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Music to my Ears
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The birds were singing their happy song as the sun shone brightly in the clear blue sky. The air smelled of fresh flowers and cut grass, not a cloud in sight. However, none of that matters since Alice wasn’t there. Instead she was attempting to stay dry as the rain pelted down from the dark grey sky. She cursed her useless umbrella as the raindrops seemed to make a detour around the stretched fabric and back to soak through her pants.
“What’s the point of these?” Alice said to herself as she tried to angle the umbrella just right.
“I think they are suppose to keep you dry” said a soft voice from behind her.
Alice turned quickly to find a meek brunette standing under her own umbrella. “Yeah thanks” Alice said sarcastically as she returned to finding that proper angle. She couldn’t help but let out a sigh of frustration as she felt the rain continue to splash on her.
“It helps to tip it forward slightly” spoke up the brunette.
“I got it. Thanks” replied Alice rather tartly. She was already annoyed that she was forced to stand outside in the pouring rain, she didn’t need someone telling her how to do it. She couldn’t believe the newspaper was making her to stand out here in wet cold rain, especially after all the great stories she had gotten for them. She was the number one reporter for the paper when it came to her particular topic, and yet they decided it was important for her to get this last story, even if it meant her catching a cold or worse…the flu. If she got sick and if she threw up…oh boy was her boss hearing about it!
Alice stood on the corner of the street, opposite the Ritz Hotel downtown London. She held her umbrella with one hand and a notepad in the other. She was here to cover a story on the famous rock band “Sanitizer” featuring the one and only Bette Porter. She shifted on her feet, hoping to prevent some of the water from seeping into her shoes. How long was she suppose to wait out here anyways?
Just then a sneeze behind her brought her out of her own little world of unpleasantries. First she thought of the swarm of germs that must be gliding through the air into her own personal breathing space, and then she thought about where the sneeze came from. She turned slightly to see the meek looking brunette cradling her umbrella in the crook of her elbow while blowing her nose with a little white handkerchief. Now Alice was confused. Here she stood, awaiting the top story that would bring her tons of money, but why was this other person standing here?
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1st brb
liking this please post soon-
Lamentamini that does not count as a brb. So when is Bette gonna send a ticket to Tina so she can come and see her perform? Alice may not be able to get to Bette, but as we know eventually they will end up great friends. Who’s the brunette, Dana?
What doesn’t count as a brb? I tend to read slowly so I don’t lose the meaning. Besides, this isn’t a Chicki story there are no fouls unless Kanaf says so. ;) Damn and I was hoping this was for me, Kanaf. :( I’m all sad and shit. Anyway, “Sanitizer?” LMAO!!!!!! You’d think a band name like that would say Bette knows how to fix a toilet. xD
She should send tickets and a back stage pass. I think the brunette might be Jenny she sounded kind of wierd to me.
A B&T Beginning! Yessssss!!!!!!! I like it! Oh please, continue soon!
Kanaf, happy to see a new story from you. I can already tell this is going to be a good one. Thanks and PPS!!
Lovely start Kanaf! This line especially brought out a chuckle! “Bette felt herself blush a little as she walked towards the toilet and knelt down beside the canister. “So what happens to be the problem here Miss?” Bette said in her most manly voice which set Tina off in a fit of laughter.” That was perfect! Hey Lament, did Coop get a hold of your “foul” whistle? LOL! Please post soon Kanaf.
Excellent and super beginning. Keep writing this one it’s a winner – humor and mystery : )
Great start. This is good and funny, please post soon, thanks!
hurray for new B&T beginning…what was the bet about, btw?
Great start…love the premise. Looking forward to the next post.
What bet could you have made that would require Tina to be a dentist?? LOL. On second thought maybe you better not share that…But we love tales about our girls so bring it on!
I hope that you are going to continue with this story. If you lived near me I would definitely buy you dinner.
very creative spin on B n T, loved the dialogue, very witty. Looking forward to reading more.
Hey you! This is absolutely FANTASTIC!!!! I can’t believe how great you are at this! This is… unusual, witty, intriguing, very funny indeed (the part between B&T is just priceless and hilarious!), and extremely promising! I’m stunned at what you’ve done with the very first chapter! Alice is just so Alice! I can only presume that the mysterious brunette is Dana? This is gonna be so much fun! I shouldn’t be surprised with how talented you are at this, but I’m still taken aback by this first chapter. And by the way, I’m so glad you’re back! I was totally going through Kanaf withdrawal myself! ;) Thanks!
“I might not touch it, but I can always look” : Hahahaha ! This was absolutely hilarious, Kanaf. I mean, actually the whole chapter was screemingly funny, but I just couldn’t help but laugh my a.. off at that comment. In fact, you know, I think people shouldn’t be allowed to read fanfic at work. It can get quite embarrassing, I’m telling you ! I just made a fool out of myself by giggling like a mad thing. On a more serious note ( just kidding ), I must say you are pulling “this” off beautifully… So far ( evil grin ). As as matter of fact, I’m positive no one would have noticed the “challenge” if you hadn’t mentioned it. Mind you, not that I’m surprised… Just another proof of how talented you are, K.By the way, random comment : this Tina seems adorable !! I’m already enjoying this story soooo much; Can you picture Homer Simpson thinking about Donuts ? Well, this is not remotely close to how excited I am at the idea of reading your next chapter. I Love this !
Kanaf, I love this new take on B&T. Tina as a dentist is surely different. I hope the mysterious women is Dana, if not at least Helena.
mmmmmmmmmmm wish t was my dentist…