the metaphors..btw, i don’t know what snack at the Y means either…
I think I need a whole pack of smokes after this chapter. Good GOD by the time they make love I’ll need a whole damn carton. I am 2 seconds away from getting on my knees and begging for another chapter soon.
Oh and for those who are still lost on the “Y” thing, um, Urban Dictionary gives a pretty cut and dried definition. You just have to scroll down a bit. Yes I could just say it but I’m actually going to be a lady this time and not go there. ;)
HOLY SHIT!!! OMG this has got to be it damn i’m sitting on needles ova here. what a way to end a chap. i thought i was bad but damn!! please post soon. PEACE.
Very romantic and dripping with anticipation. Alice is always Alice LOL, but Bette refuses to let her ruin this moment. Love it PLEASE continue and VERY soon :o)
FANTASTIC!!! MORE MORE MORE!
I quite liked the Bette/Tina part. If I were Bette I don’t think I would have stopped for Alice’s stupid questions, and if I had I think I would have killed her, well maybe just hurt her.
RC…That was so sexy and romantic. They both know in their hearts that each is the other’s soul mate…the missing piece of their puzzle. They are instinctively peeling layers of protection off so that they can fully enjoy and connect in the moments they are sharing. Totally awesome chapter. Thanks RC for sharing…please continue.
WOW and u have decided to leave me like this….beautiful, love your analegies
GOD DAMN IT! just when it was getting good, i really wanted to see the turnout of that! update soon,………as a matter of fact its what i want for christmas, three in a row! yay! get writing!
Amazing writing! Please post soon. Can’t wait to read more.
damn this is so good..please post soon
TBC…???? OH NO…….SOMEONE HAS TAUGHT YOU WRONG…..YOU DONT DO A “TBC” RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF “TLC”……COME ON NOW……BRING SOME MORE……IM LIKIN THIS FIC……
this is real good…!
What an incredibly romantic and beautifully written chapter. Please update this weekend.
Mission accomplished arceextl – this chapter and the whole story is definitly HOT and ROMANTIC….and so many other wonderful things :o)) Please post soon…I can’t get enough.
hey rc that was wonderful. i think my monitor melted. loving this story. thanks.
The girls know instinctively that they have just met the person they are to love forever. They are each experiencing that feeling of complete euphoria from being with the one person that blows your mind. WHAT A FEELING!! Love it. Post soon please. Thanks rc for this post.
I’m with ID18, that was incredible.
HOT!! ROMANTIC!! perfect! please please post soon!! keep writing. I’ll be reading.
Like this. It going to be hard to wait for the next posting thanks
Wow, your writing is just so beautiful. I’m really enjoying this story. Thanks!
oh babe that was fucking amazing — you are without a doubt in the B/T forever club of writers. wonderful build up — so you going to set light to the bonfire ?
Ahhh they’re sooo meant for each other!! Beautiful chapter. *Fate slaps Destiny a high five* Hehe
Wow romantic and hot and sweet. Ok let see some more hot coming, thanks!
OK again im ALMOST lost for words i just sooo love the romantic stuff and you do it so well… that was as always amazeing…thanks
hotttttttttttt