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Moving On Chapter 15
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Confusion enveloped Bettes mind. A part of her didnt want to leave Tina, wanting to see where their conversation wouldve led; whether they had still maintained their soulful bond for all these years. Even with just the short period of time they had spent together that day, Tina still made Bette feel things, like no one else ever could..but their relationship had had its chance..and it was complicated..they didnt even know each other anymore, did they??
Bettes life with Kristie was happy, loving and simple. The other part of Bette desperately wanted to take Kristie home and lovingly reassure her all night of that fact. Kristie had been the woman who convinced Bette to believe in love and happiness again, at a time in her life when she had given up hope of that ever happening.
But was Bette in love with Kristie? Sure she loved her, but she had never once admitted to herself, or anyone for that matter that she was in love. Maybe she was??. She never really thought about it till now.
Bette was torn, but right now she knew that Kristie really needed her.
Bette: Thank you for meeting with me Tina.Ill speak with you soon? giving Tina a weak smile before returning to Kristie and Jack.
Bette grabbed Jack out of Kristie arms, putting him down on the path, Go and say good bye to Tina sweetie! Were going home!
Tina knelt down and Jack hastily walked over giving Tina a hug, Bye, Bye, Teena!
Tina kissed Jack on the cheek, (smiling) See ya soon, kiddo(whispering in his ear) Im sooooooooo glad I met you today, Jack.
Tina put Jack back down and he went running back to his mom, grabbing her around the leg.
Bette took one last look at Tina, waving her hand, then walked out of the park with one reassuring arm around Kristies waist, the other holding Jacks hand.
Bette and her family headed home and Tina was left standing in the park, alone. She didnt know whether to laugh.. or to cry. She was so elated that she had a son but sadly Tina wanted it all, she wanted her family..it wasnt hers to take anymore, though..she resigned to the fact that no matter how hard it was, she was going to have to get used to Kristie and Bette together, if she wanted to see her son.And the one thing..probably the only thing, that Tina was absolutely certain about, was that she wanted to get to know that little boy!!
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Awww man! Cliffhanger! Come on please please please give us another one! Make Bette be honest about her love for Tina (sorry Kristie)
damn it another cliffhanger.
You have got to update again really soon or I’ll explode.
my dear mates….out hearts can’t take this….u must continue this tonight….please?…..i will beg if i have to….. **grins**
Is it possible for this story to get better and better chapter after chapter? Survey says…Yes. Freaking good Mates, more, more, more.
Oh come on! You can’t leave us sleeping with this cliffhanger in your heads? Sleep deprivation is not good for the body? Please……I am begging you! Thanks for posting…that chapter was the best!
You handled this really well. I’m so happy Tina has little Jack..
Dr. Hunter should be coming to town. Maybe thing will work out for her and Tina/ The only way that Bette will leave Kristie ,is for Kristie to leave. Dont see that happening thanks
Mates Honey how about I tape the tennis for you while you write and post how does that sound? Please another is needed A.S.A.P. So Let me know about the taping of the tennis
This story is simply getting better and better. An do enjoy the Australien open in tennins. It is afterall only 4 times a year there is a Grandslam. Made the best women win. Post soon
Great story, and each chapter just keeps us coming back for more. Thanks for moving it right along, for the most part. Tina is still Bette’s wife. She should look at it that way. So, if she doesn’t give Tina another chance, then she’s still going outside the relationship. Since, they never officially ended it. I know, just wishful thinking, but you got to give me credit for trying, right?! Please update soon, and keep the honesty going!
I don’t know who the Jerk is who is lowering the scores but that’s ridiculous especially on this story. Mates you’re doing an awesome job I love how you are telling this story please post again soon. I LOVE IT
Love your story and writing,you rock.
mates nice work as alaways… bust come on let bette confess her tru feelings now… :)
ok, bette is doing really good being honest, so let her being honest once more… it’s clear to kristie that bette still loves tina, and that the is such a strong connection that nothing, even 5 years had being able to broke it up, so… let’s bette being honest and tell kristie that some part of her wants tina
hmm.. i guess every writers here have mastered the art of leaving the readers cliffhangin’ eh? You sure did get me hooked. K.. looking forward to the next one.
Hi Mates, You sure know how to leave us hanging, brilliant chapter has always.
love this story mates,and i know how hard it is to read and watch the tennis(im in NSW) and read, let alone write! youve done good . and anyway its all a leisure thing ENJOY!!
OK I’ll be patient…but these cliffhangers are going to kill me! Awesome story!!!
SUPERB! Beautiful story…i love it.
Please let Bette be honest to Kristie about her feelings for Tina and the bye bye Kristie.Great story.
Hey, where’s the next chp?!? I’m getting withdrawal systoms over here :) I keep refreshing the page, waiting for the next update. I think i need professional help :P Seriously, great job!!
Jack has FOUR mommies – and TWO of them are doctors!
Oh man this is hard for Bette and what are she going to do to answer Kristie the question. Hope she willl find the right answer! Oh is that Dr. Hunter coming. Please post soon, thank you!