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My One Special One – Chapter 5
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My One Special One – Chapter 5
Previously
Tina Kennard was dancing with a woman, in a ***** bar in this town of
Little did she know that this night with Bette Porter would begin her slow dance to forever with the one true love of her life.
As Bette held Tina close, she felt overwhelmed with how good this woman felt in her arms. The music may have been playing but all Bette Porter heard was the pounding of her heart. She was in a near trance as she felt Tina’s breath on her cheek each time she exhaled.
Tina would turn her face to breathe in the delightful aroma of this woman. This was so unlike dancing with a man – and not for the very obvious reasons – but the sheer animal sexuality through sameness, yes, the familiarity was so concentrated and powerful. Her insides were screaming to let these now tapped emotions break free. It was unlike anything Tina had experienced in closeness to another.
Bette pulled back and asked: “Are you uncomfortable or feeling strange dancing with me?”
“Strangely enough, I’m feeling very comfortable.” Tina answered.
Then Bette placed her lips against Tina’s ear. “I’m so glad because I have no words to describe how good it feels to hold you close to me.”
and as those words fell upon her ear, Tina felt her insides melt like butter on a hot frying pan – and with the same intensity of bubbling heat dancing across every nerve ending in her body.
Tina huskily whispered back: “Would you kiss meplease.”
For a few brief seconds they looked deeply into one another’s eyes, then their gazes drifted down to their mouths. Bette brought her lips just to the point of grazing Tina’s. Each felt the exchange of their warm breath and the thumpthumpthump of their hearts against their *****.
Bette’s words fell in warm, tingling bursts of air upon Tina’s lips. “With pleasure,” and she gently kissed Tina. Bette then trailed the tip of her tongue along the edges of Tina’s lips, which parted slightly giving permission for Bette to enter.
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If hot and romantic was what you were going for, you were successful. Please don’t leave us waiting for an update for too long!
Love the story can’t wait for more, post a new chapter soon.
Wow, what a fantastic build up to what we hope is coming. Alice as usual, sticks her foot in her mouth, but ya gotta love her. Can’t wait for your next update.
wow, romantic and hot – i love it…this is so poetic and amzingly written, love their thoughts, love the metaphors..btw, i don’t know what snack at the Y means either…
I think I need a whole pack of smokes after this chapter. Good GOD by the time they make love I’ll need a whole damn carton. I am 2 seconds away from getting on my knees and begging for another chapter soon.
Oh and for those who are still lost on the “Y” thing, um, Urban Dictionary gives a pretty cut and dried definition. You just have to scroll down a bit. Yes I could just say it but I’m actually going to be a lady this time and not go there. ;)
HOLY SHIT!!! OMG this has got to be it damn i’m sitting on needles ova here. what a way to end a chap. i thought i was bad but damn!! please post soon. PEACE.
Very romantic and dripping with anticipation. Alice is always Alice LOL, but Bette refuses to let her ruin this moment. Love it PLEASE continue and VERY soon :o)
FANTASTIC!!! MORE MORE MORE!
I quite liked the Bette/Tina part. If I were Bette I don’t think I would have stopped for Alice’s stupid questions, and if I had I think I would have killed her, well maybe just hurt her.
RC…That was so sexy and romantic. They both know in their hearts that each is the other’s soul mate…the missing piece of their puzzle. They are instinctively peeling layers of protection off so that they can fully enjoy and connect in the moments they are sharing. Totally awesome chapter. Thanks RC for sharing…please continue.
WOW and u have decided to leave me like this….beautiful, love your analegies
GOD DAMN IT! just when it was getting good, i really wanted to see the turnout of that! update soon,………as a matter of fact its what i want for christmas, three in a row! yay! get writing!
Amazing writing! Please post soon. Can’t wait to read more.
damn this is so good..please post soon
TBC…???? OH NO…….SOMEONE HAS TAUGHT YOU WRONG…..YOU DONT DO A “TBC” RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF “TLC”……COME ON NOW……BRING SOME MORE……IM LIKIN THIS FIC……
this is real good…!
What an incredibly romantic and beautifully written chapter. Please update this weekend.
Mission accomplished arceextl – this chapter and the whole story is definitly HOT and ROMANTIC….and so many other wonderful things :o)) Please post soon…I can’t get enough.
hey rc that was wonderful. i think my monitor melted. loving this story. thanks.
The girls know instinctively that they have just met the person they are to love forever. They are each experiencing that feeling of complete euphoria from being with the one person that blows your mind. WHAT A FEELING!! Love it. Post soon please. Thanks rc for this post.
I’m with ID18, that was incredible.
HOT!! ROMANTIC!! perfect! please please post soon!! keep writing. I’ll be reading.
Like this. It going to be hard to wait for the next posting thanks
Wow, your writing is just so beautiful. I’m really enjoying this story. Thanks!
oh babe that was fucking amazing — you are without a doubt in the B/T forever club of writers. wonderful build up — so you going to set light to the bonfire ?
Ahhh they’re sooo meant for each other!! Beautiful chapter. *Fate slaps Destiny a high five* Hehe
Wow romantic and hot and sweet. Ok let see some more hot coming, thanks!
OK again im ALMOST lost for words i just sooo love the romantic stuff and you do it so well… that was as always amazeing…thanks
hotttttttttttt